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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wahh waah wa...I just love it yaar...This story contain so much Pain..I myself imagine Armaan and Riddhima's pain..woow yaar you are such a versatile writer...I mean your all FF'S are so different from each other...Muaah to you..Feeling so bad for AR and Shilpa also..The songs used by you are all my fav yaar.Lets see what will happened next...so do try to update soon...Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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i am gona finish this...plzzz give it atry
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DO LAFJO MAI''' part - 4

In a full moon light I girl was sitting in backyard garden of malik mention '..Silver light of moon was dancing on the garden area, her face was shining in that light, and eyes were glittering in happiness.

A small smile playing on her lips, lost in some thoughts staring moon '.entangle in a sauce wala red

Looking just like heavenly beauty''''.

In a full moon night I was sitting in my backyard garden in a big cozy swing'..ohhh I loved this place so much'.in moon light this place really looks beautiful, just like a place any one would have dreamed of'.actually I dreamed about this , my most precious dream'

She closed the book she was reading and looked at its cover'.LOVE STORY'and smiled

Love stories ohh how much I use to love them''.oh that reminds me my love story and that thought broke a smile on my face. Kitna sab badal gaya itne salo mai its almost 4 years when we met''kitna kuch saha humne'..my love story is different cant be tell'..meri prem kahani ko DO LAFJO MAI baya kerna bahut muskil hai''.and she lost in her old memories

Flash back--------------

I was passing from the corridor when I saw shilpa sitting in front of dr. kirti worries were clearly visible on their faces. I was wondering is there any problem, wanted to ask but pager beeped, gosh why all ways it rings on wrong time, but I went to my duties and decided to ask dr. kirti latter.

In evening'..

In dr. kirti's cabin '.mam may i'

Kr ' ohh yaah dr. riddhima plzz come, sit..kuch kaam tha.

Firstly I was lil hesitant but latter I spoke In a slow voice'.

Ra 'wo mam I saw shipa here in the morning is there any problem she is in her 8th month and she looks weaker day by day'.

I looked at dr. kirti for answer, I saw worries again took place on her face'and next second she again made that hittler face.

Kr ' dr. riddhima I dsnt share information's about my patience.

Ri ' but she is my sister dr. I have the right to ask about her.

She stud from her seat..

Kr ' then go and ask her about this'

I was shocked and sure now there is some problem'..that thought scares me to the cores . I ran to armaan's house.

I sotped my car infront of that house.

Going inside that house was very tough for me all the old memories were coming back some beautiful and some harsh both, but both are dear to me coz now only those memories make me fell alive. I controlled my shivering body and tearing eyes..i wiped them and entered the house searching for shilpa as I know armaan was in hospital''I entered inside and the sight horrified me to the cores.

Ri ' shilllpaaa''.

I found her laying on the floor un conscious . I ran to her tried to awake her, but my efforts got failed, I ran to kitchen to get some water'I patted her face and found she is trying to open her eyes, tears roll down my cheeks .

Ri ' shilpa.. baby kya huaa'meri tarf dekho kya hua bachaa..

She looked at me with dizzy eyes and smiled'

Sh ' diii'.tum aa gayi'

Ri ' haan beta kyaaa'tumhari tabiyat kya huaa

I made her sit on sofa'

Sh ' nothing di bas chakker aa gaya tha'

Ri ' shut up shilpa its not good for u tell me whats the problem pllzzz shilpa tell me

I touched her belly and baby kicked from inside'.

Sh ' see di he again kicked'. Pata hai di ye sirf tabhi kick kerta hai jab aap isske pass hoti ho. He loves u soo much di'.

I smiled'.

Ri ' who kerega hii akhir I am his massi' and I also love my aby the most'

Sh ' di'.

She asked in a very slow voice''hemmm bolo'.while I was busy making shilpa sit comfortably .

Sh ' di'.ap isski massi nahii iski mom banogi plzzz'..

I smiled'.offcorse massi ma hi toh hoti hai'

She took my hand and placed it on her belly'..i really felt baby moving'

Sh ' nahii diii'app iski asli wali ma banogi plllzzz diii'..

I saw tears in her eyes'.

Ri ' shilpa tell me kya baat hai '

She wiped her tears and made a clam face

Sh ' dii'.there is big complication in my pregnancy '.mai yaha nahi rahungi iska khayl rakhne ke liye plzzz dii'..aap rakhogi na iska khyal'..plzz di..

I was shocked hearing this tears started rolling off''.i looked at her in disbelieve.

Ri ' what u r saying shilpa'.did armaan have any idea about this.

Sh ' noo dii use kuch nahi pata app pllzz use kuch mat kahiye gaa

Ri- shilpa r u gone mad tum itni badi baat use kaise chupa sakti ho.

Sh 'nahi dii plzz wo berdasht nahi paygaa yee plzz di..

Ri ' tumhe kuch nahi hoga shilpa we both will take care of our baby. Ok show me ur reports .

She pointed towards the cupboard '.i took reports from there and started to read'.

I looked at her stunt with what I read .

Ri ' shilpaaa what is this tumhe suru se hi pata tha ye sab, fir bhi tumne'.

