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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi.rose

When will u update????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part - 6

RECAPE - shashank asked armaan to marry again and he says no'.

Continuing''

Armaan was looking at the sky blankly without any clue '..he saw a shining star glittering and enlightting the dark gloomy sky all alone '.he smiled'

Ar ' its u na shilpa I knw'praying to god for me, I miss u and dsnt need any one nw I m ok with my fortune 'u knw riddam has eyes just like u'.he misses u'.(ad a tear rolled down his face)

But smwher in his heart he knws riddam has his mother with him every sec who loves him more than him actually '..

Next day'

Armaan was quite disturbed coz of shashanks assistant to get married again last night'he was so much broken by his faith till now that he cant really wish for something good in his life''

He just engross him self in work like a machine every time 'it like ages seeing those dimples flashing with giggling sounds in sanjeevni'.said shashank to billy as they were talking on phn'

Billy ' yeahh my poor son is too much broken from inside'

Shanky heard billy's sad voice'.which made shanky felling guilty now'

Sh ' its all bcoz of me I shouldn't pressurizes riddhima to give that much chance to her marriage gar maine armaan ki baat man li hoti toh mere dono bachhe iss tarah ghut ghut ker nahi jee rahe hote'.agar maine kishish ki hoti toh wo dono ajj sath hote aur khush bhi'..

Billy on the other side - yaah shanky jo hona thaw o ho gaya but now we have a chance to make our children's life happy again'.mai riddhima se baat karunga aur tum armaan se..okk I will be in Mumbai 2maro '..

The both father made their made to fight against the destiny for the happiness of the kids..

At nurse station'

Sister lovely screamed with joy seeing riddhima coming with her lil angel '..

Lo ' ooo jee dr. riddhima jee itne din baad apko dekhaa jee I m soo happy jee and ajj chotu dr. armman bhi aaye hai'

Riddhima smiled seeing her excitement '.and riddam was looking at lovely as if he saw a new spices awe my poor baby'.

Lo ' oo jee dr. riddhima jee mai iss lu plzzz

Ri ' ohh sure lovely I dsnt mind but riddu dsnt go to any new person but u cnt try ur luck..

riddhima carefully handled riddam to lovely and she happily took him in her arms , she smiled and turned his face towards her and poor baby firstly looked at lovely ..ohh she looks like his big teddy bear which nanu(shanky) got for him '.he was looking at her with his lil innocent eyes and then she smiled showing her teeth's which made the lil soul scared of her and he starred crying '..

ri ' awe my baby dnt cry'

she took him and he hugged her tightly like she will run leaving him'.

Ri ' dnt worry baby I m nt going any where bas apke pass hu chalo we will go and meet massi hemm lets go'

And she left the place leaving a lil sad lovely behind'.

Every one in the hospital greeted riddhima smiling and tried to touch riddam's cute chubby cheeks on which he hides his face in choke of her neck leaving the disappointed ppls 'every one just wanted to play with him aree bhai he is our lil armaan yaar use cute ho sakta hai iss duniya mai koi naaa but nothing can attract him..

Riddhima reached the caf where he found our gang except armaan and anjali'.anji ws busy sm where and armaan he just stopped coming there he just works and works'

Seeing riddzi they all got a good surprise and a genuine reason to smile '.nikki and muskan ran towards her and hugged her '..

Ni ' awe see humra lil angel bhi aya hai apni mamma ke sath'awe he so cute'

Mu ' yaah ridzi plz plzz let me take him plzz'.

She pleaded ith a cute face'wn ridzi was about to speak anji spoke coming frm behind her'

An ' rehne de mushki our lil angel dsnt let any one touch him except her dear maama..mai kitna try kerti hu ki ek baar meri good mai aajaye but he never cms '..

She sat on one of the chair pouting'.

Ri ' nahi di aisa nahi hai wo abhi he just got scared na iss liye mujhe nahi chor raha 'bas werna he always plays with u at home '.

