NewFF(Maneet) Mere humsafar Thrd 2 Upd pt26 pg 141 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: knirwal

di superb update mane to socha bi nahi tha ke baad me maaneet ko apne galti ka ehsaas ho jayega vo ve etni jaldi...

ab to eager aur baad gaya next update parne ke lea...
super going...
update is awesome
mindblowing
superb
fantastic...
too much gooddd
cont soon
love u alot
xxx

Thanks Khushi… well aage aage dekho hotha hai kya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome...


geet has decided to know the reason behind his anger n will try to understand him...but y???

maan knows he did wrong but being the MSK...his ego came in between n now he wont apologize...

continue soon...

thnx for PM/...

Jyothi if u recollect the incident where geet had signed the contract she had promised herself that she will change maan…now this incident has made her aware that maan is not that bad as he tries to portray himself… well I never mentioned that Geet will try to find out maan's past no this won't happen . Maan's past will come out in a different way at the right time but yes she will try to make him a better person now whether she will succeed or no that is a million dollar question

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: azee11

awesome update!!!

Good both realize their mistakes
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Keep rocking
Luv
TC
Atiffa

Yes Atiffa this was important both were wrong and it was necessary that they realize this

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

very nice update...kind of clarified their parts...i loved Geet's maturity...I hope she takes care of Maan and makes him realise that you don't stop living or loving for one person...for one mistake

btw i have alreadt nominated your FFs...let's keep the fingers crossed

Di Geet will try to change Maan but will he change and even if he changes will he realize the importance of relationships we will have to wait and watch

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi1022

hey piya its realy nyc one dear n sounds more intrsting plz ad me in ur pm list plz

Sure I will PM u the next time
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nihson

Nice update
I like the way Geet thinks. It shows how understanding she could be.
Continue soon
Thnx for the pm

Yes u r right Geet is an intelligent girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Nice update Piya. Chalo, atleast Geet ko ye to samajhme aa gaya that Maan is not what he potrays himself to be. He is not that bad. And she has to deal with him with love. Waise who is the lady in that photo because of whom Maan hates all women.

Yes u r right Geet has understood that Maan is not the way he tries to portray himself…regarding the person well u will come to know about it at the right time

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

HOLE HOLE HO JAYGA PYAAR... KUCH SE TIME BACHA HAI ...IN DONO KE EK HONE MAI

Well even I hope the same k haule haule pyar ho hi jaaye

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a ton dear friends for your constant encouragement and support.
Well I am sorry for not updating Dil Mil Gaye today but I promise the next update of Dil Mil Gaye would b a big one and full of maneet romance.
Here is the next part of Mere Humsafar I hope u will like it
Love- Piya
PART 19

Geet leaves for office

Maan comes down ' everyone is having breakfast

Dadima: Maan bete kaha jaa rahe hai naashta toh karke jaayiye (Maan where r u going have your breakfast son)

Maan: Nahi Dadi bhook nahi hai aur waise bhi aaj ek important deal ki presentation ki taiyaari karni hai issliye office jaldi jana hoga (no Dadi I m not hungry' I have to work on an important deal n hence need to rush to office)

Maan: Dev tum bhi jaldi se office aa jao (Dev you too reach office immediately)

Dev: Ji Bro

Maan leaves

Dev: Achha Dadi main bhi nikaltha hoon (ok Dadi I m also leaving)

Dev goes to the outhouse and realizes that Geet has already left

Khurana Constructions

Adi: Good Morning Geet ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai? (Good Morning geet so how is your health now?)

Geet: Absolutely fine Adi Sir

Pinky: Oye Geet' tubhi na ek number ki paagal hai'achha khasa bahana mil gaya tha uska fayda uthathi aaram se dho teen din ki chutti le lethi office aane ki kya zaroorat thi (Geet u r seriously mad u should have taken rest for atleast 2-3 days what was the need to come to office)

Geet: Pinky jab meri tabiyaat theek hai toh main bewajah beemari ka bahana kyun karu' aur waise bhi ghar mein baitkar bor hone ke bajaye office ka kuch kaam karna zyaada better hai

Adi: Geet phir bhi ek din toh rest le lethi na' (Geet but still I feel u should have taken rest for one day atleast)

Geet: Chodiye na Adi sir'waise bhi agar uss Dhust Danav ko pata chal gaya ke main beemar hone ka naatak kar rahi hoon toh unhe ek aur bahana mil jaayega mujhe datne k liye (Forget it Adi Sir' if that Dhust Danav comes to know that I am pretending to b sick he will once again start shouting at me)

Adi: Dhust Danav ye kaun hai geet? (Who is this Dhust Danav?)

