UNNAMED RELASIONSHIP part 18 on pg 44 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago

plz PM me when next time u update😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
There another part by diaanle..
AND BEFORE THAT WISH YOU VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR

Part 16

Mr. MAYAK SHARMA..!!!!!!!
A voice frm back comes and mayank enters d room introducing himself to gunjan……with a big smile……)

M. hum hai apke jiju…..n smiles fully…..
( gunjan watch out towards nupur n she nodes her head in yes….a small sweet smile plays on gunjan's smile bt she hides that n again makes a fake angry face…..mayank says nupur n samrat to giv some time alone 2 him n his Sali sahiba…..nupur n samrat goes out of d room)
M. I know apko boht gussa a rha hoga na…..( gunjan makes a cute face of irritating types n mayank again smiles)
G. apko hansi a rhi hai…..pta bhi hai main apse or didi se kitne naraz hu….
M . janta hu tabhi tho main yha aya hu apne Sali sahiba ko mnane…
G . main nhi manne wali main boht gussa hu……ase bhi kya jldi thi ki aap log ne muje nhi bulaya shadi mae……
M . jldi thi gunjan…..hum shadi kr k apne rishte ko sahi naam dena chahte the….
G . matlb?
M . matlb ki nupur is pregnant……….( gunjan gets shok) hum nhi chahte the ki hmare baby ko duneya kabhi kisi galat naam se bulay islea humne hmare rishte ki responsibility lena better smjha….
"( gunjan jst gets silent knowing abt this……she is nt getting hw to react on this)
M . u r a grown up child gunjan…..i hope u understand…..
G . main samjh gae jiju……..dont worry muje aap dono se ab koi shikayt nhi hai……muje apni di pr bharosa hai….. usne job hi kiya hai accha kiya hai….( says with a simple smile. A smile which ensures that she understands there position very well n she is nt at all angry nw)

After an hour nupur n samrat comes back to room and gets surprise watching that jiju Sali is sharing a g8 tune. Gunjan is laughing at mayanks joks an she is giving high figh to him. Mayank hd told evry thing about him that whats his full name, what proffasion he is involved…..his likes n dislikes……abt his n nupur fake lov story n didn't mention abt sheena at ol or that he is already married….he told her only that things which r nessary 4 her to know nothing else. Gunjan ws also happy abt her sis choice.
When nupur comes near to her gunjan hugs her from stomach n gets happy n says……)
G . congo di…….im sooo happy….main masi banne wale hu…….
( at this nupur also gets happy n her eyes gets filled with tears…..she thank to god that gunjan hd understood her……she is nt angry with her. Mayank n samrat also happy watching out such a g8 sene of 2 sisters)

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Posted: 13 years ago
luveddd it
finally u updated
but why soo short????
now u have to write it and update it sooon
plzzz plzz plzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful FF
i just loved the whole story
fantastic FF dear
plz do cont it and add me to ur m list...
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Posted: 13 years ago

itny dino bad update...n such a short one...

now im cros..plss try n update soo...n longer ones..

it was so cute n adorable

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

luveddd it

finally u updated
but why soo short????
now u have to write it and update it sooon
plzzz plzz plzz

its not in my hand..
it depends on koyal
the writer of the ff...
actually.. she was.. quite busy... because.. she was.. in hostel.. she
said.. when ever she will.. be.. free
she will tried to update it...
i am also.. as curious as you are to read the ff.. and updates..
dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY FEEL HAPPY TO READ THE UPDATE AFTER SO LONG TIME...
IT WAS CUTE ...BUT TOO SHORT YAAR...
BUT UPDATE SOON NEXT PART...WAITING FOR IT...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16 is soo awesome love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think we have another incomplete FF on mayur here.
😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
night
Mayank nupur bedroom
Mayank ws sitting on sofa when nupur comes in room...
M. Kuch kehna hai nupur...mayanks says when notice nupur in roaming in room around him frm past 20 min, she also sit near him 3, 4 times bt nt saying anything..
N. Ha..haa...wo..actuly..wo kya hai na..( hesitatingly) wo main keh rhi thi..ki wo
M. (mayank smiles at this) ab wo se agay bol bi do nupur..
N. Aap gussa tho ni kre ge na..(innocently)
M. (smiles) nhi..bolo
N. I wnt to hv ice cream mayank.. (says sweety n mayank gets amaze dat this ws d thing 4 which she ws roaming around 4 abt 20 min..mayank smiles fully)
M. Nupur tum ice cream k lea itna preshan ho rhi thi..pagal...( nupur gets amaze at word pagal..she smiles watching mayank laughing) ek min main abi mangwata hu..
N. Ni wo..actuly freez mae chocolate ice cream nhi hai or muje wo hi khani hai..
M. Wo hi matlab..nupur koi or ice cream khalo na...wo kl kha lena..
N. (lit anger) apko samajh ni ata..mujhe chocolate ice cream hi chahea..( she widens her eye n mayank jst gets lost in her eyes...n they hv a long eye lock.. Mayank breaks it)
M. Ok dra kyu rhi ho...( nupur also makes her eyes to normal n realises wht she jst done nw)
N. Im sory..wo
M. Kya wo...ab chlo...vrna thodi der tk tum ice cream k bina jhansi ki rani ban jao ge...(says sweety n sweet smile comes on nupurs face)
N. Ji..
They go to a ice cream parlor n order 4 two chocolate ice cream..when ice cream comes, nupur hv ice cream sincerly n cutely...her ful attention ws on ice cream n mayank attention ws on her, he ws admiring her beauty n cuteness in his heart...
N. Mayank aapko ice cream nhi khane (mayank ws so lost in her dat nodes his head in no, smilinly.) ok then..( nupur strts hving it bt mayank ws stil nt awake..when she finishes both of them...satisfingly she says to mayank) chale...(n mayank gets back in world)
M. Ha..wo..ek min..main tho apne ice cream..( he watch at bowl..both of them were empty n a flashback comes in her mind dat he said no to nupur that he dont wnt to hv ice cream...he smiles on it..
N. Kya..
M. Ni kuch nhi chlo..( he pays d bill n moves frm there)

In car
N. Sory mayank ice cream k lea ase react kiya, bt
M. Tho kya hua nupur...pregnency mae tho esa hota hi hai...sheena bi ase hi react..( he stops n nupur feel some 1 prick her heart..) wo im sory..
N. Its ok mayank i understand..( with a small smile)

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