dooriyan...bhi...hai...jaroori !!! pt 22 -pg 128 - Page 25

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part 12



" Ho...
...ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye..."

he was not able to bear dat d feeling of stanger in her eyes...
he tried to read her eyes...

a strong cloud roared..breaking d last trance of dat old emotion...
d rain started more heavily...
making her eyes bcum blank once again...

" ishq hota nahi...sabhi ke liye..."

n wid dat...
his grip over waist looened...
she started to move away from him slowly slowly...
going back back...
away from him...
...
n he just watched her...

he was not at al understanding her different behaviour...
but yes...
it was hurting him to d core...
d pain in his eyes was showing wat was he going through..

while her eyes refused to show any kind of emotion...
her eyes refused to understand his pain...
her eyes refused to take in and give in to dose emotion..
she just walked back..

...
she was walking back..back...
n stopped as she hit sameer's chest..
she tunred towrds him..
geet - im sorry..i didn't see...
sameer - its ok geet..u dnt hav to b sorry..
geet smiled weakly..
sameer - tum maan ko janti ho..
geet looked at him...
geet - yaah..we r..just old frnds..
sameer smile - ohh..ohhk..
geet - excuse me..
saying so she made her way towrds hameer n uttara...

all dis was heard by maan who was still standing at d place where she left...
dis geet just said old frnds...
dats it...
r dey just old frnds...
bloody hell...
dey r each other's soulmate for past more dan 15 yrs...
bloody 15 yrs relationship cnt b named as just old frnds...
he closed his eyes getting angry of geet's rude behaviour..
just den avi's voice broke d thread of his thoughts...

avi - yahan akela kyu khada hai..
maan - umm nothing..its just...
avi teasingly - btw dude..u r lucky..u got to dance wid dat sexyy gal..
maan shot a angry look at him...
did he just call his geet sexy...
no1 dares to say her sumthing like dat...
bloody no1...
his anger was leaving al boundries...
he himself was confused..wat is he angry about...

is he angry on geet for behaving like dis..??
is he angry on himself for not able to understand wat exactly is d prob..??
is he angry on sameer for dancing wid his geet..??
goshhh dis is all so confusing...

no no no...
he cnt handle dis anymore..
or he vil burst...
he hav to talk wid geet...
tonight itself...

n wid dat...
his eyes started searching for geet...

hellooo

word made him in his senses back...
avi - me kab se bakbak kiye ja raha hu...kahan khoya hai tu...
maan - umm it nothing..excuse me..

saying so he left from ere searching for geet in d party..

dere she stood wid hameer n uttara...
he reached to dem...

maan - geeet...
dats wen geet saw his standing just nxt to her...
hameer n uttara looked at each other n den at maan
geet - hii maan..
maan was too angry wid dat...
hii maan...
dats it...dats it she had to say aftr two long yrs of seperation...
geet could feel d anger in his eyes...
while her eyes were expressionless...
he was about to speak..
wen sameer joined dem...
sameer - heyy guys.wats hapening...
geet - nothing importnt...
maan shot an angry glare at geet...
sameer - oohhhk..old frnds meeting aftr long..is it..??
he said cheerfully...
hameer - kind of..
sameer - so tell me..tum logon me aisi kaunsi speciality hai...
every1 looked at him confused...
sameer - cumon guys..geet ka frnds banana aasan nahi hai..mujhe to ms.geet unke naam se

bulane ki bhi permission nahi hai...
get rolled her eyes..
while hameer n uttara laughed...
maan liked dat..
geet didn't allow him to call her by her name...
maan - well..its been 16-17 yrs me n geet r together...
sameer shocked...
wattt
sameer felt jealous sumwhere...
but he shook his head at his own stupid thoughts...
sameer - wowoww..dats great man..lucky u..
geet was not at all interested in dis dicussion...
geet - btw..mr.sameer..wahi uncle newyork se vapas kab aa rahe hai..
maan got confused...
how geet knows sameer's dad...
how she knows dat he is in newyork...
wat is he missing here...???
sameer - dad..he vil b back by nxt week...
geet - ohh..alright..
maan - geet..mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai..
geet - ohh..bolo...
maan - geet akele me...

saying so he held her wrist tightly n started walking...
hameer n uttara shocked at maan's action...
geet was almost dragged wid him...
she didn't make any protest knowing its gonna be useless...
sameer was totally confused of maan's action n geet's reaction...
...

maan dragged her till a lonesum place...
as dey reached a lonely place...
maan left her hand rudely...
closing his eyes in anger...
geet rubbed her wrist feeling pain dere...
he looked at her angrily...
but dose blank eyes of her...
oughhh
for god's sake..
y she understand..how her blank eyes hurts him...

geet - dat was rude...
maan angrily - chup..bilkul chup...
geet didn't react neither she speak...
maan brushed his hairs back trying to control at burst of emotions inside him..
she waited patiently..
maan moved twords her n cupped her face wid his both palms..
she looked at him...
maan emotionally - tujhe kya ho gaya hai...
geet - mujhe kya hoga maan..
maan - plz ise baat mat karna..meri geet aise baat nahi karti...
geet - tum kya keh rahe ho..mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha..
saying so she took out his hands from her face..

he felt hurt wid dat...
he looked at his own hands angrily...
she closed her eyes
y d hell is being so childish...
geet - kaise ho tum..
he looked at her..
he tried to read her eyes..he face..
but dere was nothing...
she was no more aopen book...
she has locked herself now...
but he had to get his geet back...
he vil make out y she is angry of him..