An ' only if u r sitting next to me'.she again pouted

At ' oh ho forget all this bt why our lil superman got scared injection lag gaya kya use'.

Ri ' noo woo lovely hugged him'

At ' ohh that realy scary I cn understand'.

He said with so much seriousness that all of them bust out laughing'even riddam was laughing but for wt only he knws'..seeing every one laughing atul frowned..

At ' wttt tum mai se kisi ko she didn't hugged na that's why u laughing dnt reminde me our internship day'..gosh it was realy scary '.

Mu ' hyee ridzi chal baith na aut tell me how r u kitn din baad mile hai yaar aur riddu ka dr. kaun hai dekh hum me se koi toh isse injection de nahi payegaa'.

Ri ' dr. aneeta she is a well known child specialist and as u all knw she has joined sanjvni 1 week ago so I got appointment for riddu's vaccination'

Ni ' ohh yaah she iss so good but u knw na after that he will have fever '.

Worries ws written all over ridzi's face'.

Ri ' I knw bt iss needed naa'

All girls wr chating while boys wr tring to get riddam's attention , arul got a chocolate bar and showed it to riddu ,

At ' if u want this u have to cm to ur chachu'

Atul smiled thinking about his victory bt his face fell very soon seeing no response from riddu as he turned his face towards riddhima '.

Atul greeted his teeth "maa ka chamcha" and gave him bar which he happily took making and evil dimple smile'..

At ' I wish I cn see that same smile on ur father's face''

He wished to god'..

Armaan was very much disturbed as shashank again tried to talk to him '.

He was feeing so suffocated so he came on Terrence for some fresh air'

Armaan looked at sky and tears rolled down her face'

Ar ' why god kya apka dil nahi bhara abhi tak '.aur kitna dard dena chahte hai app mujhe wts my fault'.how cn I get married again and live my life happily wn I didn't gave shilpa a single reason to get happy about'she died just to sake of my happiness and mai use bhul kar aage badh jau kaise '..she sacrificed her life for me aur mai mai use do pal ki khushi bhi nahi de paya toh ab mujhe koi haq nahi hai khush hone kaa'how cn I give shilpa's place to any one'how cn I let my son forget who is his mother '..ye meri saja hai and I will live with it'.he broke down and cried his heart out again'

There was so much pain that in his heart that dsnt get decrease even he cries every moment in his heart

In dr. aneets cabin'..

Ridzi went inside as it was her turn '..

Dr aneeta greeted herand riddam with a warm smile which she happily returned back '..

Dr aneeta ' hello dr. riddhima if m nt wrong u wr also a dr. here hai na'

Ri 'yaah'.

While talking Dr aneeta started checking riddam and ridzi was holding his one hand so he didn't cried also '.

Dr aneeta ' but I didn't saw u here '.

Ri ' yaah as u cn see he dsnt leav me for a sec so I just took a long leave

Dr aneeta smiled seeing both mother and son'.till than armaan also came in as anji informed him .

Dr aneeta looked at him with questioning eyes on which he smiled a lil'

Ar ' I m the father'

Dr aneeta ' ohh dr. malik so this lil naughty angel got ur features I must say bt his eyes r just like u riddhima , he is a combo of his mother and father'

Her statement made armaan's that lil smile vanished and he started feeling uneasy but controlled him self '.

Dr aneeta ' okk now time to give injection and riddhima dnt worry okk'

She nervously nodded but in her heart she was hell scared '.

Dr aneeta took her injection and ridzi closed her eyes she was standing next to armaan and in her fear she squeezed his arm tightly on which armaan looked at her but wt he felt even he dsnt knw coz now all the pain which he bears made him numb inside'.and opened wn she heared a loud cry'

They both having tears in their eyes..but armaan ws expert to hide them and riddhima to let them flow'

She hugged riddu and tried to calm him'

Dr aneeta ' awe I must say u both make cute pair and a perfect family'god bless'

Her every word was making armaan more and more restless'.so he just leaved her cabin'

Riddima came to caf'.and till now riddam was quite but still in pain so she just ordered ice cream as he loves them'..

