Ek Anchaha Faisla FF.Part 12 pg 92.Pm later - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ambeern

awesome story

update soon
waiting for next

your wait is nearly over just a few more hours :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

congo & thanks for the new ff honey. But a rqst don't make this ff same as "odhani" and no sad ending too.

Well the starting was great but killing of her brother & that sameera part was a little sad. Plz do put some light on MANEET past so that we can relate it to their future track. So both are married now but hate eachother & are together under same circumstances and against their will.

Do cont soon & do PM me. BTW, i am not able to hit "like" button right now. Reason already sent through PM.

There was no Sameera part.. just mentioned that Maan was engaged to her and loves her..
This is about how a woman stands up slowly ..and how a man begins to understand his wife being two sides of the opppsite poles..There will be some light on MAneets past as well.. dw..
And no it will not be like Odhani.. but there may be some resemblances..
ONE MORE THING FAMILY is not like ODHANI either.. NO MIL or BHABHI or FIL or BIL etc.. Character sketch later x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello guys thanks for the lovely comments and i have tried to reply to each one of you.. This FF is purely based on my own imaginations taking ideas from other shows.. This is entirely my own work.. If anyone finds that there is some resemblance to anyone elses work. Please let me know and i shall look upon it.. 😉

More importantly a PM list has been made. If your not there? THEN PM ME okie dokie.. And u shall be added in..😊
Now no more talkies lets begin the update that 90 of you ODD people have been waiting for.. Love you loads..Oh does anyone know how to add pictures? I would love to add pictures to my story as we go along.. But i dunno how to.. and can someone make me a siggie?🥱 Please pm me
She sat there quietly not knowing where her life was heading. This man who now was her husband had changed her entire life. He had killed her hopes and aspirations. Her future life was now in his hands. She knew coming from a male dominated society a woman was an object for a man. A woman always needed a man. But her brother, her loving brother doted on her. He knew the village ways were backwards. Hence he had allowed her to study and he had taught her everything himself after studying from the big city Delhi itself. Geet herself was not illiterate. This was the one thing Maan did not know. Geet was home schooled by her brother and he had taken her to examination centers in Delhi where she had got her certificates of passing her school years hence understood basic english. Her dreams to study further were halted. Her life was going to take the pleasant change. Her brother Tejinder Singh Handa had been in the city leaving Geet alone sometimes for months but always calling her. Leaving her in care of his neighbors, Suraj and Tanvi. A married couple who were Geet only friends. He had been planning to leave the city with Geet. He was going to sell the land and take Geet to the city for a better life but before he could convey that to her. Maan Singh Khurana had taken that happiness.

