~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: YusLiz

HOT HOT HOT!!!!! next update should hv a +21 only 😉



I TOTALLY AGREE WITH U😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome and hottt update. omg maan is not going to leave any chance to make out with geet. 😆😆😆😆😳😳😳. last scene was 😳😳😳😳. howww romantic making up. maan really knows how to get geet's yes to any thing😉😉😉😉😉
precap is interesting. pls continue. hayeee yaar only one update today. not fair nadiya. during my study session i look for ur update. and pls pls one more update steamyyy too😊😉😉

thanks for hot and steamy update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic



I KNOW THEY DIDN'T SLEEP TOGETHER YET...BUT WITH MAAN'S NAUGHTINESS...U NEVER KNEW WHAT HE HAS IN MIND..BUT YEAH SHAYAD SHAADI SE PHELE YEH THIK NAHI HOGA..OTHER FORMS OF LOVE WOULD BE ACCEPTABLE BESIDES THE BIG INTIMATE SEX🤬...😆😆😆 OKAY SO TOM..DBL UPDATE??? IF POSSIBLE!!😃 AND DON'T WORRY I DON'T HAVE A HEART ATTACK AND NOR AM I PLANNING ON GIVING U ONE...CAUSE I WOULD NEVER MIND..AFTER IT'S A FF..NOT REAL LIFE..AUR WAISE BHI..IMAGINATION MEIN SUB KUCH CHALTA HAI BOSS😆😆😆



I will write continuation of this scene to clear people's head...and then shower scene..I will make it a double update..and the Shimla one will follow...do you remember my dream shock of Mera Maan Sirf Mera Hain?..well you will get a shock and faint...and no it will not be a dream...😆

Man you lot have become demanding😆...I should be happy as this FF has got a good response,,,😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi-Maan



I will write continuation of this scene to clear people's head...and then shower scene..I will make it a double update..and the Shimla one will follow...do you remember my dream shock of Mera Maan Sirf Mera Hain?..well you will get a shock and faint...and no it will not be a dream...😆

Man you lot have become demanding😆...I should be happy as this FF has got a good response,,,😃



NAADIA U SHOULD WRITE THE FF HOW U WANT TO..IF U WANT TO ADD SOME PG-13 SCENES IN IT..SO BE IT..THE PEOPLE WHO DON'T LIKE IT..OR R UNDERAGE..CAN SUCK IT UP👍🏼 AND WHAT😲 A SHOCK..PLZ DON'T DO THAT...I WANT THIS TO BE REAL😭 PLZ DON'T DO THAT..LIKE IN MERA MAAN😭😭 IF I SOUND DEMANDING NOW..SO BE IT...DAMIT U CAN'T DO THAT NAADIA😆😆😆 AND YES THIS FF HAS GOTTEN A GOOD RESPONSE..AND WAISE BHI WHY WOULDN'T IT...U R A FANTASTIC WRITER😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys one more update on its way...😳 With +30 sign🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi-Maan

Okay guys one more update on its way...😳 With +30 sign🤣



HELL YEAH...YEH HUYI NA BAAT😆😆😆😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic



NAADIA U SHOULD WRITE THE FF HOW U WANT TO..IF U WANT TO ADD SOME PG-13 SCENES IN IT..SO BE IT..THE PEOPLE WHO DON'T LIKE IT..OR R UNDERAGE..CAN SUCK IT UP👍🏼 AND WHAT😲 A SHOCK..PLZ DON'T DO THAT...I WANT THIS TO BE REAL😭 PLZ DON'T DO THAT..LIKE IN MERA MAAN😭😭 IF I SOUND DEMANDING NOW..SO BE IT...DAMIT U CAN'T DO THAT NAADIA😆😆😆 AND YES THIS FF HAS GOTTEN A GOOD RESPONSE..AND WAISE BHI WHY WOULDN'T IT...U R A FANTASTIC WRITER😃



Nah its not a Mera Maan shock.😆.NO DREAM DON'T WORRY...it will make Maaneet close😳
Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi-Maan



Nah its not a Mera Maan shock..NO DREAM DON'T WORRY...it will make Maaneet close😳


MAANEET CLOSE EH????😲😲😲😲 OKAY I'M READY😃 BUT IT BETTER BE GOOD...VARNA..TUMHARA YEH HAL KAR DUNGI..JK😆😆😆😆😆 U WRITE AS U PLZ😃⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome and hottt update. omg maan is not going to leave any chance to make out with geet. 😳. last scene was 😳. howww romantic making up. maan really knows how to get geet's yes to any thing😉
precap is interesting. pls continue. hayeee yaar only one update today. not fair nadiya. during my study session i look for ur update. and pls pls one more update steamyyy too😊😉😉

thanks for hot and steamy update



Jasraj for you and Maaneetfanatic..here goes...then one update on its way...by the way I need a poem from you please...I read yours in Bekhudi FF..your so talented👏👏👏👏...so one for me now pleaseee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 19

+18 Warning


...she gasped with his touch "Geet you are wet" he said in a whisper. "So?" she whispered back with her eyes closed. He nibbled her ear and whispered. "That means you are ready to sleep with me".


