-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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pinky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

Im speechless... Absolutly awesome update
Plzzz continue soon

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wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#302

amazing now truth iz out

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wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#303

loved the update
excellent
awesome do continue soon

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saim

@amzu32

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Posted: 14 years ago

#304

awesome update!!!

really feel sad to see her in this condition..

glad Maan come to know the truth and realised his feeling

cont soon

thanks for pm..

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sana.saba7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#305

go GEET GO WITH MAAN AND TREAT HIM THE WAY HE TREATS YOU...

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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

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Posted: 14 years ago

#306

All d parts r very nice.
My PC is not working so will not be able to press like until it repairs.
Online from cell .
Maan should take them forcefully .
Getting more interesting update soon.

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#307

all the parts r superub... finally maan comes to know his mistake...poor geet... i m really crying for her... her condition ... i m really scared how she will recat to this proposual of maan ... she will not be back i m sure for that ...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Hi Keyama...thanks 4 da pm n da updates! Just read parts 32-36 nw. It was beautifully written. Poor Geet...she did nt understand tht she was raped. This is defn an immoral world. Nandini was sent by Brij to get Geet;s property. She used Maan...he deserved that. Nobody cared abt Geet! After finding out the truth from Nandini Maan realised everything n wanted Geet back! But Geet left...glad she did! She does nt need to be treated like that. Geet finally understood that she was used n abused! Wanted for her property! Y did Maan not find her. Brij n Rano in jail for killing Dev. Nandini ran off! Feeling for Geet..she is alone. What conditions to is living in! Atleast she is taking good care of her daughter. It is also difficulat for Geet to trust anyone. She was so innocent. Nw she knows the ways of the immoral world. She is pure! Her daughter is like her! Maan does nt deserve Geet. He finally found dem n wnats dem back! Bt Geet soes nt trust him after what he did! She is justified in her actions. Will she go or nt? Seems like Maan really loves her n is repenting! Glad she is strong!So is this ending ...its sad 😔. Love the way u write...will miss the updates. Please write something new...looking forward to it n do pm wen u do! Waiting for the last part nw...update soon n pm wen u do! Thanks Keyama...for all da updates.😉

Edited by khwaishfan - 14 years ago