-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

nice update js't read all three...

ullu ka ****** ab pata chala...wat a bigger jerk he was ?

he sud repent...nt to be 4given...

continue...

chao

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durga1000

@durga1000

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

I am still crying for Geet reading your updates. You have put the feelings beautifully. When will Geet's suffering going to end. Is there no happiness written for her. This is really an IMMORAL WORLD. The reality is always painful. The least Maan can do is to give back the HANDA HAVELI TO HER.
GEET SHOULD WIN IN THE END.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. HATS OFF TO YOU.

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

Love to see Maan suffering like this.
He desrves this...
But feel sad for Geet and Sia.

Updt soon.

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

awesum updates keya
read all the three parts...
😭😭
omg...poor geet...
am feeling so sad for her!!1

but one thing tht sooths me is
tht maan has got to knw the truth
and he really accepts tht he luvs her now!!!

keya...
plz continue soon na...pleeejjj preettyy plzz...one more...plsss

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Jennifer

@jennifer1993

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

awsome loved it that maan got to know the truth and hope they get one soon thanks for so many updates in 2 dyys

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

hey such a awesome parts yaar...
i really became emotional while reading these updates...it touched my heart...
fab👏 dear...i loved it...looking fwd...

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ammyicycool

@ammyicycool

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

☺️

plz 😭continue writing my dear..

😲u r an awesome writer,😃 do u have any idea how good u r.👏.??

i mean...plz dont be disheartened😭...when u have so many fans..like me, definitely who are so waiting desperately for ur updates...

👏

i love ur posts..👏ur story..they r so gud..⭐️

i dont know why u r disheartened..😕

hey..this is for the info of all her readers... plz yaar... all of us enjoy her posts and wait desperately for her updates...plz as a token of gratitude😡, atleast press "like" when u take all the pleasure of enjoying her stories..

and darling, i am so sorry that u r feeling upset and that we, ur fans are an ungrateful bunch..🤢 but we promise, we will all actively participate in the thread..😃

and personally,😉 i dont comment much, bcoz, i am no great in words..😊

but i enjoy ur updates like mad, and press like button always.😃.

ps: 😃wish there was a😳 "love ur 👍🏼post like mad😆" or "am a die hard fan of u"👏button too..⭐️

❤️

Luv u sweetheart,⭐️ ahhemm ahhemm , "meri mishti"..😳

PLz continue ur updates..👏

we love u...

and waiting depserately for ur updates..

Muah...

Luv n Hugs,

Ammy

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

Dear, u write so good and real,u explained so true the facts that reading part 35 made me cry 😭 Realy,it reminded me that there are people out there who dont have a house and food on the table,and still struglling...You touched my heart with these parts,thank you,u r an amazing writer!!

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#259

That was an awesome update dear. Maan stopped searching for Geet Just because he knew that she wont come back? That was ridiculous. And now that he found her, he wants her to come back? Not so soon Mr MSK. Not so soon. Beg, repent, hate urself for what all u have done to the innocent Geet, Hate urself by seeing the trust missin in her eyes for u..

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#260

does he really love her?

or he just feels guilty for misunderstanding her?

now what? will he take her by force? i hope he gaves back her property so atleast she can have a decent living. i like the stronger Geet and right now it seems his love does not mean anything to her

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