Geet: Maan sir aur kaun?

Pinky: Oye Geet tu jaanti bhi hain k maan sir ko yaha kis naam se bulathe hai'sab ladkiyaan unhe Dhak dhak kehkar bulathi hai'

Geet: Bulathe honge Dhak Dhak par mere liye toh wo Dhusht Danav hi hai

Adi: huh..huh huh'huh

Maan arrives

He notices the three of them

Maan: Main tum logo ko salary yaha waha ki baate karne k liye nahi detha'aur agar tum logo ko baate karneka itna hi shauk hai toh apne liye ek nayi naukri dhundni shuru kar dho (If I m not mistaken then I pay you'll for doing work and not for chatting business'if you'll r so interested to chat with each other then better start searching for a new job)

Maan apne cabin ki taraf badhtha hai

Maan: Adi aadhe ghante k baad conference room mein ek meeting arrange karna uss naye deal ke baare mein discuss karenge (Adi arrange a meeting in the conference room after half an hour we would b discussing the details of the new project)

Adi: Ji Sir

Maan enters his cabin

Dev arrives

Dev: Are Geet aaj tum khud hi office aa gayi tumne mera wait kyun nahi kiya hum ek saath aa jaate (Geet u should have waited for me what was the need to come to the office all alone)

Geet: Nahi Dev pehle din ki baat alag thi magar ab main khud office aa jaa sakthi hoon'aur waise bhi agar aaj tumhare saath office aati toh phir se late ho jaati aur ek baar phir daat khani padthi (No Dev the situation was different first now I myself can come and go alone and if at all I would have waited for u then once again I would have been late and someone would have got another opportunity to scold me)

Dev: Chalo thik hai jaise tumhari marji (As u wish)

Adi: Dev sir aade ghante k baad meeting hai uss new project k details work out karne hai (There is a meeting after half an hour regarding the new project)

Dev: Thik hai Adi aap log kaam kijiye main abhi aata hoon (ok guys u carry on with your work)

Dev leaves

Geet: hmm' uss dhust danav ke black coffee ka waqt ho gaya hai

Geet enters Maan's cabin

Geet: Maan Sir aapki black coffee' (Sir ur black coffee)

Maan: Hmm' rakh dho

Maan takes a sip

Maan: Geet'tum jaanti nahi ke mere coffee mein mujhe shakar bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai'tumne janbujkar issmein shakar milayi hai haina? (Aren't u aware that I like sugarless coffee'I bet u have done this purposely )

Geet: haan bilkul theek (Yes u r right)

Maan: Kya ek tho galti karti ho aur upar se mere hi muh par ye kehne ki himmat bhi rakthi ho ke tumne ye sab jaanbujkar kiya (First of all u commit a mistake and on top of that u have the guts to tell me that u have done this purposely)

Geet: Ab jab maine ye sach mein jaanbujkar kiya toh main ye baat accept toh zaroor karungi (yes when this is indeed the truth then why will I deny it)

Maan Geet ke kareeb jaata hai

Maan: Oh toh tum mujhse subah ki baat ka badla le rahi ho(O so u r troubling me due to the morning incident)

Geet: Main koi choti bachhi hoon kya jo aise faltu baato mein apna waqt zyaaya karu'aur waise bhi main ghar ki baat office mein nahi laati aur office ki baat ghar par lekar nahi jaati (I m not a small child to waste my time on such silly things'n by the way I like to keep matters of the house n office separate)

Maan: kitna bolti ho' ek seedha saadha sawal puchha k tumne kya sochkar mere coffee mein shakar milayi' magar uska jawab dene ke bajaye yaha waha ki falthu bathe kiye jaa rahi ho (how much do u speak'I asked u a simple question but instead of answering it u r simply talking rubbish)

Geet: Ab babaji ne zabaan bolne k liye hi toh di hai aur zyaadatar insaan isse bolne ke liye hi istamaal karte hai aur wo bhi pyari pyari meethi meethi bathe haan wo alag baath hai ke thode aise bhi namune hai jo isse sirf kisi ko datane ya gussa karne ke liye hi istamal karte hai (As far as I know we usually use our mouth for speaking and that to sweet sweet things 'although it is a different thing that there are many characters in this world who open their mouth just to shout or scream at someone)

Maan: Tumne mujhe namuna kaha (What u called me a character?)