Sh 'sorry dii but I really wanted this baby, coz in this 2 years I first time saw armaan happy from his heart . I dsnt want to snatch his happiness from him di'.plzzz

Ri ' aur jab use ye pata chalega tab toh wo bahut khush hoga na shilpaa'stop being a kid shilpa

Sh ' nahi di' apne dekha naa armaan kitna badal gaya hai'wo bahut kam bolta hai, wo muskurata toh hai but uski ankho mai humesha dard najar ata hai jisse wo chupane ki kishis kerta rahta hai'.

This made me felt guilty coz I know I am the region of all his pain.

Sh ' only this baby can give him his happiness , his smile back'.pahle I was so much worried ki mere jane ke baad kya hoga'but I think god ne meri prayers ko accept ker liya , ab mai bilkul naraz nahi hu god se coz unhone apko bej diya hai'.

Sh ' plllzz di promises me ap isski maa banogi di pllzz promiss me'..

I was staring her like a statue having no word just tears rolling down'.

Sh ' dii plzzz''.ahhh'.

She clutches her belly'.

Ri ' shilpaaa'dnt worry mai abhi ambulances bulati hu'tumhe kuch nahi hogaa'.

I was running with shilpa on stretcher'..move move left the place

Sh ' dii pllzz promise me

I looked at her we were in front of opd where dr. kirti was ready

Sh ' rukko plzzz'.di promiss me diii

I took her hand in my palms'. I ''

SH ' promiss me di app meri amant ka khayal rakhogi..jaise maine apki amanat ka rakkha

Ajj mai apko apki amant lauta rahi hu di'..when I will meet god I will thank him for accepting my prayers di'..i will ask him to let the worlds most beautiful love story be completed'apna khyal rakhna'..

I was staring her going inside the opd''tears were rolling down'.was trying to under satand what she want from me'.but one thing was sure I will be there for my lil angel as his god mother'..

link to the next part - 5

Edited by ishka_virani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww...Just love the first instalment...Flashback moment is treat to read...So Shilpa's pregnancy have complication...lets see what will happen next...waiting for more so do continue soon...Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precape - riddhima got to know about the complications in shilpa's pregnancy, she took shilpa to the hospital ''where shilpa asked riddhima to promise that she will take care of her baby and armaan'.

Now continuing''. part - 5

Kitne muskil pal the wo'jab mai armaan se door hui tab bhi itne dard ka ahsas nahi hua jitna ki tab''

(some tears rolled down from her deep green eyes remembering that time'.)

Kash us din ko mai apni jindagi se mita sakti per ye bhi sach hai'.jindgi mai bitaye hue khushi ke pal toh bhulaye ja sakte hai but un dard bhare lamho ke nishan mitna namumkin hota hai''.

Flashback -

I was standing outside the OT waiting for doc kirti to come'..she came running'.dr. kirti plzz tell me how's she pllz save her plz mam'..plz save both of them''.

Dr. k ' see dr. riddhima app khud ek doctor hai a app sab janti hai'.i promise I will try my best but u know she had major complications ''(she took a pause and then..)'.i know apke mushkil wakt hai b tab sab bhagwan ke hi hanth mai 'ap plz dr. armaan ko inform ker dijiye'.

Mai armaan ko call'.kya bolungi use'.iss khayal se hi meri rooh tak kaap rahi thi kaise dekh paungi mai use uss halat mai jab use sach ka pata chalega'.per mujhe use batna hi parega mere pass wakt nahi hai aur , mujhe himat kerni paregi'.wiping my tears I dialed his no. by shaking hand'..

Ar ' halooo kaun..

I was able to speak my words were stuck in my throat'..tears were uncontrollable for me now'.

Ar - riddhima kyaaa huaaa plzz bolo kya hua'..i know tum hi ho ye mai aaj bhi tumhari khamoshi padh sakta hu''.

I collected all my strength and tried to speak''but couldn't stop stammering'

Ri - arrrmaaan''wo shilpaaa

Only that much I ws able to speak'.

Ar - wttt kya hua shilpa kook aha hai woo' bolo riddhimaaa plzzz

Ri - woo OT mai ''.

He cut the call'.

He came running towards OT '.i saw him talking to other doc about shilpa's conditions and the complications'..

He was shattered when he got truth'.he was standing all numb there no expression on his face'.but I know how much pain he was bearing in his heart'.he sat on the floor with a thud sound , holding his head in his palms '.tears were flowing out'..i wanted to hug him tightly and let him cry his heart out '

But meri kismet ne ye haq bhi cheen liya mujh se mere samne wo bikhar gaya aur mai bas use dekh rahi thi''.

Not able to control my emotions' I ran from there '.sitting in fire escape , I cried as loud as I can'.

Why god why''kyu use itni saja de rahe hoo kyuuu''.plzzz use itna dard mat do plzz''

I turned to my next just to check my angel who was sleeping peacefully'..I gigled seeing him sleeping like this '..i never under stood what he get from my rupatta '..He dsnt sleep until his face is covered by my rupatta'..he looks dam cute with those dimples ''I kissed his temple and he smiled in his sleep'..

