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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi buddy awesome update please do update soon.

huh maaneet marriage

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 30

P: if you two can get married

Before he could complete his sentence both said "WHAT?"

Pratham was a little baffled with the way they reacted, just then Nakul came in with the coffee and placed the cups on the table and said

N: sir, they have arrived on the airport, will be here soon.

M: who is coming?

P: Maa, Dev, NT and Sunaina

M: why?

P: of course I can not go to HSPur alone with the shagun

G: Shagun

P: yes

G: but

P: coffee it is getting cold, and Maan I may be a very bad father but I know when my son is on love

M: Dad

P: yes, son, I know that you love her, and even Nakul knows this

G blushed hard and M was speechless

After finishing the coffee

G: I shall take your leave now

P: you are going no where

M: pardon

P: today every one is coming, and I don't want you to sneak in her room, so

G: you knew

P: I know every thing, so what I was saying, yes, so you will be staying in your old room, here at KM, Nakul has shifted your stuff, now go to your room

After G left M too stood and was about to leave

P: not so soon Maan, you can retire only after everyone arrives, sit here with me, let's catch some news

Maan sat down and fumbled with the remote feeling shy, Pratham loved to see the way his son was blushing, he was looking so much like his late mother, some times Pratham wondered that how his shy son is able to handle the deals with so much confidence, how is real nature differed from what he portrayed in front of the world, who would believe that the tough arrogant angry businessman was a shy, introvert and stupid person, so stupid that he is not even able to stop the girl he madly loves; Maan was amused to see his father smiling at him, he became more conscious and seeing his plight Pratham moved forward and hugged him.

After an hour or so everyone arrived and than started their merciless teasing, NT went to Geet's room and dragged her out finding her still awake

NT: so not able to sleep without a good night Kiss

As she was teasing Geet was turning a darker shade of pink with each comment, Maan was also no exception, after much of teasing Pratham felt pity for his youngest son and said

P: enough now every one go to sleep we will be leaving at 7am tomorrow.

Every one dispersed, before leaving Dadi kissed their foreheads and patted her son's back and said "thank you" and they hugged and wished god night

Next morning, they took a car and a Gypsy, NT Dadi, Pratham and Dev sat in the car with Sunaina and Geet was made to sit with Maan in the gypsy along with the luggage Geet was very uncomfortable and so was Maan; but Dadi winked and said

DM: don't miss the chance now you will only meet next at your engagement and then at marriage, so

Geet was all pink and so was Maan, Pratham came in and

P: Maa, we are getting late and if Geet does not want to sit with Maan better let her sit where ever she wants, but I am sure Maan will be disappointed missing the chance to hold her after he missed I last night

And left before any one could react; Maan was all horrified that how much his father has known, Geet was like this earth should tear apart and she would go inside it, they stood there speechless

N: they all have left and sir said you should also hurry

It was then they realized that they were left with no option

They did not talk throughout the journey, after 3 hrs Dev called him

D: Maan, we are stopping at XYZ to have our breakfast, join us

M: yes, bro we are 5 mins away

After Breakfast, Dev and NT took the gypsy and Maan drove the car while Geet sat with Dadi and Sunaina on the back seat. They reached HSPur by 2 pm

so girls this was for today

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
wow didi !!
maans dad can talk this much ???
wating for more updates//
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

THANKS FOR UPDATE... I REALLY LIKE FATHER SON CONVERSATION...

SO VERY SOON TWO BEST PERSONS R GOING TO BE TOGETHER FOR FOREVER...
MEEE LOVING IT...
AND WAITING FOR NEXT PART ASAP...
SHRUTI PLZ UPDATE TELEPATHY TOO YAAR ... THERE TOO MARRIAGE IS ON MAANEETS CARD AND HERE TOO... LUCK U DO DO WEDDING U HAVE TOO ATTEND AT THE SAME TIME... WE ALSO WANTS TO JOINT U IN THIS BEAUTIFUL JOURENY
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing, pratham was sooo good, poor maneet hi hi hi!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
congratulation for new thread
awesome part.
loved it.
maan's father know everything
he is so nice
loved the way every one teasing maaneet
poor maaneet.
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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poor maan and geet i cant believe so much of teasing around for him and geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part, love the way pratham was teasing his son and geet,so shadi ki tyari shuru honewali hei.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...glad pratham is finally appreciating his son openly...amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update...
didnt know that pratham cud speak this much freely and that too with maan i think they r getting to know the other side of their relationship...
arey yaar bachon ko itna bhi tease mat karo sab dheko baat bhi nahin kar rahe hain ek dusre se...
these 2 thought no one knows around and here everyone knows their not so little secret...
enjoyed the update thoroughly
pl cont soon

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