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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2:
prem was in his bed with his teddy and thinking about her mother..he was exactly like piya bcz she also doesnt leave anything.."i hv to find abt her,afterall,she is my mom...and y dad doesnt tell me about her..?",prem thought...he tried to sleep but failed...abhay was writing his diary in his room..tears were falling from his blue eyes..prem entered abhay's room..abhay immedietely closed his diary and wiped out his tears...-abhay-premm??..wht r u doing..?.so jao ..subah skool jana hai...-prem-dad,mujhe neend nai aarahi...i mean,mujhe dar lag raha hai...-abhay-come here..!aaj tum mere sath so jao...prem nodded..he got into his bed and hugged his beloved dad...-prem-i love u dad..!!..abhay smiled...
prem came to his house after the skool..he saw abhay packing his things up..-prem-dad..??..-abhay-oh prem..!!.mujhe kisi kaam se bahar jana hai ok...mein kal tak aajaon ga...hmm...take care...and no shararat and most important mere room mein nai jana...got it..abhay came out of house and prem followed him ...abhay sat in car and waved at him...the car drove away...doofenshmirtz was standing with prem ...prem went in and doofenshmirtz got a call from abhay:
abhay:tum prem per nazar rakhna..
doof:yes sir..
abhay:us ko mere room mein mat jane dena or skool ke time per bhi us per nazar rakhna...or us ko time se khana khila dena...and no fight on video games...got it..
doof:yes ,sir...
he cutted the phone...but prem was also vry smart ...he knew every move of his dad. i hv to get into his room somehow..,prem thought..
he passed near the abhay's room and saw the door locked...he made an angry face and went to his room...
it turned midnight,prem came out of his room with a hammer ..he was not strong enough as his dad yet...so,he slowly reached the door of room...just then doofenshmirtz appeared out of nowhere...-doof-wht r u doing master..?..-prem-just hanging around..?.!..-doof-with a hammer?...-prem-itz for my safety..-doof-?...-prem-ouchhh,,!!!!...ahh.!.. doof became worried:wht happened master? -prem-m hungry...i need some blood..fresh one from jungle...can u plz give me one ...plzzz...-doof-m on my way...!.
doof left and it was cleared tht he was foolest vampire ever...so,again concentrating his mission prem started to break the lock and succeded..."atlast",he whispered..he slowly opened his room and looked around...he turned on the lights and started to search...i have to find my mom's pic somewhere..he looked in cabinets,drawers and study table..nothing was found..then he opened the cupboard..there was a bigbox in it..he took it out and opened it fastly,there were many pics but just then he heard doof entering house..he quickly took one pic out and locked the door again and stood in the hall...-doof-here it is master..-prem-thnks alot..he drank it and went into his room..he took out the pic from his pocket...it was a group photo..there was panchi,misha,abhay,jeh,neil,danish,t,pia,madhu n arnab,chand n haseena..-prem-ok..this one is vedh's mom(pointing at misha)
this is extra large size aunti(pointing at panchi) uncle khurana's..their parents ,my grandparents...but...who is she..?..ye kon hai..?..mein ne isee toh kabhi nai dekha..?..koun hai...i hv to confirm abt her ..maybe she is my mom or not..?..he hid the pic under his pillow...
it was a holiday..prem got up early n took breakfast..he then,decided to visit kabir and t..he went there...kabir and t had a new born baby girl..she was vry cute...prem knew them as he met them alot of times at parties..t opened the door and was dressed in her nighties..-t-prem?..tum is waqt..?..-prem-aunti mujhe aap se important baat karni hai.. -t-wht yaar??...come in.. prem came in and sat there..-prem-baby kesi hai..?..-t-she is f9...but she is bit fat..ab mein us ki dieting shroo karwadon gi..-prem-babies...n dieting..??..ok leave it...ye batayi..ye koun hai pointing at pia in the pic..t started to boil wid anger...she still hated her alot...-t-pia?tumhe ye pic kahan se mili..?..ye bilkul achi nai thi..tumhare dad k peeche padi rehti thi..she was a cheater...buhut buri thi...yucks...showoff karti this or har waqt ladkon ko dekhti rehti...-prem-ye mere dad ke peeche padi thi??..
-t-ya..she was...and thnk god abhay ne kisi or se shadi karli warna pata nai kya hojata..?..
-prem-app meri mom ko janti ho?
-t-no..mujhe toh us ka naam bhi nai pata so how would i knw..?..ye apne dad se hi pucho..ok..
prem stood up and ran away to his house...he saw abhay there...he was angry tht he kept a photo of a cheap girl like her..he said:papa ...ap ne is ki pic q rakhi hui hai...?..ye achi nai hain !..ye buri hai..buhut buri..!!..abhay got angry on hearing this he shouted at him:do u even knw who she is..?(but abhay controlled)he spoke gently:son,ye buhut achi thi...buhut pyari..buhut different..is tarah kisi k bare mein nai kehte..hmm..or ye tumhe kis ne bataya..-prem-aunti t ne..-abhay-err..ok...-prem-m sorry...-abhay-thts ok..ye pic tumne mere room se li thi na...give this to me...prem handed it to abhay and went to his room...abhay got an emergency call from his office...prem saw tht abhay was again going out of house..he got another chance...he went to his room..quietly..he searched n searched and found an old diary..
PRECAP:PREM READS ABHAY'S DIARY...
HOPE U LIKED IT...PLZ COMMENT AND LIKE..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow! Nice update! That's messed up that T said all those bad things about Piya especially to a little child! 😡 Anyway, I hope Prem finds out that Piya is his mom soon and I'm super eager to know where Piya is and when she'll come back in Abhay and Prem's life again! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊 Oh and can you please add me to your PM list? Thanks!
Edited by Deepi20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
goood workk...
keep on writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it is really nice please continue love it. aww abhiya's son. cho sweet. 😊 can you pm also please
Edited by shivanipandit29 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update!
omg! T hasnt changed a bit !
Awww. .prem is so cute. . I hope he get to know abt his mother !
Wat abt pia? Will she come back?
Thanks for the pm. . Continue soon
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww...that was sooo cute...loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear dat was an awesome part!!
for d first time in any ff , i m loving ny other character more than abhay n its prem here...u av potrayed his emotions so well!!
keep d gud work on dear
thanx for d pm...n eagerly waiting for d nxt part...pls continue soon

luv
heena
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY DEAR😃AWESOME UPDATE YAAR👏👏👏...I LOVED PREM CHARACTER IN UR FF...U POTRAYED HIS EMOTION VERY WELL...BTW WHY ABHAY IS HIDING ABT PIA YAAR TO HIS SON...I LOVED THE FATHER-SON BOND...U POTRAYED REALLY WELL YAAR...I JST HATE THAT T 😡😡😡...SHE IS TOOO MUCH YAAR...PLZ DO CONT SOON & PM MEHAV A NICE DAYLUVSUNITA
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnk u sooo much guyz...for ur awsm blossom comments...i will continue soon and in next part prem will knw tht pia is his mother...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i hope prem ko uski mom ke baare me pata chal jaaye per abhay uss per gussa na ho !!!
thnx for the pm

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