I looked at the sky trying to search any shooting star ''.but didn't found any of them''

It remind me again of that time when we lost shilpa'..just thought of that time gave me pinch in my heart''mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai uske akhiri lafj jinhe mai ajj tak samjh nahi payi''

Flashback '

Sh ' di'..

She was breathing really heavy I can she she dsnt have any strength to speak '..

Ri - yaah baby'

I touched her cheeks'.

Sh ' dii pata hai I was really angry with god ji'..but ab nahi now I am happy unhone meri wish puri ker di'.pata hai maine tootte hue tare se wish mangi thi'"ki I want to blv in true love '.wo kahte haina pyar agar sachha ho toh sari kaynat use apse milane mai jut jaati hai"'.unhone mere blv ko tootne nahi diya'..pata hai mai na world ki greatest love story ka part hu'..

She smile in pain'..

And my tears rolled down coz I dnt understud what she ment by it'.

Sh - promise me di ap apne baby ka haan di wo apka baby hai uska khayal rakhengi aur'.

She hold my hand '..

Sh - di mai ajj apki amant apko lauta rahi hu '.i know ap uska khayal rakhengi'us per sirf apka haq hai di'..

She put something in my fist and closed her eyes for forever'..

That moment I felt like every thing vanished ab kuch nahi bachha '..but next moment nurse gave a little angel in my hands'.. he was sleeping calmly unaware of the truth '.he snuggled himself in me'.and that moment I felt like a mother who just gave birth to her baby and first time holding her lil life..which feels safest in his mothers warmth''.

I promised my self'..i will never let any thing in this hurt my angel''

It was around a month after shilpa passed away''. Armaan was in deep sorrow'.he engrossed him self in work ''he used to do 24 hours duty''and baby was with me''meri duniya toh un nannhe kadmo kea ne badal si gayi thi'..pura din bas uska khyal rakhne mai hi beet jata '.acutlly meri duniya bahut choti ho gayi thi'.itni choti ki meri goodh mai sama jati''I smiled seeing him holding my ruptta'

20/1/2012'..i remember that day armaan first time come to gupta mention to meet his son yahh'..RIDDAM''yahi naam socha tha shilpa ne uska'.. after that armaan use to come daily to meet him''my sweetu is really cute o one can resist him'.even his not want to smile dad''use to smile seeing him ''

Papa and mom were very much worried about armaan and riddam'''they dsnt want armaan to loss his sons babyhood days and riddam he dsnt let any one touch him if I am not there even nt armaan

Wo roo roo ker pura ghar ser per utha leta agar mai jara si der ke liye uske paas na rahu'.my daily rutteen was according to his sleeping times''even in sleep he get to know I am nt there'and wake with a jerk and cry , so I use to cover his face with my ruptta'wich I dnt know how make him feel good and he sleeps with a dimple smile''.

In evening as usual armaan came and was playing with riddhu'..i was sitting on sofa seeing father son duooo''.in every 5 mins riddhu use to turned to me , and when he sees me sitting there he again start playing with armaan'..this made me giggle a lil bt I hide it some how so that armaan cnt see that I am laughing on him'.

But there was some one who saw this'..

All of sudden riddhu stared crying loud'.i cnt forget that scared + confused face armaan made'.now I could control so I giggled on which he pouted'.

I took riddhu in my arms and he hugged me tightyly''awww my baby was hungry'.

Ri ' mai isse ander le ker ja rahi hu he is hungry'

Armaan nodded and I left'..

After 30 mins when I came bake saw papa and mom talking to araan and they all were looking very serious , I stopped to know wts the matter''.

Shanky ' armaan jo mai keh raha hu wo sab ke liye sahi hai beta''

Ek baar iss per sochna jarur''

Armaan was seems in deep thought and then suddenly he stud up'

Ar - nahi sir jo ap chahte hai wo mai nahi ker sakta'..mai dobara shadi nahi ker sakta'

I cnt sir '..i cnt'..

And he left the place''..


do tell me hows itsss plzzz

yaah no pms till i finish this😳

link of partt - 6 (nt posted yet)

Edited by ishka_virani - 13 years ago
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Woww Finally tumne apna Promise Pura kiya...Just love the part...Awireee So Shilpa is dead...Feeling bad for her...She is really a sweetheart...Love the way Ridzy took care of Riddam...All the pics are awesome specially Armaan with baby...Awiee,too adorable...Lets see Armaan Re-marriage ke liye manta hai ya nahi...waiting for more so do try to continue soon... Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Res


Kitne res karogi?😲

SARE EK SATH POST NAHI KAL RI
IT WILL LEAD A MESS ITNA LAMBA MAI KHUD NA PADHU SACHI TOH LIKE THIS PARTSS...MOMMY
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Originally posted by: ishka_virani

SARE EK SATH POST NAHI KAL RI

IT WILL LEAD A MESS ITNA LAMBA MAI KHUD NA PADHU SACHI TOH LIKE THIS PARTSS...MOMMY


ohhh

Like that
ok jee

will wait for next😳

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