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Sone se pehle comment edit kardoongi. But I'm not in that good a mood so it might not come tonight :P

Oh, my god. H O T!!

And if you can, please provide a link when you send a PM.. it becomes easier that way (:

I dnt noe why u think it was bad
It was perfect! loved all AR scene

Don't u dare call that romantic physical moment lame, it was beatifully written, I will not hear a word against it, t'was amazing I loved the entire part, everything just connected perfectly and I love armaan's character even more now, I find it sooo adorable, like the was he was distancing himself after the ahem ahem bit, knowing him he is probably embarrassed or over thinking the situation and thinking that he took advantage of ridhima or BOTH? But sweety take ur time for the next part ok, I don't want you to stress out about lagging behind in notes, do it whenever u take a lil break from study to relax, but yes I don't want u to stress out and have too many things on ur plate at once, so just take it step by step :) the part like I said before was wonderful I love the way u write man, u just connect everything so perfectly and the entire part flows fantastically, you should seriously consider publishing this ff, I am not kidding, ur vocabulary, part and sentence structures are amazing and is the way of ur writing, it doesn't bore me, as a reader I know a good book/ story/ fanfiction is amazing when the reader gets sooo into it that thy cannot put it down, ur ff does just that, hats to u :) it's marvelous :) keep up the wonderful work :) u have a gift in writing and u should definitely continue writing :)

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

LMAO ab sab ko pata chal gaya why he's pissed...Wee I'm so glad I was in the loop...mereko pehle se pata tha ...owing to my "wittle baby" drama 🤣

Gosh. I love me. 😎

Fine! I love you guys too, bas? Oh whatever, I'm just doing tp :P

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Abbe oyye Jhansi ki Raani! Jaake apna thread check kar! 🤪