Geet: Hai babaji ye mujhpar ek aur ilzaam laga diya'kya maine aise kaha ke Maan singh khurana ek namuna hai'boliye nahi na toh phir' haan magar ab jab aap khud ye keh rahe hai toh iss baat mein zaroor kuch toh dum hoga aakhirkaar aap BHK hai sorry..sorry mera matlab aap MSK hai aur aap kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakthe ( O god did I say this that Maan Singh Khurana is a character'no na but still if u yourself think in this way then it has to b right after all u r the great BHK..oops I mean MSK and u can never b wrong)

Maan: Tum mere hi muh par meri hi burai kar rahi ho (U r trying to insult me)

Geet: Dekha babaji aaj kal toh bhalayi ka zamana hi nahi raha'ek toh main inka bhala kar rahi thi aur upar se ye mujhi hi ko tanne maar rahe hai (O god I was trying to help him and instead of thanking me he is shouting at me)

Maan: Tum mera kaun sa bhala kar rahi thi zara main bhi toh jaanu (May I also know how were u helping me)

Geet: (looks directly in his eyes) Wo kya hai na Sir mujhe aisa laga k har din ye kadwi coffee peethe peethe aap bhi kahi na kahi iss coffee ki tarah bun gaye ho' bina soche bina samjhe kisi k jazbaat ki kadar kiye bagair jobhi muh mein aata hai wo keh jaate ho'

Geet: Ek baar bhi ye nahi sochthe k uss insaan par kya beeth thi hogi jispar aap bebuniyaad ilzaam lagathe ho'aur agar galti se aapko iss baat ka ehsaas ho jaata hai tab bhi aap itni himmat nahi kar paate ke apni galti accept kar lo'

Geet: Toh maine socha k shayad ye meeti coffee peekar dheere dheere aapki zaban bhi meethi hone lage'

Maan is surprised to hear Geet's words

Geet: Sir'Sir'

Maan: Haan

Geet: Sir waise meeting ki taiyaari ho gayi hai aap apni coffee khatam kijiye tab tak hum sab conference room mein jaakar baith jaathe hai

Geet leaves his cabin

Maan starts drinking the coffee

Conference Room

Geet gets the blueprints and all the important files of the project

Manisha was carrying a jar of water with him... Wo Geet se takra jaata hai and all the documents related to the project gets spoiled

Adi: Manishaji ye aapne kya kar diya'

Just then Maan arrives.

The entire staff is silent

Maan: Geet kya ye usi project ke documents hai? (Geet r these documents related to the same project?)

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan: Inn documents ki jimedaari tumpar thina? (I had given the responsibility of these documents to u right?)

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan: Wah kitne ache se tumne apni zimedaari samali hai I m impressed'. (wow' what a way of handling ur responsibility'I m impressed)

Geet: Sir'wo

Maan: Bus Geet main tumhe yaha kaam karne ke paise detha hoon kaam ko kharab karne ke liye nahi'samjhi tum (Stop Geet'. I pay you for doing work and not for spoiling it)

Adi: Sir iss mein Geet ki koi galti nahi hai (Sir this is not Geet's fault)

Maan: Adi maine tumse koi safai nahi maangi'aur geet maine inn documents ki zimedaari tumko di thi magar lagtha hai tumhara dyaan kahi aur hi tha'waise bhi tum koi kaam thik se kar hi nahi sakthi'nahi dhang ki coffee bana sakthi ho aur naahi office ki koi aur zimeddari utha sakthi ho (Adi I did not ask ur opinion' and geet I had given the responsibility of these documents to u but it seems that u r least interested in ur work' neither can u make a good coffee neither can u handle ur responsibilities )

Geet: Sir main apna kaam bakhubi nibha sakthi hoon'main inn documents ko dubara bana dethi hoon ( Sir I can handle my responsibilities very well I will rectify my mistake )

Maan: Geet ye sunkar achha laga' magar tumhe ye saara kaam aaj hi baitkar khatam karna hoga (Good to hear this but u have to complete this work today itself)

Dev : Bro magar presentation to parso hai' ( but Bro the presentation is day after tomorrow)