She was just letting him lick it so that it dsnt coz cold to him'

Ri ' my baby , my riddu is my super man and super mans dsnt cry naaa so ab mera baby bilkul nahi royga ok'she kissed his cheeks which made him smile '..

Ri ' aweee my cuti pie'.

Dr aneeta was seeing this and smiling'

She came and sat next to ridzi , seeing her riddam just hid him self in choke of ridz's neck '

Dr aneeta ' awe poor baby scars of me now'..thats the only bad side of my profession

Armaan came with the medicine which was prescribed for riddu'

dr. aneeta - i must say she is a very good mother mr. malik and can bet a best wife too...

this was it for armaan all his pain frustation , anger which he was trying to hid came out with a sudder out burst...

ar - she is nt my wife nor my son mother..okk my wife is dead...



hye guysss i m writting it will finish the part soon..do comment and tell me hows it plzzz

lotts of loveee

link to do lafzo mai

part -7



Edited by LilApple - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. Just Loved it..Awiee Riddhan is just too cute...Aur bhi kyun na...after all he is Lil Armaan na...ab cute toh hona hu hai...Apne papa par jo gaya hai...Love his cute antics with Atul...Everyone is so much attached to Him. I also love him lots...But feeling so bad for My Armaan...He is suffering from so much pain...Plz bring happiness in his life yar,can't see him in pain now...so Billy and Shanky want to reunite AR...Me to want this only...Waiting to read more so do try to continue soon...Take care

Lots of Love

Gee

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Comment updated on Page 11...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
oh wow... its awsome...
but aww... ammy doesn't want to remaary...
ouch... it hurts...
hope shanky ne ridz ka naam na liya ho...
nahi to ridz ko kaun sambhaalega!!!
oye n thnx for awsome updates...

so i can say that its a love story baby just say yes...

We were both young when I first saw you
I close my eyes
And the flashback starts
I'm standing there
On a balcony in summer air

See the lights
See the party, the ball gowns
I see you make your way through the crowd
And say hello, little did I know

That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles
And my daddy said stay away from Juliet
And I was crying on the staircase
Begging you please don't go, and I said

Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone
I'll be waiting all there's left to do is run
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story baby just say yes

So I sneak out to the garden to see you
We keep quiet 'cause we're dead if they knew
So close your eyes
Escape this town for a little while

'Cause you were Romeo, I was a scarlet letter
And my daddy said stay away from Juliet
But you were everything to me
I was begging you please don't go and I said

Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone
[ From : http://www.elyrics.net/read/t/taylor-swift-lyrics/love-story-lyrics.html ]
I'll be waiting all there's left to do is run
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story baby just say yes

Romeo save me, they try to tell me how to feel
This love is difficult, but it's real
Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess
It's a love story baby just say yes
Oh oh

I got tired of waiting
Wondering if you were ever coming around
My faith in you is fading
When I met you on the outskirts of town, and I said

Romeo save me I've been feeling so alone
I keep waiting for you but you never come
Is this in my head? I don't know what to think
He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring

And said, marry me Juliet
You'll never have to be alone
I love you and that's all I really know
I talked to your dad, go pick out a white dress
It's a love story baby just say yes

Oh, oh, oh, oh
'Cause we were both young when I first saw you



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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
oye how can i forgot you meri jaana???
abi let me read...
fir i promise to give loads of comments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

oye how can i forgot you meri jaana???
abi let me read...
fir i promise to give loads of comments...

will wait where u knwww filhal goinggg okkk my chamak chalooo
take careee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
oye teri ye ff maine full read kar rakhi hai...
and dekh le last comment mera hi hai!!!
chal koi ni maine waapis read karli..
mujhe kuch yaad nahi tha...
poor armaan... he is in so much pain...
and please do show ridzz side of story too...
i am missing that!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsm part.
Superb concept.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Comment updated on Page 12...😃

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