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Posted: 13 years ago
last part will be posted tomorrow

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 43 (last part)

Savitri Devi was sitting in her room, thinking about the events in the past years, she was happy that Maan has turned out to be a confident person, today Khurana Construction won the award for the fastest growing construction firm in India, and all credit goes to her three Khurana grandsons.

Since Geet entered KM there was no looking back, from the first day the girl marked her presence in the household, and today also she was the favorite, a favorite bahu, a favorite Devrani, a Favorite Chachi, a favorite Bhabhi and o course a favorite Pota Bahu.

It has been 7 years of Maaneet marriage, Sonny and Maya still are in touch with the Khurana's and in this time Savitri Devi has seen 6 grand children, 2 each of her three grandsons, in the past 7 years no year went when she was not busy, she had been busy either with the delivery of a child or with the pregnancy mood swings for her Pota Bahu's/

The Mumbai office and the London office has been well established now, she has instructed her grandson's that all the families have to stay at KM, so Dev and Vikrant only went now and then to either Mumbai or London, the ladies and kids stayed at KM.

Pratham has been full-fledged retired and gave his time to his grand kids, he would play with them make them study, drop them to school pick them up from there and every other thing a grandfather can do. In these years he has developed a close bond with Maan, and all the aloofness towards his youngest son have disappeared.

NT, Myra and Geet were like friends they teased each other, they fought over silly things, they cooked together, they worked together, and they wre so used to each other that if any one of them went to her Mayka rest followed.

Dev, Vikrant and Maan also gave tough competition to their rivals, no body dared to file a tender where they have filed in, they were a huge name and they also were like praised and given example of what unity is.

Rajji and Yahs visited them more often and at times also stayed back at KM, they too had 2 kids.

All kids of went to same school and the oes who were small were also suppose to join the older ones. They were the naughtiest and the brightest.

Moreover they were a happy joint family. And Maan Geet were simply THE BEST!


so another update.. 😳

as it is the last

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Posted: 13 years ago

well you had put an epilogue... had expected the end with more on mann and geet relation and how they handled the family as the best...

do keep posted if you start with any new ff on maneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
wow loved the ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it.
yes they are the best together.
and family planning also.
just 2 kids eachpair..😆😆😆😆😆
👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
for u writing such simple and superb ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally they both came out of their shells. But ye kya, u ending Thf FFs one by one?
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh i will miss this ff
lovely ff Shruthi, thank you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi shruti

whats wrong sweetheart... ek din or do do ffs khatam kar diye... and that too in so small way ... ye tumhra style to nahi hai... sab teek to hai na...
As this part was containing all the detail required for the story to wind up ... u never missed any thing... small small parts r clear... even sunny . maya... but some where missed maaneet in this last part... which u never does...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 43
last part...
lovely...
liked it very much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
good update
it was amazing

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