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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
interesting!
me likeyyy
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
loved maaneet moments...now they meet with each others family...i like it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mhz007

awsmm part...finally maan said geet is his gf...wow...update soon d nxt one...

umm i actually think u r mistaken he sed geet is his gf only 2 bachao adi frm pinkys wrath...now all pinky,adi,geet,mr .mehta all kno tht geet adi n maan r frnds nly
nyways thnxx 4 d lovely cmmnt

hey people i ws just interested if u all r able to guess wt relatn does dis grl have wid maan or geet or odr charecters...c quiz ques of d day
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
maan and geet getting closer...
well adi cant fool msk...
so both introducing to their family...
eager to know neil and gal...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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can u please tell me who is

Neil and girls

I am eagerly waiting fro that
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saritha30

can u please tell me who is

Neil and girls

I am eagerly waiting fro that

saritha yaar wait u eill get it whos neil n grl bt only aftr maaneet marriage so wait n yaa d main track will begin aftr marriage till den guess ill lyk if u ppl try to guess atleast aftr dis update if u get some clue

Well well my friends ill like to advice you all something plsss read the girl and neils part with much importance because later otherwise you will not get the grip of story and will not enjoy the main flavour of it…………………..i know u all love maaneet and will focus more on maaneet but still I plead you all to read neils story with attention

cmmnnnt plsss n lyk it tooo

part 12---------

Next morning our princess geet was disturbed from her sleep well at least she felt disturbed if somebody was calling her at 5 in morning

As geet checked the name flashing in the screen she felt blessed to be disturbed

Geet in sleepy manner-hieee

Maan-good morning geet……………… I just called you to say that you left your watch in the dashboard of my car yesterday

Geet-maan for that you didn't have to call me at morning 5 na

Maan-why princes did I wake you up

Geet-no maanu(maan frowned and geet chuckeled)I was first surprised and quiet astonished that

You think of something else other than work also but then realised its not MSK who called me but maan

Maan- yup that's true MSK is true sadooo na

Geet-dare you say something like that about my client by the way is this a manner

Maan was now utterly confused

Maan-geet what manner

Geet- manner of returning a girl her belongings call her and say 'hello you forgot your watch'

Maan-princess geetu handa then you only teach me the manner na

Geet- invite the girl for breakfast with your family

Maan- seriously geet sure that's a good idea please come na it will be very good………….dadi will love you and dad well he shares interest in photography,and seeying that I can have a female friend close enough will reduce devs increasing doubts

Geet- dev your younger brother na…………..what doubts

Maan- seeying me living without a wife or girlfreind he feels im someone from another plant or im

Geet- gay??? Oh my god lolsss haha

Maan loves to hear her giggles and geet says-ok I guess your brother is flirt types

Maan- no he is not flirt as such but I don't know think so he has a girlfreind but the shy boy does not tell me anything

You will be happy to meet anni she is my sweet ladli sis and is like you practical and without any airs

Geet- so here I come

Maan- ill send a car at 9 be ready

Geet-ok byeeaaa

Maan- bye princess

Neil receives a call …………………………

Neil – yes sir………..sir that mission is over and we can make the media announcement but before that ill have to take mams permission

Ok sir ill call you and inform

Neil immidiately calls the girl…………….his girl

Girl- hmm

Neil- we will make media announcement

Girl- well you know I am not interested in these matters I don't like taking credit and all and make media announcements turn into parties and spend countries funds feeding people who don't have a cent idea about what are the soldiers condition is in war field and talking abot this mission we didn't have the comfort of a war field too this time.

(friends I don't know actually how many of you are familiar with this matter but seriously the soldiers who fight in warfront are not given much of credit infact I don't know why but many a times other than the person who are in intellegence department of the army ,rest ie.soldiers and commandoes are assumed to join the army because they are not well educated and this is seriously humiliating according to me because in reality they have to pass physicalk n mental tests and are well qualified,I feel that independence day and republic day are not the only two days to remmember them pay respect to them but sadly most of the people do that……………………..another point which the girl tells here is that after a military win it is the political people and higher oficials of army who spend money in partying don't realise that the actual men present behind the win who face death at every second of their mission can be supported with higher payscale,better weapons or let appoint more soldiers and commandoes so that the existing army men are not exhausted)

Neil-I understand what you mean but im doing my duty plainly

Girl-neil did you bandage your injuries

Neil-yaya I did bandage and I hope you did the same my supergirl

Girl-yes I did bandage and wished you mom too yesterday night

Neil-yes you wished her before me ……………….like every year

Girl-visit her ……………I have already approved your leave and sent the tickets along with my gift

Neil-yes received them…………………chutki thnxxx

Chutki-you are thanking me

Neil –I love you, you understand me soo well like no one else ………………..you are my jaan

Chutki-it is the worst feeling to not be able to resiprocate to your words with equal flavour of love but my truee concerns and feelings for you may be balances your love for me

Neil-I don't expect from you anything……………….just be with me and let me be with you

Chutki- byee neil

Neil-byee

Geet puts old thoghts aside and walks out of the room to inform rano and papa about the breakfast at khurana mansion

Rano-geet beti where are you planning to go now

Geet-maa I am invited by maan for breakfast at his house

Rano- geet is there only freindship between you both

Geet blushed but being a pragmatic person she answered

Geet-maa till now it is close freindship and I have atlast met him only eight days ago

Rano- and what about future??

