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Posted: 14 years ago
part 20..
great.part...
hopefully she tells the truth..

Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
libra25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 21..
loved maan opening up to her..
waiting for geet to reveal it to him..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved part 21. It was nice to see Maan opening his heart out to Geet. Now lets see if Geet tells all to Maan. Pls continue soon. Waitiong for next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 22-----

😊hii dearies hope u all lyk dis prt abt geets explanations n plsss cmmnt na jaanoos c i send almost 63pms n get 11 cmmnts n few lyks...tell me thts nt justified na 😡...im crying cozim relly nt well n still im giving updates bt im returnd wid only this much cmmnts😭😭😭

Next morning geet woke up in maans embrace----------

Maan-good morning shona

Geet leaned on him and pecked him and murmered good morning

Geet then sat on his lap and made a pouting face

Maan-ab aise muh kyun phula kar rakha hai

Geet-maanu you na 1st decide what you want to call me by………………kabhi geetu to kabhi mishti to kabhi shona……………..kaunsa haan???

As maan saw geet questioning him and making a cute face with naughtiness sparkling from her eyes ………………he could have well eaten her up alive who looked like a fresh morning glory

Maan-geet tum meri ho ……………….jaan kaho???

Geet-haan perfect aap mere maan aur mai apki jaan

Then geet pulls maan outside and makes him sit on a rock and herself sits on his lap both watching the beauty of nature ………………a river flowing by and lush green grass at a distance from the bank………………birds chirping………..a perfect date with nature

Geet-maan……………..wo kal raat

Maan-geet dil kholke bejhijhak jo bolna hai bolo

Geet-maan aap virgin ho???

Maan was starled and then noded for a yes

Maan-geet kaam ke chalte mughe kabhi………………nahi actually mughe bachpan se yahi seekh di gayi thi ki apne patni ke saath…………………umm I mean

Geet held his hand and said-I understand maan

Geet-maan mai bhi shaadi ke raat tak apne future husband ke liye khud ko book karke rakhi thi

Maan-geet achanak yeh prashn

Geet-maan I asked you this to draw reference to what I want to say you next

Maan- that you were in a relation………………….

Geet-don't draw assumptions maan………………….just listen carefully to what I have to say next

Maan times have changed a lot these days…………………………peoples mind thinking have changed

Haan apke tarah mere jivan me bhi ek fixed goal tha and I have lost a lot to accomplish that

Who ek aisi baat hai jo na koi jaan payaga aur na hi samagh payega…………………koi nahi maan aap bhi nahi

Haan im innocent but my feelings are deep……………………im not complicated but my character is such that im difficult to understand

You will take time to comprehend me………………………………….shayad umrabhar lagjaye

Education,paisa,jobsatisfaction,izzat in me se kisi bhi cheez ki kami mughme nahi hai aur na hi mai apko in me se kisi karan chahti hoon………………….mai sirf saath chahti hoon apka,sirf pyaar maan sirf pyaar

5 years ago I was working in a project(army cantonment for black commando training)

Us project ke team me I was the only girl with seven other men(other commandoes)

Firstly I was a bit reluctant and withdrawn but then I made freindship with a team partner of the project(neil)

As time passed by we visited a distant village in Arunachal Pradesh with the team(mountain trecking to fight for terretorial land)

By that time I had developed great freindship with him and he was in love with me

Maan tried to protest

Maan-geet tumhe clarification dene ki zaroorat nahi I just want our future to be happy and……….

Geet placed her finger on his lips

Geet-shhh maan I know that you have accepted me with alll my faults and praises but let me tell you this

He was in love with me(neil)but I was not he was true to me and thus had confessed his feelings way before but I couldn't love him back and he never held a grudge against me for that………………………..we were and are true friends………….maan he does and always will understand me the best more than anybody

I hope you understand………………………….

That night for the project success a party was held and I preffered to avoid it(commando party 4 celebration of victory)

I was in my tent and rest of men were partying……………………….they were drinking and that's what I wanted to avoid

The party was almost coming to an end when I heard two of our team memberscalling me

I went outside and they asked me to join the party but I refused

They were drunk and…………and I ……..woh

Maans grip tightened over her

Maan-geet no don't say I love you mishti

I love you shona

He started cradling her

Geet continued----

Those drunkards dragged me inside the tent and they forced themselves on me

I felt as if I was ripped apart and then everything blurred

As I gained consiousness I saw my friend covering me with his jacket and trying to cover my total bare form

No I was saved at the end moment saved ………………………saved for you saved for…………

My dignity was at stake………………..ek ladki ke liye uska samman uski izzat hi uska sab kuch hai………………aur aap ho abse mere maan

Saved by my friend…………………….i had this immence respect for him,yes I never had this habit of turning friends into brothers but what he did for me after that somehow our relation changed

Rather it was same from his side……………….he loved me,respected my decesion of not loving him back and was happy with whatever friendly relation we had

But I somehow……………….its my fault…………..i know……………I felt as if I owe him and cannot return him what he desires

Maan after that day whenever he was withme and unwillingly lost his control I never stopped him………………things went on to me sitting on his lap and him kissing me on the face……………………..even if mentally I didn't agree to what he was doing sometimes I liked it unintentionally ,human desires is the word to be blamed

Maan he is and will be always my best friend,he understands me the best in this world…………………..im sorry but I think even you can never know me as well as he knows me

Maan I had a fear of loosing you but later he told me to tell you all because every relation should build on trust and love

By the time she ended her talk maan was continuously patting her back

Maan-geet I appreciate your decesion of telling me the truth………………I know how difficult it has been for both you……………….himloving someone who loves me………………………I respect your friend tooo

But geet let me repeat again

Maan-but geet ill again repeat that no one in this world is perfect or as desired,our relationsip has truthfulness which is an important point,other than that we are starting our life shona and I will cherish each moment with you no matter of what our past is

Geet snuggled close to maan and said-my prince charming im tired can you drive back darling

Both of them left for mumbai to be awaited by a surpride

Precap ------------surprise

Moonlight,bridge.maaneet

doubts,praises,critisism???show through cmmnts na😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
loved maaneet conversation.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
So dis was Geet's POV...
But thr is NO such thing which justifies her decision to allow Neil to b more n more close to her.
Sorry bt I'm not convinced.
According to me geet cheated not only her frnd bt also herself.
Bt thank God she told evrything to Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh bautiful part. geet topld maan about her fiend.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved the truthful talk of geet
and the way maan supported her,
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good that Geet told Maan everything. However, I too find it a bit difficult to understand that Geet could allow Neil to come so close to her. But if we see it from Geet's POV she was only repaying him for saving her izzat. But after thinking about it I feel that I can understand that even if she wanted to deny Neil she would have felt guilty. So basically whatever she did she did it only out of gratitude, and the desire not to hurt him. So far we can understand her POV but hopefully now on she stays away from him. As fro Maan he is truly the most understanding person in the whole world I think. Glad that he also understands her POV and loves her despite the confession. Waiting for the next part and thanx for the pm dear.

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