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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing story...
Loved it sooo much...
Read all the parts in one go...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i want an update ...all on maaneet 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the update... 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update, keep it up dear;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oyeee...Update na DQ... jiska intezzar tha, woh mil gaya na..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sangi1588

Oyeee...Update na DQ... jiska intezzar tha, woh mil gaya na..😳

Mil toh gaya Doc par woh.. You know am confused with the sequence.. will post it shortly😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shika--

Mil toh gaya Doc par woh.. You know am confused with the sequence.. will post it shortly😃


😭 Post the update NOW😈
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Posted: 13 years ago

I know I hardly comment but that is because I know that you know what my thoughts are about it all. Anyway this time I want to comment . . .

Now you do know I love Prem. He is absolutely adorable and in every way likable. He is a charmer and yet a true friend. Talk about friends, people may have many but only a handful of them are in every sense of the word "A friend". Someone you can count on anytime and for anything (here gender matters!) Geet for one is blissfully lucky to have a friend like Prem. Not everyone bothers to think about others. How many people would ruin their own fun and run after a friend when she is upset. Only someone who truly cares would do that. And Prem cared for her despite the ignorance or whatever Geet sported. She wasn't all friendly types with him yet he cared. Now that's a real man. I can without a second thought say or rather claim, that if need be Prem wouldn't hesitate to give up every happiness of his for Geet's sake. And kudos to you for creating such a lovable character! He has a golden heart, and is emotional but he thinks rationally . . . Perfect package. He was smart enough to catch on the slight things which Geet never pondered over cause of her sweet innocence and naivety. He was there for Geet when she had no one; he was there when she desperately needed a friend though she never admitted it. He brought her out of her shell, something which even Maan couldn't do . . . rather never tried to do (Certainly he wanted Geet all for him though he was foolishly oblivious of this simple fact) For Maan Geet was just perfect the way she was. To fill in the cracks in her personality . . . which were a direct result of a heart break, it was very much needed that Geet changed a tad bit and Prem aided her with that. On the inside she would always remain the same person but with a few extra much called for qualities and among them all her confidence the most important . . . It transformed her into an independent woman.

Now I do realise some of the people may find this update not so' What' readable cause apparently M G aren't there. But a story woven around just two characters will definitely lack soul . . . it would be just a blank baseless group of words with no substance whatsoever . Yes the protagonist (NOT Maan . . . It would be Geet) is to be given more footage if that would be the right word but that doesn't make the other major characters any less important and in this case certainly Prem is a very important character in this story and without him the story would be invariably incomplete. He was instrumental in making Geet come through the heartbreak. He is Geet's best friend . . . may be even better than what Maan was. So his POV was very much needed. And now coming to giving Maan more space in the updates, well he is also a major character in the story and his POV will come when the author feels it should. Besides, the story is from Geet's perspective and she has been given the due what' space in the updates so that shouldn't be the issue anyway. This update was very much needed and is absolutely fitting. There are whole lot of subtle hints in there, if anyone can catch on them.

Lastly, Prem's life is connected to Geet and hence he has every god damn right to step in if he feels his friend needs him. No matter she asks for it or not.

And Di I loved the update and love you more *Hugs*

Edited by 7thHeaven - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

I know I hardly comment but that is because I know that you know what my thoughts are about it all. Anyway this time I want to comment . . .

Now you do know I love Prem. He is absolutely adorable and in every way likable. He is a charmer and yet a true friend. Talk about friends, people may have many but only a handful of them are in every sense of the word "A friend". Someone you can count on anytime and for anything (here gender matters!) Geet for one is blissfully lucky to have a friend like Prem. Not everyone bothers to think about others. How many people would ruin their own fun and run after a friend when she is upset. Only someone who truly cares would do that. And Prem cared for her despite the ignorance or whatever Geet sported. She wasn't all friendly types with him yet he cared. Now that's a real man. I can without a second thought say or rather claim, that if need be Prem wouldn't hesitate to give up every happiness of his for Geet's sake. And kudos to you for creating such a lovable character! He has a golden heart, and is emotional but he thinks rationally . . . Perfect package. He was smart enough to catch on the slight things which Geet never pondered over cause of her sweet innocence and naivety. He was there for Geet when she had no one; he was there when she desperately needed a friend though she never admitted it. He brought her out of her shell, something which even Maan couldn't do . . . rather never tried to do (Certainly he wanted Geet all for him though he was foolishly oblivious of this simple fact) For Maan Geet was just perfect the way she was. To fill in the cracks in her personality . . . which were a direct result of a heart break, it was very much needed that Geet changed a tad bit and Prem aided her with that. On the inside she would always remain the same person but with a few extra much called for qualities and among them all her confidence the most important . . . It transformed her into an independent woman.

Now I do realise some of the people may find this update not so' What' readable cause apparently M G aren't there. But a story woven around just two characters will definitely lack soul . . . it would be just a blank baseless group of words with no substance whatsoever . Yes the protagonist (NOT Maan . . . It would be Geet) is to be given more footage if that would be the right word but that doesn't make the other major characters any less important and in this case certainly Prem is a very important character in this story and without him the story would be invariably incomplete. He was instrumental in making Geet come through the heartbreak. He is Geet's best friend . . . may be even better than what Maan was. So his POV was very much needed. And now coming to giving Maan more space in the updates, well he is also a major character in the story and his POV will come when the author feels it should. Besides, the story is from Geet's perspective and she has been given the due what' space in the updates so that shouldn't be the issue anyway. This update was very much needed and is absolutely fitting. There are whole lot of subtle hints in there, if anyone can catch on them.

Lastly, Prem's life is connected to Geet and hence he has every god damn right to step in if he feels his friend needs him. No matter she asks for it or not.

And Di I loved the update and love you more *Hugs*


Perfectly put. I don't think anyone can add more to it, say anything that has not been already said or say something entirely new without going off on a tangent.


Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
why always so very less of maan...nd even nothing...i cn count how many lines he had in this ff...hehe...😃

prem is really cute...😊

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