Maan: Dev tumhe jaankar khushi hogi k presentation kal hai abhi abhi Mr. Arjun ka call aaya tha unhone request kithi k main presentation prepone kar du aur maine unki baat maan li hai ( Dev Mr. Arjun requested me to keep the presentation tomorrow itself and I have agreed)

Dev: Magar Bro Geet itna saara kaam kaise kar paayegi wo bhi ek din mein ( but Bro how can geet complete such a huge task in a single day)

Maan: Dev tum Geet ki kaabiliyat par shaq kar rahe ho'kyun geet tum kya ye kaam nahi kar paaogi'agar aisa hai toh accept kar lo (Dev u r questioning the ability of geet'right geet but still if u feel u can't handle this then accept it right now)

Geet: Sir kal subah saare documents ready honge'( Sir all the documents would b ready tomorrow)

Maan: Aisa hi hona chahiye Geet'aur haan yaad rahe ye project mere liye kafi important hai aur mujhe iss mamle mein koi bhi laparwahi nahi chahiye tum kuch bhi karo kal subah tak presentation ki saari taiyaariyaan ho jaani chahiye bhale hi iske liye tumhe raat bhar office mein hi kyun na baitna pade ( Remember geet this project is very important for me and I don't want any mistakes' u need to complete all the work today itself)

Dev: Magar Bro

Maan: Dev mujhe kisi ne kaha hai k ghar ki baate office mein aur office ki baate ghar par lekar nahi jaani chahiye'kyun Geet main thik keh raha hoon na (Dev someone told me that u should not take matters of the house in ur office and vice versa right geet?)

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan: Good so get back to work everyone'n yes, Geet ye saara kaam akele hi handle karegi main nahi chahta k koi bhi uski madat kare mera matlab hai usse disturb kare' samjhe aap logh ( Good get back to work everyone and yes geet will do this work all alone no one is going to help her I mean no one is going to disturb her'got it)

Maan gives a wicked smile to Geet. Dev is totally helpless.

Geet enters her cabin and starts working

Maan is observing her through his cabin

Everyone continue with their work

Evening

Adi: Geet I m sorry but main chahkar bhi yaha wait nahi kar saktha (Geet I m sorry I can't help u)

Geet: It's okay Adi sir main samaj sakthi hoon (It's okay Sir I can understand)

Dev arrives

Dev: Geet tum tension mat lo main abhi dadima ko ye baat batatha hoon bro unki baat kabhi nahi tal sakthe (Geet u need not worry I will inform Dadima about this Bro will never go against her)

Geet : Nahi Dev' Maan sir ne pehli baar mujhe koi important kaam saupa hai aur main iss kaam ko pura karna chahti hoon'mujhe apne aap par bharosa hai'tum dadima ko kuch nahi kahoge pls (No Dev it is the first time that Maan Sir has given me some responsibility and I have want to live up to this task on my own strength ' u won't tell Dadima anything about this)

Dev: Thik hai Geet magar kuch bhi problem ho toh mujhe zaroor call karna (Ok Geet but anytime u require any help do call me)

Geet: Ok

Everyone leaves the office

Maan forgets the key of his car and hence comes back

Geet: Babaji aaj ke din toh ek dhang ki chai bhi naseeb nahi hui'

Maan hears this and goes and gets tea for Geet

Maan: Ye lo chai

Geet: Maan Sir aap?

Maan: Haan main bus nikal raha tha k tumhari baate sunli tumhe chai chahiye thina lo pee lo (yes I was about to leave when I heard your self talk u wanted tea na here it is drink it)

Geet takes a sip

Geet: eee'.. ye toh puri kadwi hai bilkul bhi shakar nahi hai ismein

Maan: Haan wo kya hai na tumhe aaj itna saara kaam karna hai... toh main tumhe bus yahi yaad dilana chahtha tha k agar kal k presentation mein kuch bhi galat hua toh tumhare job k liye wo achha nahi hoga'.aur ye kadwi chai tumhe iss baat ki yaad dilathi rahegi

Geet gives a I will kill u look to Maan

Maan suppresses his laughter and is about to leave

Maan: Wo kya hai na Geet har waqt meethi cheez kaam nahi aati kabhi kabhi kadwi cheezo ki aadat bhi daalni zaroori hoti hai'

Saying so Maan goes away

Geet: Dhust danav kahi ke'pure muh ka swad karab kar diya

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