-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

OMG AMAZING!
the updates were just INCREDIBLE!
plz do cont soon
and thanks for the pm!

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Prerna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

great parts
loved them all
but Geet is in very bad condition
plz continue soon

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

just finished reading all 3 parts...no words to describe...i actually had tears in my eyes...very sad to see geet's condition...no wonder maan cries...while he is living in luxury this poor girl and her daughter in poverty, inspite of having everything...this world is very cruel...

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MissPurpleFreak

@MissPurpleFreak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Wow, the updates were incredible! Please please continue soon

Saba xxx

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nitya

@preethi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

beeter maan still u need to make more effort to win geet back

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Loved all three parts! Finally, Maan knows the truth! But Geet doesn't know that Maan knows. Can't wait for the last part! I'm going to miss immoral world...

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Niharika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

I was speechless for a while...it took some minutes to compose myself before typing these lines... the day I joined IF I never even imagined I will get such magnificent experience here. I don't know how many must have felt this but you are among the best writers who can turn on each and every emotions of the reader.

Coming to updates, after reading 34th I was so happy and woh kehte hai na, "dil se ek boj uthargaya tha". It was too good to see the truth being revealed and as Nandini narrated about Geet and Dev I was expecting Maan to rush in search of Geet. But Next part was a surprise, for some mysterious reasons Maan didn't take any such step!!!

When Maan found Geet and Sia in such a condition more than for Maan the site was beyond my tolarance and there again the pain which left me few min before came back in new form😭

Last one was full of Maan's remorse, but with each of his words I was remembering what he did with her.

I don't know what I want to see next, should she go with him or stay back... what should be his family's reaction...how Maan will repay for his rudeness... I don't know anything still I'l wait for many more surprises from you...