~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 55

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic

OMG NAADIA...THAT WAS REALLY REALLY HOT☺️
I'M GLAD U UPDATED THIS...CAUSE I HONESTLY COULDN'T W8 TILL TOM😉 BUT WOW THE BEGINNING...YES U DID CLEAR IT UP THAT GEET WANTS TO WAIT...WHICH IS VERY PROPER OF HER...CAUSE YES SR SPECIAL TO HONAI HI CHAHIYAI SO THE WAIT WOULD BE TOTALLY WORTH IT😉 BUT YEH KYA...MAAN CONDOMS LE KE PHIRTA HAI😆😆 HE IS PREPARED😆😆 AFTER THAT...WHEN THEY BOTH DEPARTED INTO THEIR ROOMS..THEY WERE HAVING NAUGHTY THOUGHTS BOUT EACH OTHER😳 AND MAAN BHI NA...BILKUL DD HAI...KITNA NAUGHTY SOCHTA HAI😆😆😆 THE NEXT DAY...UFFF SHOWER WALA PART..WAS THE BEST..SO MUCH CREATIVITY INTO THAT..HATS OFF TO U👏👏 AUTOMATIC SHOWER😳 I LOVE THAT SHOWER NOW..AND I BET MAAN DOES TOO😛 BUT SERIOUSLY THAT SCENE WAS SENSUAL..SO DIVINE😍 I LOVED IT😊 AUR PHIR😕 YEH GEET KO KYA HUA..MAAN TO PHELE SE HI AROUSED HO JATA HAI😳😳 BUT NOW GEET😆😆 SHE WANTS TO MAKE LOVE NOW😉 WOW GEET..U R BECOMING REALLY BOLD😉 BUT NO REALLY THE WHOLE SHOWER SCENE WAS PORTRAYED REALLY WELL..FROM THE WORDS TO THE EMOTIONS...JUST BEAUTIFUL😆 BUT YES MAAN SAID THE RIGHT THING...THEY SHOULD WAIT...AND LOOKS LIKE THE CONTINUATION OF THIS IN SHIMLA IS GOING TO BE HOT AS WELL..WITH ALL THE SNOW..THEY WILL NEED EACH OTHER TO CUDDLE UP WITH..SINCE ITS GOING TO BE SOOO COLLLDDD😉😉
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Hey read it again I added Jasraj poem...it sooo good😃

Originally posted by: jasraj123

tumne yaad kiya or mein
saath mein kavita laayee
tumhein or tumahare readers ko pakane ke liye
yeh kaafi hoga mujhe baghane ke liye


us ke choone se
naa jaane kya hua
dil mein halchal machi
jism mein toofan utha
naa chahte huye bhi
jism uske sparsh mein
apne aap pighal gaya
jab usne yeh kaha
ke tu mujhse or mein tum se alag nahin
apne aap usko apnane ka mann kiya
par mein jaanti hoon
yeh sahi nahin hain
naa chahte huye bhi
maine inkaar kiya
uske choone se
naa jaane kya hua
dil mein halchal machi
jism mein toofan utha.

Thank you honey🤗 I added it to my update..now I need your input on my Part 19 as you insisted.😆

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

I Love It!! :)
Maan Is Such A Tease!! 😆
Geet Is Going To Have A Hard Time Keeping Them Thoughts Of Hers In Control Around Him...
And Well Maan.. Totally Love Him...
Maan Already Thinking About What He Wants To Do To Her On Their Wedding Night!! 😳😳
Automatic Shower! I'm Loving It...
Naughty Maan Control Yourself ... Bet He's Loving His Shower Now ...
I Nearly Freaked Then For A Minute..
She's Mega Turned On By Him!! 😳😳
Don't Blame Her Really 😆😆
Btw When Are You Updating Mera Maan Sirf Mera Hain...

Missing It Loads...😭😭

Thank you darling..I try my best😆 I don't know when I'm writing all these just come to me..😆

thanku for steamy and hottt update nadiya. bogambo khush hua.
maan really had to hard work to hold his feelings and now when geet is already giving in. omg the shower scene was smoking hot. hayeee automatic shower and upper se maan shirtless and geet see through saari. hayeee i am blushing nadiya. u really knw how to make ur reader heart beat fast.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

but nadiya i really want geet to keep her love for their special night sooo she feel good on her wedding night. when r they going to tell their parents. pre wedding romance is good but not love. u know i am old thinking person.😆 but not that old. sooo don't think i am old😆

thanks alot for taking my request in consideration
pls continue

now these were hot and awesome...i just loved them...ok...me getting late for college...gotta go...continue soon n thnxxx...

awesome ... loved part 19 ...

YUP I REREAD IT..AND THE POEM FIT PERFECTLY...😉

wooow zat was hot