ArSh/KaSh OS- new OS on pg 48

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Neha

@Neha_J

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

😲

That was simply wow...i honestly dont have words to express, i'll just say that they way u described Shilpa's emotions, her past and most importantly the way Armaan gives a new direction to her life is simply beautiful and flawless...

P.S Did i ever tell you i'm in luv with u [not in that sense] and your writing ...<3

P.S.S I just made a blog have pm'ed you the link if times permits do chk it out and share your views, suggestions

take care,

luv,

neha [shona]

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Minaal

@minaalM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

yayyy i got a gift today

thank you sis, going to read it 😃

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nightstar

@nightstar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Thankq thankq thankq first of all for managing to write this amidst such a tight schedule...

Well, if say, this is what i wanted, it will be wrong..cz u gave me more than what i even imagined ...i swear i was living the story...armaan was a sweet heart..."Knight in shining armor", "guardian angel" or "angel in disguise"-u name it and he was it all...I was in awe of his character...

I was marvelled at the ease with which u put frward shilpa's side of the tragedy...Her pain, her fear..I loved the scene when she says she doesnt like to be touched...I loved how armaan responded...I love the airport scene...how armaan refrained himself from accompanying shilpa so that she learns to fight her own battle...

But, what left me speechless and took my breath away was the scene at the exhibition...when armaan cums from the bak...OMG!!!it was a treat..so simple, so subtle yet so powerful...I could easily the emotions, the pain, the feeling while reading between the lines...it was awesome...Thankq for the piece...it was totally worth the wait...

Edited by SabzKaShGrAnd - 13 years ago

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Minaal

@minaalM

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

that was sooo touching, 😍

hats off amani sis, no doubts you wrote it perfectly, you grab the concept so well and pen down even more brilliantly

i really enjoyed reading it, this was really a refreshing start of my weekend.

i'm really impressed you fitted that concept in an OS, i was wondering the concept might take 2-3 updates to complete. but you proved again you are a brilliant writer. no doubt.

last but not least, thank you for writing down such an amazing OS. 😊

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

amazin os totally luvd it x

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

I cannot tell you how amazingly wonderful that was and your last OS. I usually don't tend to read one shots cuz they leave me craving for more of which I know there will be none. But...I'm so glad I decided to read yours. It's like a whole meal stuffed in one bite. Just outstanding. The way you write is phenomenal and the emotions come through so well that I could actually be watching these scenes. ArSh are really potrayed at their very best.

Thank you so much for adding another great piece of work that I know I won't forget.
Take care and love,
Simran

P.S. I really think you should consider a career in writing :D