'eh hello sunno ladki' Maan said clicking his fingers bringing her out of his thoughts. His idea of Geet was a timid shy and scared girl who knew nothing about the city.
'jee' Geet said quietly because it was true she knew nothing she had no one. Her brother was with her when she came to the city before but she knew no one.
'ghar anewala hai. Aur tum meri marzi ke khilaaf ek awaaz bi nahi utowgi samji warna muj se bura koi nahi hoga' Maan said with authority like he owned her. He knew now that in villages the male owned the female.
'jee' Geet said seeing the strict tone and anger. She had never sensed this type of behavior before always getting love. She was alone with a man in a new city without anyone to call her own
PAST
1 week ago..
Geet was outside her house waiting for her brother. He had called and said that he will be arriving today at 7pm. Geet sat there sulking annoyed. It was half eight and the sun had gone down. It was dark and he still was not there. She was angry. She got up and decided to walk in and she shut the door behind her.
Maan was driving through the village. There was a land here which he had to acquire to make his new company and a new site. It was worth millions. These village people did not know much so he could get it at a cheap price. He was driving his jeep in the hot blazing sun when the engine had overheated and broke down infront of Geet's house. Sighing he stepped out of the car. He was hot and frustrated. He walked up to the front door of the house and knocked the door.
Geet heard the knock and smiled. 'Aakir aa hi gaye bhaiya' She beamed in delight. 3 weeks she had been waiting for her brother. She turned the stove off where she was cooking for her brother.
'Ji abhi ayi' She yelled as she grabbed her dupatta and ran to the front door. She then stopped before opening the door and did a thinking face and a hand on her hip
'Hmm bhaiya ko lagega ke main naraaz nahi ho.. Geet darwaza kholo aur phir murjana aur apne gusse ka ikraar karna. Is bar bhaiya ko do char shart manwalena' She smiled softly and opened the door and then turned around.
Maan saw the door opened and saw a petite figure of a young girl standing there before he could even see her face she turned around.
'Ayi ayi andar ayi. Lekin yeh mat sochna ke main naraaz nahi ho' Geet said innocently thinking its her brother. Maan was confused, why was this girl angry? because he knocked the door this late at night.
'Itni raat ko aapko ana hua? Dekho bahar kitna andeera hogaya hai' Geet said. Maan wondered and in a way she was right, it was dark and he should not be disturbing someone this late at night.
'Ab murti ke tara khare rahenge ya kuch kahenge bi' Geet said now irratated that her brother had taken no insentives to placate her.
'jee main woh,' Maan started when the lights went. Geet was afraid of the dark. Geet went and hugged Maan.
'Aap hamse door mat jayiye hame andeere se bohot dar lagraha hai'
Maan was shocked at first this girl was not looking at him and now she turned around and hugged him. He didnt know why but her body fitted perfectly in his. He felt something with her small petite body aganist him. He was about to hug her back when the lights turned back on. Geet looked up and was shocked she came out of the hug. Her eyes widened at seeing a stranger. She was about to scream. Maan watched her every reaction with curiosity. IT was not like she wasnt beautiful. She was one of the most beautifull and purest angels he had ever seen. She seemed so innocent. Her hazel eyes, showed the essesnce of her clean heart. Her small frame. Her simple attire and salwar kameez. He then realised that she would scream. He quickly covered her mouth. Geet was shocked. First there was a stranger in her house and on top of that he was touching her. She bit his hand.
'Kaun ho tum? Aur tumhari himmat kaise hue mere ghar main ani ke? Aur tumne mujhe haat lagaya' Geet said in anger. Maan smirked at her anger the way her nose scrucned up her forehead frowned.
'Abhi main sab gaow wale ko bolati ho. Ek ladki akeli dekhi to aap ke niyat karab hogayi abhi bolati ho, Sura...' Maan grabbed her shoulders and pushed her aganist the door closing it as well.
'Chup bilkul chup' He hushed her. Geet was scared. He seemed much stronger than she was.
'woh main yaha tumse maadat ke liye aya ta aur tumne pata nahi kya kya kehrahti ti. Tumne to mujhe bolne he nahi diya.' Maan bore into her eyes as she bore back into them, Fear and fright showing visibly.His hands were hurting her shoulders. Maan had never treated a girl even Sameera with this much harshness before. He didnt realise until he saw bright sparkling tears. They seemed to affect him.
'Mujhe dard horaha hai' Geet whispered. At once Maan let go of her shoulders.
'Sorry' He mumbled. Geet sorted herself out.
'Je hame maaf kardo. Hame laga ke hamare bhai teh' Geet said.
'koi baat nahi. Kya tum meri maadat karsakti ho. Meri gari bahar garab hogayi hai' Maan said.
'jii..gari.. aap hame dekh sakte hai na. Ham ladki hai. Hame gaari ke bare main kuch nahi maloom' Geet said.
'nahi aisa waise kuch nahi. Mujhe pani chahiye ta'
'pene ke liye' asked Geet innocently
'nahi naahene ke liye'
'lekin nanhene ke liye pani raat ko nahi ata.. sirf saware ata hai' Geet innocently replied. Maan smiled and laughed at her innocence.
'app hamari mazaq urarahe ho' Geet said sulking.
'Nahi aisa kuch nahi. Tik hai mujhe gari main pani dalna hai. engine bohot garam hogaya hai. Aur pene ke liye pani mil jaye to acha hoga' Maan replied smiling.
'Tik hai aap beteye hum abhi ate hai' Geet said asking Maan to sit on a sofa. Maan smiled. Geet ran and got water for him and gave him a glass of water to drink and a small bucket for his car which she left on the floor. She then opened the front door. Maan walked towards Geet heard her mumbling
'naun bajgaye aur abhi tak. Aane do unhe main baat tak nahi karongi' Geet mumbled. She looked down.
'aisa kya? tum ab mujse baat tak nahi karogi. Tik hai main yeh sari tofe Tanvi ko de deta hi' A voice said. Geet looked up and saw her brother standing in the doorway.
'Bhaiyaaa' She screamed as she ran into his arms. Tej who was her brother picked her up and spun her around.
'Geetu maine tumhe bohot miss kiya' Tej said putting her down. Geet frowned and crossed her arms.
'Aap jaye hum apse gussa hai'
'are baba bus breakdown hogayi ti. Ab agar mere pass gari hoti to main aise yun karke ata ab maafi milegi' Tej asked with his fingers on his ears. Geet smiled and hugged him. Tej eyes then went to the man who was standing behind Geet. He narrorwed his eyes.
'aap' He said.
'Bhaiya yeh hai na inke gari karab hogayi to' Geet started.
'Geet tu andar ja' Tej said
'kya hame koi galti ke hai' Geet asked looking down.
'Nahi mere guriya bas mujhe inse kuch baat karne hai'
'tik hai, bye dost' Geet smiled.
'dost?' asked Maan confused.
'ha ab to ham dost hai na' Geet said and smiled and Maan smiled back
Geet followed Maan out of the car and towards Khurana Mansion. She walked slowly behind him. Maan irratated turned around
'kya tum tori jaldi nahi chalsakti' Geet hurried up.
In the mansion, Anjali was sitting and feeding Pari when she noticed her brother.
'chote' She smiled and ran up to him and hugged him.
'tum agaye hamne tumhe bohot miss kiya'
'Di mujhe aapse baat karni hai'
'ha baatein bad main sabse pehle aap haat muh do lo aur main khana lagati ho aur ha aabhi tori deir main Mohit Uncle aur Sameera ane wale hai' Anjali smiled. She then looked towards Maan was shocked to see a girl wearing marraige symbols in a bridal suit.
'Maan yeh sab kya hai yeh ladki'
'Di main abhi batata ho, aur tum andar yaha aajao'
'ek minute Maan' Anjali said grabbing the puja talli.
'di yeh sab'
'chup yeh hamari mehmaan hai to sawgat karna chahiye' Anjali said taking the aarti of Geet and Maan together unintentionally as a married couple.
'ab apna pehla kadam rako ghar ke andar' Anjali said. 'aur ha Maan yeh ladki kaun hai? Shaadi ka jora, inke pati kaha hai'
'Di' Maan said 'aap bet jaye' Maan took Anjali to the sofa. Geet followed silently. standing behind him.
'Di yeh meri'
'Main inki patni ho' Geet said. Anjali was shocked. Sameera and Mohit were at the door and were shocked.
'Mr Maan Singh Khurana ne mere saat, saath phere liye hai aur kannonan shaadi ke hai' Geet said. Maan looked at her in anger. Savitri Devi was coming down the stairs and was shocked.
PM later.. Comment please laptop low battery
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Posted: 14 years ago
THAT WAS AMAZING!
plz do update again soon xD

