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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

awww...thats such a cute update...hope its pia he meets...

Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago

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rashika aggarwal

@rashika27.1997

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

prem meets piya right !!!

i know ye piya ka hi rebirth hai
thnx for the pm

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

dat was beautiful, truly beautiful,
Ur story is lovely
Abhay slapped prem, he should'nt av..i m reli feeling bad for prem n abhay both
i m hope no one wl harm prem
wl prem meet pia in jungle?
Continue soon n thanx 4 d pm

Luv
Heena

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago

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annie

@abhay4piya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

thnk u sooo much for ur lovely comments n dont worry pia will soon come..😎

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

wow yaar I loved it awesome part dear.Plzz continue.Kya Prem Pia se mila😊

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annie

@abhay4piya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Part 4:
Prem was slapped by abhay.he was angry and running,he stopped at a place...he looked around for a while.. ye mein kahan aa gaya?..he thought...he started to walk..looking here and there..mein kho gaya toh nai...??..he again thought...wht if ye werewolves ki terrotary ho?..mein toh pakka gaya..!!..he thought this with a worried expression..he said,:papa ko pata nai kya masla. hai..??..he slapped me...!!..mein ne toh sirf unki diary hi padhi thi...!!

abhay was angry..he walking in one line again and again...wo apne aap ko samajhta kya hai?..ye sab mein usi k liye to kar raha hon ...mein nai chahta k wo kabhi bhi apni family ko incomplete samjhe...mein nai chahta ke wo ye dard sahe k he doesnt have a mom..kash mein pia ko bacha leta...lekin mejhe yakken q nai hota k...pia ja chukki hai...??..y..??..jo bhi ho...ab prem meri jeena ki waja hai...*he thought*
prem was still finding the way out..he saw a path tht lead to the main road...'THANK GOD..!'..he thought..he ran to the main road and stood in the centre thinking where to go now...tht he heard horn of a car..he turned and saw the car coming towards..he screamed and put his hands infront of his eyes...just then..he felt a soft hand pulling him ...his eyes were still closed but he heard a soft and kind voice..:wht happened..??..tum theek toh ho na..?? wht were u doing there..?? agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh??..ye ajkal k bache b na..?!...(after a pause) hey..darne ki zaroorat nai,..u r f9 now...hmm..
prem looked up and his eyes and mouth were widely opened...he saw a very pretty n cute girl..baby brown eyes...pink rosy lips..fair coloured...her curls were flowing in the air...he lightly said:MA..
he saw his mother for the first time..pia was confused with how he was looking at her..as if she was lost and he atlast found her..
-pia-awww..!!..look at u ...u r sooo cute...tumhara naam kya hai..?-prem- mera naam prem hai ...-pia-sweet...mera naam piyali hai...u can call me pia...prem nodded..tum yahan kya kar rahe the..? she asked..-prem-mein kho gaya tha...-pia-oh..!.chalo mein tumhein tumhare ghar chod deti hon...kahan rehte ho..? prem told her the address and went..but prem stopped-prem-aap buhut achi ho...,pia smiled..she said:chalo hum fan land chalein kya..?prem got happy and agreed so they went to fun land instead of home..pia didnt knew y she was liking the child soo much...maybe he was cute n innocent thts y...but u knw mother always love her child in any way..they both had a good time..playing n eating n talking...it turned evening...pia dropped prem at his house..(pia rekon the house but it wasnt the raichand mansion ,abhay and prem were living somewhere else...it was vry beautiful)pia:nice house..-prem-thnks.. but itz my mom choice...vo bilkul aap ki tarah thi...-pia-hmmm...i hope hum kabhi milen ge...ok byee.-prem-no..plzz..ghar ayo na..-pia.-no sweety i hv to go...or waise b mein yahan sirf kuch dino k liye ayi hon office work ke liye..u can have my cell no. mein sunside hotel mein room no 15 mein reh rahi hon..u can meet me whenever u want..." she stepped back and and went away by waving...
prem entered the house...his hands were full of cotton candy ,toys,lolly pops,chips,etc...he knew tht abhay will still be angry..he entered quietly but abhay saw him coming..
-abhay-..PREM...!!(with anger and worry) tum kaha the ..??tumhe pata b hai k mujhe kitni tension ho rahi thi...
abhay saw things in his hand...-abhay-ye tum ne kahan se liya..?u r not supposed to eat all this..u knw tht...!..
he took those thing from him n threw them on the chair...
-prem-papa...vo..ye sab mujhe ek frnd ne le kar diya hai..she is vry nice..vo bhi aap jitni hai..
-abhay-meri jitni..??..means..??
-prem- i mean..vo adult ha...-abhay-oh..! go to ur room..
prem went to his room without any complaining..he wanted to tell abhay about pia but didnt bcz he wanted them to meet each other by themselves..not by telling..(after all he was son of pia n abhay not just any child.:P ).it was happiest day of his life although abhay slapped him..:p...abhay came to his room...-abhay-prem..naraz toh nai..?-prem- no papa...mein aap se kaise narz ho sakta hon...-abhay-hmm...wanna play something...?-prem-ya sure..but wht..?-abhay thought 4 a while-monopoly..?
prem :yess...
pia eneterd her room...she looked here n there...and then sat on her bed..prem...kitna cute bacha hai..so nice he is...kya abhay abhi bhi yahin per hoga...??..no ...forget him pia..."she thought...and went to sleep..
Precap:pia calls prem but abhay picks up the phone..
Hope u liked it n plzz comment...:)

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

omg...dat was truly beautiful...loved it yaar

prem-pia...wowww, i just adored both of them

hey bt wat was dat, pia knows abhay...😕😕, it means she survived dat accident??...cn't wait for nxt part...precap sounds interesting...😊

thanx for d pm

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago

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Munaza sami

@M2NZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

OMG pia remembers Abhay but not prem! whats happening?

Edited by M2NZ - 14 years ago

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

It is really nice. Omg prem met piya. It was good. Does piya have partial amnesia . I hope prem takes abhay to piya. I am sure he will. it would be awesome if abhiya meet in a business meeting. It is too good waiting for your next update. Seriously too good.

Edited by shivanipandit29 - 14 years ago

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sonia

@-Sonia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Superb update!
Wow. .yuppee. .pia is alive!
Prem n pia r so cute!
She remembers abhay but not prem. .awww..so sad!
Eagerly waiting for abhiya's meeting!
Thanks for the pm. .
Continue soon
tc