-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally he found them., dnt tnk he wnt find them..
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I am heart broken

that nandini spitted that lie

pls Keyma undo the wromgs

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...

She is in so bad condition...
Maan must have cried 100 death each second...

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Immoral WORLD
Part 36



Geets eyes widens. It's maan. Her heart stopped. It skipped several beats. It nearly stopped. She sits up instantly. He was socking wet. She looks at sia, who was sleeping peacefully. She hides her. There was no smile of seeing him. No questions. He was simply maan. Just maan.
Geet stood up. Scared that why he is here? She have nothing to give him now. She have nothing. She is a poor single mother, who have barely enough to eat. She have no money and property. Her appearance clearly suggest that.

Geet "I have nothing to give you. I have nothing that would benefit you." she spoke out bluntly. Her quit voice. She was barely recognizable. It frighten maan. What he have done to her.
She was shaking. Shivering. He wasn't sure was it because of him or the rain.
Geet "you have taken everything. I really don't have anything. I am not lying." she spoke in a pleading voice. Then quickly picked her daughter up. Holding hugging her. "please leave us. I have nothing that could help you.."

Over the years geet have figured out he only came to her to have her property. To take advantage of her innocent. To use her physically. How men out there hungry for this body. And he have done the same. She may thought it's love, but it wasn't. It was never love. It was never the love.
Maan "geet... No... No I didn't come here to take anything. I came here to take you." tears rolled down maans eyes. He was in love with her. Thats why he could never move on. Never. He wanted his child and his wife.

For a moment she wanted to ran in his embrace. Hug him tight. But she stopped. He said the same thing 2 years back and made her a servant. Was he planning to do that again? Or make her a sexual use in his house.
Geet nodes a no. Crying. "I don't believe you." she spoke innocently. Refusing to believe his word. "ap hame jute Bol rahi ho!"
Maan "no! No... No I am not. I came here to take my wife and my child. Another tear rolled down his eyes.
Geet "nahi... You are lying. Please go way. Please. Please." she beggs.
Maan "no! NO! NO! I am not leaving you here, I am not leaving you here like this." he comes close but geets back way.

Holding sia tighter. She didn't want to. She didn't trust him. Even when her heart was longing for his touch but she simply refused to believe anything.
Maan "no... No I am not lying. Please believe me." that was the first time she actually seen him pleading. Seen him helpless. Seen him begging. He lands on his knee, holding her, hugging her from her waist. Geet nearly sqick. She backs way...
Maan "I am dying for you. I need you. I love you." geets heart skipped several beats. She breath hard... Extremely hard... She was scared to reply. She rather not. She rather stay quit. Hoping him to go way. Hoping him to disappear.
Geet "ap please go way from here." she pleads. She didn't want to see his face.
Maan "aisa math bolo. I can't see you like this. I can't." all those noise woke sia up. She rubbed her eyes. Looking at him with a questioning eyes. Those eyes, the adorable eyes reflected so much geet. Her innocent. Her purity. It was her. Her mirror image.
Maan stands up... Coming even closer but this time geet backs way. Protecting sia. She remember how much he hated the bump... And now sia, what if he hearts her. She didn't trust him. A mother instinct kicked in.

Maan couldn't convince geet, he tried with sia. To see if she comes to his embrace. She didn't,
Maan "beta.. Sia..." sia instantly hugged her mama tighter. Hiding her face, just in occasion she looked at him with dark brown eyes. Catching glimpse of the stranger.
Geet "I know you never accepted her. Never love her.." she spoke in her lower voice... "hame sab pata hi. Ap seref hamery property harap na cha ti thi. Now you have everything. Please don't hurt my daughter." she cried holding sia tight. She was almost trapped at the corner of her broken house. The rain was hitting hard. Almost crashing the place...
She innocently hugs her daughter tightly. Not want to see him.

Maan "no, no.. How could I hurt her. She is part of me." geet didn't believe. He is the one to teach her between my and yours. He cursed her baby even before she was Borne. He couldn't stand the sighed because she was someone els blood. Then why so suddenly he changed. Her small mind didn't want to think... Her small mind cried. Looking at his eyes scared.
Maan "don't look at me like that. Please don't look at me like that." he couldn't take the guilt. He couldn't see the pain. The trust which no longer there. "I love you. come go with. I can provide you better life then this. A better future for sia. A better future for us."
Geet nodes negatively, she disproves everything. Everything he was saying. Even in her node there was glimpse of how childish and innocent she was.
"you don't have to. We are happy." she mumbles quietly. She spoke in a quit manner.
Maan couldn't take it in any more. The frustration. He panickly brushes his wet hair back. Looking at geet and sia.
Maan "you are not staying here. YOU ARE NOT. BECAUSE IT HURTS ME." he points at his heart. "it hearts here. I can't see you like that!"
Geet could feel his pain. She couldn't accept it. She can't... Her feet unwillingly comes close... Telling him to take her... Take her with him.. Just take her... but


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Posted: 14 years ago
Both the parts are superb,so finally maan comes to know the truth behind dev and the secret behind geets pregnancy , after such a long time maan finds his geet and kid will geet accept him waiting to know more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally Maan know truth..Why he don't go back HP..Two years leap..Cute Sia like Geet...I hope Maan get his punishment which Geet suffer..
areU updating more parts..
waiting..
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Aww !! I liked the twist ! Sia, beautiful name :)
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maan deserves all the pain in the world!!! i hope he keeps geet happy atleast now!! i cant imagine geet in tat state!!
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Aww,,,,,,,,,,the remorse is killing Maan...

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