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Posted: 14 years ago
THAT WAS AMAZING!
plz do update again soon xD

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Thank you next update Will be in a few days time and a teaser (short one will be up soon today or tomz before pms are sent )
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet ne apna muh kyun khola
When Maan asked her not to speak she spoke yet
Pata nahi wat wat she will face now
Past was sweet
Maaneet meet was cute
Loved it
Geet was so cheerful at that tym
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesooome...
superb...
fab...
wonderful...
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm...
take care...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...their first meeting was sweet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Teaser

The door slammed shut. Geet turned to the door to see an angry fuming Maan. His eyes were the personification of fire rage and fury. Geet stood up trembling but tried to maintain her composure. He walked towards her in an intimidating nature. Geet walked back as he walked towards her. His each step more threatening than the last. She looked down at the floor no longer being able to look into the eyes. She hit the wall. Maan covered her exits. His arms on either sides of her.
'Mere patni hai na' Maan said as Geet struggled to move. He cupped her face harshly. Tears formed in her eyes.
'Sab ko batane ka bohot Jaldi ti na. Ab main wohi Karonga Jo har pati ka haq Hota hai' Geets eyes widened in fear. He pulled her dupatta of her neck and pushed her onto the bed. He took of his shirt and threw it on a side. Geet moved back towards the edge of the bed as he moved towards her. He forcefully laid her down and grabbed her hands above her head as he lay over her. Geet eyes were closed in fear. He moved his face closer to hers ...

What will happen next?? Find out in next update|||
why did Maan get angry?
What will Maan n Sameera do?
Who will help Geet in theSe times
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Posted: 14 years ago
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