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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
oh Naida what you done ☺️☺️ do continue honey your written style Awesoemee i wish see this on the show well wait for next one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Need i say it that i too need 2 b PMed.Plzzz...lurvvveedd everybit...continue plzzz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

Warning: Mature, so read at your own risk 😉😆


OS: A Night of Celebrations


It was Payal and Akash's sangeet and mehndi ceremony.

After six months of courting, Akash finally convinced his mother that Payal was the girl for him. Although his mother had created a fuss at first, upon noticing that Payal wasn't from a wealthy background as she had desired for her son, she eventually came to accept Payal, being bowled over by her sweet nature. She even came to tolerate Khushi, even though the young girl had thought of her as a maid on their initial meeting.

As the Raizada Mansion was swarmed with people, and laughter could be heard from each corner of the massive building, Khushi's musical laughter was the loudest of all. After all her Jiji was finally marrying the man she loved. As the night progressed, the ladies applied henna whilst teasing one another, the men drunk themselves silly and everyone else danced in joy.

While Khushi had her mendhi done up to her elbows, she failed to see a pair of intense eyes watching her from afar. His bedroom eyes trailed over Khushi's slender form, lingering a second longer on her womanly curves. As he watched her every move, he had to fight the powerful urge to swoop Khushi off her feet and take her to some place where he could have his wicked way with her.

There was no denying that Arnav Singh Raizada was attracted to Khushi Kumari Gupta. He had tried to ignore his attraction at first, but the more he ignored it the more powerful it became. Finally accepting that his heart no longer belonged to him, he decided to confront the object of his desires and tell her exactly how he felt about her.

Except she seemed to be hell bent on ignoring him! Over the past few weeks everytime he tried to talk to her alone or so much as came near her, she either avoided him or ran a mile away from him, which frustrated him to no end!


But Arnav Singh Raizada was not a man that gave up easily. Whatever he wanted he got and right now Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta was on his radar!

Once the henna artist had done her job, he silently watched Khushi run around showing the crowd her beautiful patterns. When she realised that her Amma-ji wasn't among the crowd however, Khushi went in search for her, unaware of the tall, muscular and ruggedly handsome man who was following her.

As Khushi walked down the empty hallway towards the kitchen in search of her mother, a sudden gust of wind caused the pallu of her saree to fall off her shoulders, revealing her figure hugging and rather revealing blouse.


For a moment she stood there at loss. How could she fix her pallu without ruining her mehndi?

Suddenly she felt a strong masculine hand grab her by the waist while the other hand covered her mouth! She struggled against the strong hold and muttered a string of profanities against the hand covering her mouth.


"Shhh, it's me Khushi" whispered a very familiar husky voice against her ear, before placing a soothing kiss against her neck. Khushi stilled her movements instantly as pleasure shot down her very core. It seemed that her attempt to avoid him had not worked at all, as the ever gorgeous Arnav Singh Raizada had finally caught her. Not a second later, Khushi felt her eyes being covered by a piece of cloth... she then felt herself being trapped between the cold wall and Arnav's broad chest.


"Arnav, what are you doing -"


"Chup bilkul chup... do you have any idea how delectable you look right now..." Arnav whispered against her lips, causing her to shiver at his sinful words.


She then felt Arnav 's lips travel up from the corner of her lips to her right ear, before he began nibbling it. The blindfold covering her eyes heightened her senses and made Arnav's touch feel even more pleasurable.

"You have been avoiding me Khushi" he whispered huskily against her ear, while his finger traced patterns around her navel causing her breath to hitch.


"And now... you need to be punished for it" he continued to say while pushing his hard muscular form against her softer feminine one.



Khushi could only sigh in response as she felt Arnav bring his finger to her left cheek... he then slowly trailed his finger down her cheek... down her neck... trailing across her collarbone... and down to the knot at the front of her blouse. She then felt the finger dip into her cleavage and curl around the knot that was holding her blouse together.


"Arnav" she tried to say again, but it came out as a mere whisper.

" Shhh... are you ready for this Khushi?" He continued in that deep baritone of his.


But Khushi could not think straight. She had an overwhelming urge to grab hold of Arnav, trail her fingers across his smooth hair, and caress the strong muscular arms that kept her against the wall. But she couldn't as her hands were covered in mehndi.


Arnav however knew he had her cornered now and decided to take full advantage of this. Khushi felt him smirk against her cheek, before he slowly trailed his lips down the same path as his finger did just a few seconds ago.


Khushi was practically shivering in his arms, whilst mumbling a string of nonsensical words.


She heard him let out a groan, as she arched her back in pleasure, while he trailled kisses across her collarbone, causing her chest to come in contact with his own.


Then she waited in anticipation, as Arnav placed the final kiss on the bare skin just above the knot on her blouse.


She then felt her body quiver as Arnav undid the knot with his teeth...

The rest I leave up to your imagination 😉😛😆

oh its tooo hot to handle. I feel like ... . srry cant say here. gotta get a hold of my Arnav i guess
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
As a fan of some B&Ms I say you are an excellent writer. Loved both parts, hope you bring us more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

I absolutely love your one shots!
Do you pm people when u update because if you do please pm me!
I loved both of them how arnav is and the things he does
definately write more please
you are very talented!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Again all i can say is continue soon ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
I normally don't read FFs/Oneshots much...but the 'M&B style' in your title caught my eye, and I couldn't resist. 😆
Your writing is awesome, and is visually descriptive! ☺️ You wrote out the seductive and mature elements very well, without going overboard. I loved both the oneshots! ☺️ Too hot for words really...
Please do continue writing more M&B style oneshots on ArHi. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

amazing...but I have trouble imagining things on my own...please update more !😆




if i go anymore descriptive than that... then i'm going to get banned 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

I love how you so readily feed our behoodaness with these OSs...love it!!! Looking forward to more!!



what can i say... i feel great joy and pleasure in spreading my behoodiness 😉🤣

thanks so much 😃

PS: i'm sure you noticed by now, that i'm actually re-posting all of my maaneet works here 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: kiran255

OMG 🤪


first part was just a trailer which got me nuts ,this was a whole movie !

OMg i was like "speechless literally "

hard to imagine both of trhem doing that
wooo what a Nani
i wnt one like that :P
heehehheheh

u know the dialogue of ur this story suits u so much with little alternation :P

Damn this sexy beast of a man, said a voice in Khushi's head. It seems Arnav had the art of seduction down to perfection, whether it be through his voice, lips, hands or eyes!


Damn this sexy beauty of a woman, said a voice in my head. It seems YOU had the art of seduction down to perfection, whether it be through ur display pic, ur writing and the the way u make ur readeers imagine :P


Great job !



BTw i so want to see more from u :)



yep the Nani from the recent OS is a behoodi like me 😆

and i loved your dialogue 😳🤣 it was very flattering 😆



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