~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 8 - Page 85

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Originally posted by: princess163

Where do I hide myself?

How I wish I could bury myself somewhere?

Als, this world is too small,

Alas, this earth is too shallow,

To be able to take the depth of my mistakes!

Why am I even calling them my mistakes?

They are crimes that I commited,

Crimes for which no punishment can suffice,

Crimes the punishment for which was borne by you for me!

How I wish I could die,

Sadly that the most cowardly thing to do now!

My child needs me now,

I will do all to save him, I vow!

But, is he my child at all?

No, certalinly not-he is just yours...

Keep him away from even my shadow,

For I might harm him, hurt him, trample him,

The way i did to you, your feelings, your emotions, your love...

My heart bleeds, but its nothing...

Nothing compared to the endless tears that you have shed,

the lonliness that you combatted,

And the love that you still saved for me!

Why? How? When?

Why do you love me-I am not worth you!

How could I do this to you-you are so innocent!

When did I fall for you-perhaps the day I met you since!

I am a devil-burn me, scream at me, kill me!

Shout at me, abandon me, blame me...

how can you still forgive me,

How can you still protect me?

Why do your eyes still speak love?

I fail to look at myself...I fear to even open my eyes,

But, even when they are closed, my heinous crime chases me behind those shut eyelids...

I am doomed, but thats what I deserve,

What hurts is that I brought upon your doom,

When you needed my love-I gave you lonliness,

When you deserved to be treated like a princess-all I gave you is hopelessnes!

Tell me-what do I do? where do i hide myself...

The oceans seem shallow, the earth insufficient...

Originally posted by: Water.

Amazingly written poem.

No words to describe it.

Juss beautiful.

U write heart wrenching stuff.

👏

Originally posted by: princess163

Thanks a lot dear😳

all credit goes to the writers, specially muski di😊

It means a lot to hear this from a great poet like you...just love your writing😃

my mind is blank...i can just only say awesome update...i dnt know what else say...loved it...

Me feeling so so sad for maan..

Happy Independence Day to u di

Totally loved... Loved... Loved... It...

I just can't stop falling for dodo's character... The trust, belief, love... She has for her genie can't be expressed in words...
she just can't stand anyone talking ill about her genie... Loved nt and geet confrontation,,,, especially when she becomes so protective of genie when nt tells that he raped her...
Maan's expressions and his inner thoughts for his dodo were mindblowing... U had just beautifully written that...

Am eagerly waiting for precap... Maaneet confrontation...