Geet-let things settle up themselves…………….but neither am I accepting and agreeying your thoughts nor am I denying

Geet- byeee

As geet comes out of the house the driver could not help but gape at her open eye jaws dropped(besharam driver MSK gussa karega)

A sunflower coloured jumpsuit clad geet was looking so adorable that the driver felt like picking her up on his arms and hiding her in his embrace from the whole world,now how was he supposed to drive ???(ohhh poor driver)

A surprised geet asked- someone said that ill send a car then what happened now

Maan- being your driver is the best work to do mam.its my pleasure

Geet- how am I looking???i thought firstly that I should dress in something traditional as your dadi and dad will be there but later thought that my dresses are modern but not exposing so they should like me like I actually am

Maan- you look asolutely adorable geet and you know what when you were coming towards me I will say truly that I felt like picking you up on my arms and hiding you in my embrace from the whole world,now how am I supposed to drive??? And made a puppy face

Geet laughed and hugged him

At khurana mansion-

Dadi who was reading the newspaper and dad who was busy checking the stockmarket details saw a sight which left their jaws dropped

Maan walking in wid a girl……………….no no maan holding the girl by her arms…….oh wait in more detail both laughing…………….god maan happy

Dadi and dad rose from their place like they were hypnotised

Geet came and touched dadi and dads feet

Dadi-who geet welcome um… actually huh I I am I mean

Dad- geet beta maa is in a shocked situation

Geet frowned-kyun dadi im not good or that bad that you got a shock seeying me

Maan- geetu its that they are seeying me happily walking with a girl and holding her by arms na so

Anni-everybody im leaving for colle………………

Oh my god whos this??? Hii

Geet- hi anni

Anni- you know me but I don't

Geet- maan tells a lot about you

Maan- anni she is geet

Anni-oh so you are geetu princess

Geet blushed

Anni-bhai she is blushing look at her bhai geet that is what he has saved as your name

Dev just came back home at that time

Geet- hi dev

Dev- excuseme do I know

Anni- bhai yehi hai maanbhai ki princess

Dev-geet omg hii

Geet- you are a pilot for private sector or you are in airfoce

Dev-im in airforce geet

Jab se maan bhai shaadi se lauten hai he has told a lot about you and your nature and proffession

Geet looked at maan and maan looked down and said you had a night shift na I think you are tired

Geet – oh yaa so you go and change and anni if possible can you stay back

Anni-geet im so sorry but my exams

Geet- what exams oh no no not at all be4st of luck anni and hugged her

Geet was in a cooking spree and thus she said that she wanted to cook something for breakfast along with maan and dev

Geet- maan you love continental food na

Dev- ya bro n anni love continental food

Geet – and you dev??

Dev- mughe sab chalta hai I love food be it anything

Geet-so lets prepare saathe its an indonesian dish chicken sticks served with peanut butter sauce

The cooking part was filled with creating mess ,geet scolding maan for handing wrong spices,foodfight with leftover peels and a lots of fun

Finally the exhausted three came out of the kitchen and served the food

Dad- geet the food is delecious

Geet- you know what dad im an occassional cook but when I like or im in a mood I believe in cooking because personally o feel I can afford a cook

Dev- being independent monetarily and still making sure that you know all house chores is something really great

Dadi- geet beta aap bahut hi smart n beautifull hai

Geet- thnxxx dadi waise thnxx to all of you I feel like im at home

Maan whispers in her ears- didn't you say your parents are pushing you towards marriage and if you feel this house like home you know…………………..

Geet blushed profusely and maan grinned

Geet- so dev why did you not become a business……………

Dev- geet you know what being a business was what I was expected to do but a pilot was wat I wanted to become and serving the army is something great isnt it by the way im actually on board very less mostly im handling the sattelite screening and in conversation with the other forces……………………….

Geet- interesting………………..so which was the latest mission you covered mr.dev singh khurana

Dev- confidential miss geet handa

Geet smirked and dev grinned

As the breakfast was over ,GEET bade goodbye to all………………….and proceeded towards the door

precap------

Maan- driver, homedecor goregaon store chalo

Geet whispered in his ears-maan I preffered the earlier driver you know he was damn hot

Maan smiled

Geet- hai mai maari javan sodio kya sunhera muskaan hai

Maan- kyun nahi ji apke liye to mai har subah aur har raat aisi muskaan lutavaan

Geet-press ko yeh gossip to deni hi padegi tht MSK is a gr88888 flirt

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cuteee!
me likeyyy!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
very good update sweetheart
thanks for sharing

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so guess neil and geet are related 😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update dear. Loved their light banter and Maan's flirtatious nature was hilarious. But most of all I loved what u wrote about our forces. Honestly we need to do a lot more for them, and remember them more frequently. If not for them we not be having a peaceful and happy existence at all. U have expressed very noble thoughts in ur update. It was a very touching thing u wrote. Thanx for the pm also. waiting for the next part.

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