OS: Messiah Complex 26 August page 20

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

oh god ayesha not only Pia but all dobriyal sis r mesmerised wid his chram not bad.Is this really OS or FF coz it sound lke FF.Never mind I loved it plz continue😊😊

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

cool first update!!loved it!!waiting eagerly for next part!!thanx 4 pm.

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

A new story and Pia is lost in the fisrst meeting itself. What Misha too with a big crush on Abhay. Oh oh spelling for disaster I would say. And can we have panchi out of the track pls. soon She gets on to my nerves.

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Ninja

@Ninja.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Nice intro n good start! Just loved it <3 All Dhobriyal sisters r falling for Abhay 😉

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Isa_de

@Isa_de

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

good story line...But am confused...

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sweta-mony

@sweta-mony

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Nice concept yar, loved it.

waiting dr, continue soon.

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

gr8 start dr...

i loved it...

pia is already fallen 4 abhay...

cont soon

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Ayshaaa fantastic start.
Poor Abhay... Stuck among so many ladies.. Loved Abhiya meeting..
I can imagine what will happen nw.. Really feeling sad for Abhay

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Awesomeee starting Ayesha 👏 👏

I find it really funny... bechara Abhay... one shot and 2 down... 😆 tin tin dewaane in 1 meeting... poor Abhay... i hope Piya gives him a hard time... looking forward to read more...continue soon dear 😳