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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

hey it waz awsome girl.. n i think either armaan is guilty of taking advantage of the drunk condn.. which he dint.. bt we knw that he is too good to be true...or is behaving aloof in order to control himself...

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bueaty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Awesome part...loveddd it to the core!!! 😳 will anxiously wait fr the nxt update.. 😍

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anshara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

awesome part

luv it soo much

cont soon nd thanks 4 pm

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Jyo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

-edited-

Sorry, I just wanted to write "edited" in style and make it look pretty. I have lost my head to studies! 😆

The part was A W E S O M E. Who says you cannot write those intimate scenes? OH WAIT! You say that! Idiot! I am still going red after reading that! ☺️ Loved the part where they kissed in the club.. ahem... and then bedroom scene! By god! Hotness! And.. that Chippendales joke 🤣 She is so.. let's just say in Armaan's words, Vegas illiterate! 🤣 Sorry, just cannot stop laughing on that! And I love Armaan because he is so adorably possessive about his munchikin. But then, she deserves a bit of fun as well :D And She is finally wearing the ring! 🥳 And it was sweet of her to keep it on her bracelet! Aww! Made me smile like an idiot! My dad is having doubts whether or not I am studying! 😆 Meh, AWOTB is more interesting than speeches! LOL! :D

But I gasped when his arms crushed me in his embrace, and he responded back, with fervor I had no idea he possessed.

This stuff makes me go red! And you say you cannot write anything like this! *sigh* wake up call needed Shru? :P Jokes :D

"Armaan!" I reprimanded. "Could you relax? Its just Chip & Dales! I like those chipmunks!" I shrugged. I saw Nikki, Abhi and Armaan give me 'What-a-retard' looks and frowned.

🤣 I am not laughing at her, I am laughing at the look the other three gave her! Gosh!

"I ain't going! I think you've turned me gay in public many times before! Aren't you satisfied?" Armaan retorted, as I rolled my eyes..

Brought back memories of times when I was new to AWOTB and started writing huge comments! You know what I felt like? I felt like a creep writing long comments all of a sudden! 🤣

"You're a goner my friend!"

I just read this as something completely and utterly disgustingly wrong. I thought ki Shru wouldn't possibly write that and read it again to realise my mistake! Embarrassing much! ☺️

"Yeah, this way it was safe and close to me!"

I wanted to go hug Riddhima! Armaan is a lucky guy to have her! Because she loves him like no one else ever will! :D

I saw his smile widen, as he quietly and happily slipped the ring in my finger.

FINALLY! WOOHOO! :D

"Well'It will definitely bother me'That asshole has got to keep his distance! But I trust you, I know you're mine, so why fear?" He shrugged.

Thank goodness he did not get angry! :D YAY!

And that whole scene! ☺️ It is having that effect on me! Really is! I told you I was terrible at them <<<<< This screams "SHRU! YOU ARE SO WRONG!" :D This scene turned out perfect! :)

And now for the question.. what the hell happened in Vegas? Is it because of what happened between them at the hotel? Whatever it is, fix it soon :P

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR EXAMS :D You'll do a freaking amazing job :D I know that for sure!

Love and luck

Jyotika

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PS: Told you I'd write a huge comment :D I kept my word :D

Edited by ..Jojo.. - 14 years ago

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..
Res :D Will edit today :)

How are you always awake in the middle of the night? 😲 😆

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Jyo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

How are you always awake in the middle of the night? 😲 😆

LOL! it was 5:30 ish at that time here :D So I woke up to study... not english.. not IPT.. but AWOTB :D :D :P

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

LOL! it was 5:30 ish at that time here :D So I woke up to study... not english.. not IPT.. but AWOTB :D :D :P

LOL! Hurry and edit na! I want to sleep! Its 2.30 here! 😆

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

RES!

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Weee, I read all of your updates! Chapter finito and I lalala LOVED it!

Lmaooo at Riddhima being all demanding about her dress! Typical girl! :D But yea 3k is a LOT of money.. I don't blame Armaan for not buyin it for her, that's a big hell no! LOL

At first I felt bad for Riddhima cause Armaan wouldn't let her do anything in Vegas; no drinking , no shopping and no gambling, dude why did you bring her to Vegas then?? :S

But, when the girls went shopping and bought those dresses I was like woahhh, them boys better watch out! Haha I loved the turned on Armaan sooo freakin much! LOL he was fumbling, ahhh <3 I could so imagine him being like that ahaha :P

I loved the possessive him at the club! Aww he was so cute, not letting Riddhima go!

The kiss just added onto the sexyness of AR! 😉

You don't even know how much I love the drunk Riddhima!!! Lmaoo she's hilarious when she's drunk! She would want a piggyback ride to her room, haha goshh 😆

Awww she's finally wearing the ring! I'm so happy for them! <3 She was so cute when she said she wants to wear the ring! Ahhh cuties!

But no matter how hard Armaan tried to keep his distance from her, he couldn't help but give in! Dadadayummm that part was freakin smexy Shru ;) LOL Seriously, who said you can't write those intimate moments?!? Cause the kiss in the club and their bedroom romance ;) was beautifully written!

But what the hell happened to Armaan?! Weirdooo, is he guilty about that night?? 😕

Aww poor Riddhima is crying, hope everything turns out well between the two! I really wanna know what happened to Armaan :(

Well this comment is long as kajnsajkdnajndaj !! I didn't realize that but oh well :)

Update asa you cannn <3

Edited by Simmy003 - 14 years ago

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#299

hey dear

so just finished reading the part and i just loved it alot... it was super duper cute and awesome. i always did like a drunk ridzi. so i was so happy that u showed a bit of her :D...

also liked the part about the Chippendales lmaoo ridzi can be such a cutie at time i tell you. heheheh... but i wont lie i liked this part alot cause it had a wild side to it :)...

the ending was a bit sad but i know you will write the next part which will make it all better... and i hope both armaan and riddhima solve there problems and talk to each other soon... cant see them so distant for long :(..

and once again im happy that u decided to continued with this ff on this thread :).. and since i promised i will write a long comment here it is :D...

hope you enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed reading ur part and writing this :)

all the best for ur school and tc

sej<3

ps thnx for the PM :D and awesome part once again 👏😊

Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

LOL! Hurry and edit na! I want to sleep! Its 2.30 here! 😆

Go sleep and see my comment 2morow. I still cannot get over their bedroom scene. It's making me go ☺️. I will be writing [or at least trying to] a huge comment! :D So, I will take time :P You should sleep! It's too late :P

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