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Posted: 13 years ago
part 41

Both laughed and he blushed hard entering the room
he locked the door and rested his back on it sighing,
he looked at the bed decorated with flowers and where she was sitting all cuddled and covered with the long heavy duppatta, he slowly went near the bed and sat near her removing the flowers and lifted the duppatta but was shocked


outside

NT: so desperate
My: no Bhabhi, he is nervous
NT: he nervous with her? never
My: Bhabhi he is very shy
NT: not with her
My: you sure??
NT: you have not seen them together, he leaves her breathless
My: how
NT: stupid by of course not allowing her to breath properly
My: you mean out of breath like in Kis...
NT: yes
My: Maan and that too OMG
NT: passionate one
My: have you seen them I mean in that gesture
NT: i am not that shameless
My: then
NT: but I have witnessed her all pink and red and purple, as if on fire while running to her room
My: purple
NT: all swollen and bruised
My: OMG, I am sure Rajji will faint on hearing this

Inside

he was shocked to see that instead of Geet there was a pile of neatly arranged pillows, he looked here and there calling GEET but there was no noise he stood up and went to the washroom to see if she was there, when he did not find her he thought that his Bhabhi's were playing trick and marched to the door when he heard a slight chiming of the anklet,
he looked in the direction of the sound and saw the curtain disturbed, he smiled and noiselessly went there and abruptly drew the curtain but she was not there

he then saw a shadow moving in the balcony he went there but no one was there, he heard a slight thump sound and saw a figure entering the room, he followed but he was late,

he saw the movement near the bed and predicting the next move instead of going to the bed he went to the dressing room

and there he caught her, she was looking at the bed and not finding him there was wondering where he went and he caught her

she turned abruptly and he held her waist

M: hide and seek
he traced her curl that was on her forehead
G: no

she followed his gaze and blushed noticing him gazing her mounds and suddenly remembered that she was not wearing her duppatta, she tried to cover her front with her hand but he held them firmly and pulled her to him she shivered

he traced his long fingers on her cheek she sighed
he lifted her face to look in her eyes, she was shocked to find hunger in them

he slide her index finger in his mouth she closed her eyes, he gently pulled the ring of her hathpul () her toes curled he slowly one by one took of all the five rings of that hand and then proceeded to the other hand, by the time he finished she was out of breath, all the while his gaze did not leave her face.


he then left her waist and slowly pulled the bangles one at a time, while he did so her free hand made donuts of heavy her skirt
he then went near her ears and pulled her earrings with his teeth finally she moaned with her eyes closed as the sound left her throat she felt cool air pass,

she opened her eyes and saw that there he was not there, she looked around but in vanished disappeared leaving her panting with desire, she called 'Maan please satao na'

and moved around looking for him, now that she was moving in a unplanned way her heavy lehengha was disturbing her, she cursed it and went to the dressing room and took out a nightie

she wore it on her blouse and then slid out of her heavy skirt, she then went to look for him and moved in the way she had done, but he was not there finally she sat on the bed

as soon as she sat she felt a pull, he was all the time there hidden in her duppatta, she pushed him but he pulled her, when her hands went to hit his chest she found that he was not wearing his sherwani but what was in front of her was his bare chest, she closed her eyes again, he pulled her and whispered with a husky voice

M: you took off what i should have now how will i undress you when you willingly are doing it on your own
she felt her cheeks burning

G: wo

he placed his finger son his lips and caressed her cheeks and moved his hands to her shoulders then her arm then her thigh and finally held her foot and placed it on his thigh and gently unclasped her anklet and then the other one,

he then took off every jewel from her leaving the mangalsutra and said

M: Geet now that you took off your duppatta on your own then your lehenga on your own, it would be nice if the remaining is also done by you

she nodded in a no

M: your wish I will not, but yes I will take mine off and you dare not close your eyes

he slowly took off every fabric and was there in his birthday suit before her, she tried to block his tempting image but he did not let her close her eyes.

he did not wait for her to undress but pulled her and sealed her lips
he kissed her every exposed part and she responded with equal fervor,
she explored him and as the torture continued she had a strong urge to feel him skin to skin but he was holding her firmly she was not even able to move, she tried to come out of her hold

M: no Geet I will not let you escape me

G: please Maan let me

M: why

G: I want to feel you

M: are you not feeling me now

G: like the other way

M: what way

G: Damn it Maan

M: what

G: (before she could realise words were out)I want to undress
he left her

M: go ahead

Rest is left to your imagination
because what I imagine cannot be written😳☺️


so another update.. what do you think the ladies asked for😳

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part 42 (SR on demand)
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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was hot n passionate
loved it
n obviously the ladies asked for a baby
im sure maaneet wioll not disappoint them
plz plz plz update the next part really soon
plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part.
The mutual teasing session was too good.
I think they are on their way to give the bhabhis their gift
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so so so love it ☺️ 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Excellent update , loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have imagined the rest of the scene
But now I want to knw hw u have
Imagined it too😈
😈 Well I m not asking much u knw😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome hot and passionate part, love the way maan was teasing her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
very hot and passionate
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
reallyyy nice... loved it😳
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