Geet looked into his eyes and pulled away slightly. She looked at her bare shoulders slightly exposed. She pulled her shoulder sleeves up. "Maan this is not right...we can't..I mean we can't...ummhhh". he grabbed her and smoothed her hair. "Make love?" he finished her sentence off. She further felt uncomfortable. "Maan how did you know I was.." She had her clothes on and he hadn't touched her flesh. "I could feel it through your clothes...Geet it is natural to want to make love to the person who you love..I am not careless..ever since we are together I carry these with me" he showed her condoms..she felt really awkward and embarrased.."as I know we love each other so much that..this thing is bound to crop up...If you want we can make love tonight".

She pulled away and sat down. "Maan I am not ready to sleep with you...what am I saying? I mean I will not be ready till we don't marry... we can't do this..like a typical girl I want our wedding night to be special where I will gift you my virginity..if we sleep around already what will be special about our wedding night?". Maan smiled and pulled her up. "Geet your so sweet..teek hain whatever your happy with..as long as I'm getting my kisses and hugs..kaam chala loo ga".

He made her comfortable again by giving her a close hug. She fell on his chest and lovingly placed her head there. After a while he left to go to sleep. Geet lay in her bed thinking of what could have happened. *Babaji ye kya kya khiyaal aa rahe hain muje...I never thought of Maan like that before* She kept fantasising about making love to him. *Ye Maan bi na..in his company I have become like him...he carried condoms? Babaji he thinks of me like that..but Geet if he doesn't think you of like that who will?*

Maan on his bed kept rolling and thinking of his naughtiness. *Ye Geet bi na kitni bholi hain..* He played back what happened and added what he wanted to happen..he made love to her in his mind. *Geet I can't wait till our wedding night..and baby you watch what I do to you then*

Geet was setting the breakfast table and Kumkum and Singhania walked in ready to go somewhere. "Auntyji where you lot going?"

"Geet we have to attend a friends wedding anniversary...so please make sure you look after the house..and yes Maan has gone to the gym and please put a clean towel in his bathroom". Geet went upstairs and went to Maan's room. She began tidying up his clothes that were scattered around his room. *Thanks babaji dusht danav is not here otherwise pir se masti aur shararat shuroo ho jati..iss se pehle DD wapis aai main ye towel rakh ke chali jaati hoon*

She entered his bathroom and put his towel...she went to set his toiletries and came under his shower..Maan's shower had a sensor that if a person was under it..it comes on automatically. The shower came on and Geet was drenched. Her white sari was all wet. Maan walked in and saw the sight that befell of his Geet. She gasped at herself getting wet. She tried looking for the button but there was none. She moved away from the shower and it stopped. She took her pallu off and squeezed it. Maan saw her cleavage and looked away and then could not stop himself from looking again. She turned to squeeze the bottom of her sari and he saw her white sari had become see through. Her bra was showing.

Maan could see perfectly curved figure complimented by the wet sari. He saw her and smirked and looked at her intensely. He felt really turned on by the fact Geet was in his bathroom. He aggressively shut the door and moved towards her...she looked back and saw him and pulled her pallu up. His face was menacing...he came towards her.."Geet what are you doing in my bathroom?" he asked withan arched eyebrow.

"Wo...main..main"..her chest began rising and falling. She moved backwards near the shower sensor. She tried outflanking Maan..he put his huge bicep both side and met her gaze. He sexily undid her bun..her hair fell on her shoulders..he shook her hair to straighten them "Geet tume yaad hain hum pehli baar yaha mile teh?". She nodded her head. "Uss waqt baat kuch aur ti aur aaj tume yaha dekh kar baat kuch aur hain...Geet why do you turn me on?"

"No I don't" she gulped looking at his chest all for HER eyes only. "Yes you do". He moved her back and the shower came on. She clung on to him and both were in a hot hug under the shower. Maan grabbed her hair and began kissing her cheeks, her eyes and then tilted her head down to access her mouth. She stroked his chest and back. He probed with his tongue and then deepened the kiss. She moaned and held his face with passion.

Maan sneaked his hand under to feel her stomach and she flinched. He continued with the French kisses. He pulled off her pallu and massaged her breasts whilst kissing her neck..the water was making the kiss steamy, he placed lots of small kisses on her breasts. He hugged her with her pallu down. His shirtless body and her near enough naked top was making the hug hot. He slid his hand under her choli and snapped her bra open. He felt her breasts all excited by his touch. He pressed on to her and she felt him aroused. He raised her leg and began making fake love. She began kissing and biting his shoulder. She reached his ears "Maan please make love to me..I want to feel you inside me".

Maan felt more aroused that Geet wanted to take their relationship further. He kissed her mouth. "But Geet what about our wedding night?". "Maan I can't take this anymore... I want to know how it feels to...uh"..."Have sex with me?"

"To be loved by you..now where is that condom you carry?"...Maan began laughing. "Geet your crazy..one day I will without the condom..aik baar shaadi hone do pir dekhna". Maan kissed her and told her to not give into the moment of passion.

us ke choone se
naa jaane kya hua
dil mein halchal machi
jism mein toofan utha
naa chahte huye bhi
jism uske sparsh mein
apne aap pighal gaya
jab usne yeh kaha
ke tu mujhse or mein tum se alag nahin
apne aap usko apnane ka mann kiya
par mein jaanti hoon
yeh sahi nahin hain
naa chahte huye bhi
maine inkaar kiya
uske choone se
naa jaane kya hua
dil mein halchal machi
jism mein toofan utha.


Courtesy of Jasraj123

Previous: Part 18
Next: Part 20

Precap; Maaneet in Shimla...with snow😲


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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago

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