thinking so he sudenly hugged her...
his sudden action made her tremble back a bit..
but his hug was so toght dat she got balanced automatically...
maan - bilkul achha nahi hu...bura hu me..esiliye to tu mujhse baat nahi kar rahi...
geet was not understanding how to react..
she cnt hug him back..nor she can push him away..
dat vil b very rude...
geet - maan...
maan - mat baat kar mujhse..kya jarurat hai mujhse baat karne ki ...me to bura hu na..do

saal me jarurat nahi samajhi mujhse baat karne ki..to ab kya jarurat hai...

she was not liking his touch over her..
she wanted to get away..
but was not able to understand..wat to b done..
geet - maan..relax...
he hugged her more tightly...
maan - u telling me to relax..tujhe ho kya gaya hai..kahan thi tu..kyu kiya tune

aisa..kyu nahi baat ki mujhse...kyu kar rahi hai mere sath aisa...
geet - aisa kuchh nahi hai maan..i was a litle busy...

maan broke out of hug wid dose words of her...
maan angrily - busy..really..tum etni busy thi ke tum mujhse 2 saal baat karne ko tak

waqt nahi mila...
geet - relax maan..yes i was busy...
maan held her shoulders tightly...tight enough to hurt her...
maan - tu kyu kar rahi hai aisa...aise ajeeb behave kyu kar rahi hai..haan...
he almosr cried...
his heart couldn't hold anymore...
a tear rolled out of his eyes...
while geet was still not understanding his anger...
maan - tune mujhse baat kyu ki 2 saal...
geet - i said i was busy...
maan - thik hai.. me samaj gaya..ab tu ye bata tu mumbi me kyu kar rahi ho..??
geet - kya kar rahi hu matlab...papaji ka business sambhal rahi hu...
maan was shocked to hear dat...
business n geet..
par geet ko business sambhal ne kya jarurat hai...
maan shockingly - business..aur tum..par kyu...
geet - kyu matlab..mere papaji ka business..ab unki death ke baad mujhe hi sambhalna tha

na...

maan's heart stopped wid dose words of her...
she was not his geet anymore...
no way she was dat innocent geet..
who never admitted her parents death...
bot just childhood..
but even when she grow up..
she alwz believed her parents vil vum 1 day.. for her..
she never ever said her parents died..
n 2 day she said...
she accepted..
dats showed..she was no more dat childish geet...
but..
he wanted his geetu back..
goshhh
wat could he do..
how could he make her understand..wat went through him dese two years...

maan emotionally - tu toh..badi ho gayi geet...
geet - kabhi na kabhi to bada banna hi tha...
maan - hmm...

aftr listening dose words..
he was not able to understand..
wat to ask her n how to ask her...
how many question he had thought..dat he vil ask her..
n now she is standing here..
but he had nothing to ask her...
dere relationship has changed...
he had to accept whether he like it or not..

maan - tune mujhe jara bhi miss nahi kiya...
geet - nahi...
maan looked at her shocked..
geet smiled - tum yaad karne ke liye..me tumhe kabhi bhooli hi nahi...

his heart punced wid happiness wid dat...
but to his badluck it was shortlived..

geet - tum..dadi..hameer uttara..tum sab ke sath poori zindagi bitayi hai mnene...tum

sabko kaise bhool sakti hu me...

maan - geet plzz...
geet - btw..dadi kaisi hai...
maan - dadi thik hai...
geet - aur suzeil..?
maan - wo bhi thik hai..
geet smiled...
but her smile didn't reach her eyes..
dere was no complete smile on her face..
it was more of s fake smile..

maan seriously - geet baat kya hai..
geet - kis bare me bol rahe ho..
maan - geet..dekh..im sorry...mujhe pata hai mujhe ladna nahi chahiye tha..me tujhse bina

mile chala gaya esiliye etni gussa hai na tu...
geet - tum aisa kyu lag raha hai ke me tumse naraz hu..hum koi chhote bachhe nahi maan

ruthne manane ke liye...
maan - geet plz..bas kar ye natak...geet tu kyu nahi samajhti..ye sab ab mujhse aur

bardasht nahi ho raha hai...
geet was angry now..
geet - enough of it maan..i really dnt understand wat is it wid u...
maan - u dnt understand...?
geet - can we shut dis up..now..
maan - thik hai..par mujhe meri geet wapas chahiye..
geet - stop behaving like a kid maan...
maan - may b im being kiddish...but i want my geetu back..
geet - 1st of all...im not dat small idiot geet anymore...
maan - dnt call my geetu idiot...
geet rolled her eyes..
he so needs to grow up..
geet - maan..its late..i should go...
maan - aur tune ye kya stupid se kapde pehne hai...
geet - wat do u mean..??
maan - mene tujhe kitni baar bola hai ke tu western clothes nahi pehenegi..i dnt like

it...
geet angrily - maan me koi tumhari khilona nahi hun...

maan was deeply hurt wid dat...
how can she say like dat...
his eyes filled wid pain...
geet closed her eyes for being so mean..

b4 she could speak a more wor..
maan stopped her raising his hands...

maan painfully - i dnt mean anything for u now...

saying so he left from dere at once...
leaving geet alone..
once again..


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aisa to kya ho gaya that she is behaving so rudely with Maan. Kahi us Suziel ne to Geet se kuch ulta seedha bol nahi diya na Without Maan knowing?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
suspense killing me dear...eager to know what wrong happened between them two year's before...
please update soon...



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