-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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fullyfaltu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

it was so painful... each and every word was like needle... ohh my god i am actually crying... i dont know why bt i feel like saying plz no happy ending.. a person like maan does not deserve a family and a happy child to call him father... maybe geet cant provide all the worlds luxury for her child bt she is the only one in this world who accepted the child as blessing... ofcourse we the readers too...bt still its completely ur creation and ur decision...

i have no words to describe how much i loved ur work...if i were an arab king i would have given u my pearls or my ring.. bt poor me... i cant give u anything except like and lots of love...

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

lovely update

finally MSK accept he love geet

maan i'll work hard to gain geet trust

waiting for more

me loving where the story going now

thnx sweety

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

Amazing update...

wow he accepted tht he luvs her..

awww felt bad for geet's condition... completely understand her fear..

hmm maan deserves more punishment...

plzz continue soon

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muskaan...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

please update next part soon...

as I m really crying...

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meenu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

he deserves some kind of punishment!! i dnt want him to be forgiven so easily!!

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

dear now only i read in one go

great that she is not leaving with him

but i did not think that she ll be in this stage

i thought someone may be helped her

so that she can stand on her legs

atleast somwhere good with one bedroom with good food atleast

but here plsss

make this to stop

we can see our geet in that way

pls dear

it is hurting us

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

awesome parts...

geet shud not beleive maan...not after her current state

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zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

oh gosh it is so much of a pain

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-LOVE-Arshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#249

I am crying. I felt touched, I could feel everything.
The protection and worry in her eyes for the child, oh that gasture have killed me more. And more on how sia (beautiful name) it's not his blood child, and the way he .. I just still hate maan.
He have created so much fear in geet that she rather not even see his face.

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-LOVE-Arshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan
dear now only i read in one go
great that she is not leaving with him
but i did not think that she ll be in this stage
i thought someone may be helped her
so that she can stand on her legs
atleast somwhere good with one bedroom with good food atleast
but here plsss
make this to stop
we can see our geet in that way
pls dear
it is hurting us

I think geets condition perfectly suits here. Because she is not that bright or witty otherwise she wouldn't have signed the propperty paper. She is innocent, barely know about the world. I feel sorry for the poor soul what she have went through in those 2 years. Specially knowing all about the world. Understanding the truth

Edited by -rimimaan- - 14 years ago

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