SS ON MAAN's MEMORY LOSS thrd-2/UPDT-16/PG-15 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome jyo!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats for the new thread!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jyo lovely ...u made my sunday more interesting wid ur ss ..love it dear .wen ll u update the next part ..
i m waitinggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: krati5

congrats on the new thread... loved d flow of the story... atlst maan is accepting geet w/o ny doubt




Thanks

Happy Friendship day..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anupm04

Nice update
continue soon



Thanks...

Late but still !!!!! Happy Friendship Day !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemamurali65

jyo lovely ...u made my sunday more interesting wid ur ss ..love it dear .wen ll u update the next part ..

i m waitinggg



Thanks dear... will update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 11



Next Morning

Geet was about to get up but realised that Maan had kept his hand on her waist & looked at him, he was sleeping peacefully moved her hand on his face, by her touch he gotup..


Maan : kya hua and y tears in your eyes?


Geet : Kuch nahi, whispering in his ears kushi ke hai...


Maan : chalo now give a morning kiss jaldi se... have to go on site & you too coming with me.


Geet : ok, breakfast must be ready...

While having breakfast side by side he was working on lappy.

Maan : RD & me going to Pune Munc.Corp. for some site work, i have some instruction, you explain them to the workers.


Geet : ok & what time you will be back???


Maan : Can't say.


Maan dropped her at site, RD was waiting for him, after 10-15 mins. they proceed to Pune.

Worker : Madam, saab ne kuch bola kya???


Geet : Ha ruko she went in cabin & gave him the instructions.


She was feeling bore so thought of taking a round on the site though it was not so easy.

By that time Maan & RD returned from Pune.

RD : Sir i am just going to North end point.


Maan : Ok i will see you there. He was searching for Geet then to find her at North end point of the site.

North End Point.


Maan & RD were surprised to see the changes made by Geet, different from those he instructed.


Maan : Geet yaha bhi changes.


Geet : Maan ha, thode hi the par ab acche hai, now no problem to start with garden.


Maan : par Geet, their argument continue, at last he has to give up.

Later on they returned to site cabin..

RD : Sir, so fast the work is going, MR. Kapur will be happy to see this.


Maan : Yes RD, Mr. Kapur wanted to finish this project within 3-4 months, within one month we have completed a lot.

(UFFFs one month ho gaya & i didn't know)...


Geet : Maan now the prints are perfect no more changes, me feeling hungry,chalo me going to have my lunch & what about you both?


Maan : jab dekho tab khati hi rehti ho, giving her wicked smile.


Geet : Maan (she shouted at him) making a face sat quitely.


RD : Me too feeling hungry, (looking at Geet he said) chalo we both will have lunch, if you don't mind Sir.


RD was well aware of what Maan was thinking... They become good friends & sometimes shares their feelings too.


Maan : Tum bhi Geet se mile ho. Ha, chalo we will sit for lunch together.


RD : what to do now you both are my BOSS.


TRIO laughed and had their lunch.

RD : Sir, you take rest i will take a round.


Maan : Ok...


Geet was busy going through plan & noting down the instructions. As soon as RD left...Maan locked the cabin door & came near to Geet & circling his hands around her & whispers in her ear...thak gayi hona... the moment she took turn, his lips were on her cheek...


Maan : Chalo accha hai khane baad ke kuch to meetha banta hai na, now its your turn to kiss me, holding her more tightly.


Geet : Chodo na.


Maan : Nahi...


Geet : Maan, yeh sahi nahi hai... we are on site...


Maan : Yes, i know that, jaldi Geet nahi to koi aayega.


After yes / no she kissed him on his cheek.


Later on RD came back & trio continue their discussion.


At Night

Maan was standing near window. Geet after finishing her kitchen work came to room, standing near him holding his hand.


Geet : Kya soch rahe ho ?? Is it regarding schedule you are thinking??


Maan : Yes. (Actually he was still thinking of the accident).


Geet : can we go to sleep now...


Maan : yes but on one condition.


Geet : Maan day by day you are becoming more naughty.


Lifting her in his arms moves towards bed, his one hand was below her head, looking at her eyes slowly moving his rght hand from forehead when it came to belly she holds his hands...


Geet : Maan nahi kuch hota hai.


Maan : Geet kya hota hai batao...


Geet no words left hugs him...

Both lost in their Dreamland...


Next update with 2months leap.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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am really happy to see so much positivity in ur SS... i mean the soap is going in a sad phase and thanks a lot for writing such a optimistic one...

awesome update ... so waiting for 2 months leap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely part . 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update...
gud to c maneet happy with each other..
awww leap.. sounds gud.. continue soon

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