-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#311

Superb updates dear...m so happy dat now maan knows everythin n regretting every deed every sec but at d same time m really sad 4 geet dat shes living in d worst of conditions pls make her go wid maan...

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

wow.. tht ws awesome... a relief when maan came to knw abt d truth... aftr two years he is actually guilty... but i don't want geet to go with maan.. ofcourse nt so easy...

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Kelly

@Kelly Evans

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Posted: 14 years ago

#313

hey,
i felt this fan fiction started of really good, there was alot of drama, emotions, I was glued to it, but reading the pass few parts, it seems to have lost its plot. I was expecting her to grow stronger and the suspense about her truth to come after a while. Its lost its flow.
I have to say your an amazing writer, and you have a great imagination, therefore a thank you for keeping me entertained.

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esheena

@esheena

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#314

its soo lovely dear

my heart bleeds seeing geet in this condition

continue soon

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@choudhary.a

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#315

OMG ... Poor Geet and Sia ...

Maan has realized his mistake and his asking Forgiveness from true heart ... he does deserve another change ...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#316

part 34
good Maan knows everything...
Geet will be at Chamily's place and will be less tortured...
hope she doesnt forgive Maan so easily...
let him regret repent and suffer for some time...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#317

part 35
Maan has completely destroyed Geet's life and also the kid's...
but glad that she is somehow managing her and her baby's life...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#318

part 36
nice part...
oh Geet has been all alone...
poor her...
Chamily is married with kids...
feel really very sorry for Geet...
now Maan is guilty and is hurting to see her like that...
Geet wont trust him again not yet...
cont soon...