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Originally posted by: Simmy003

RES! I have to read a lot, dammit! ;D

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

Go sleep and see my comment 2morow. I still cannot get over their bedroom scene. It's making me go ☺️. I will be writing [or at least trying to] a huge comment! :D So, I will take time :P You should sleep! It's too late :P

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

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Thola jaldiii likhooo nnaaa...Mujhe palna haiii! 😭

Originally posted by: sejal719

hey dear

so just finished reading the part and i just loved it alot... it was super duper cute and awesome. i always did like a drunk ridzi. so i was so happy that u showed a bit of her :D...

also liked the part about the Chippendales lmaoo ridzi can be such a cutie at time i tell you. heheheh... but i wont lie i liked this part alot cause it had a wild side to it :)...

the ending was a bit sad but i know you will write the next part which will make it all better... and i hope both armaan and riddhima solve there problems and talk to each other soon... cant see them so distant for long :(..

and once again im happy that u decided to continued with this ff on this thread :).. and since i promised i will write a long comment here it is :D...

hope you enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed reading ur part and writing this :)

all the best for ur school and tc

sej<3

ps thnx for the PM :D and awesome part once again 👏😊

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

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And that Chippendales thingy - uh, yeah, that was me! I thought it was the chipmunks, and I thought it would add some comedy, so i put my embarrassing moment in the FF! 😆

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

-edited-

Sorry, I just wanted to write "edited" in style and make it look pretty. I have lost my head to studies! 😆

The part was A W E S O M E. Who says you cannot write those intimate scenes? OH WAIT! You say that! Idiot! I am still going red after reading that! ☺️ Loved the part where they kissed in the club.. ahem... and then bedroom scene! By god! Hotness! And.. that Chippendales joke 🤣 She is so.. let's just say in Armaan's words, Vegas illiterate! 🤣 Sorry, just cannot stop laughing on that! And I love Armaan because he is so adorably possessive about his munchikin. But then, she deserves a bit of fun as well :D And She is finally wearing the ring! 🥳 And it was sweet of her to keep it on her bracelet! Aww! Made me smile like an idiot! My dad is having doubts whether or not I am studying! 😆 Meh, AWOTB is more interesting than speeches! LOL! :D

But I gasped when his arms crushed me in his embrace, and he responded back, with fervor I had no idea he possessed.

This stuff makes me go red! And you say you cannot write anything like this! *sigh* wake up call needed Shru? :P Jokes :D

"Armaan!" I reprimanded. "Could you relax? Its just Chip & Dales! I like those chipmunks!" I shrugged. I saw Nikki, Abhi and Armaan give me 'What-a-retard' looks and frowned.

🤣 I am not laughing at her, I am laughing at the look the other three gave her! Gosh!

"I ain't going! I think you've turned me gay in public many times before! Aren't you satisfied?" Armaan retorted, as I rolled my eyes..

Brought back memories of times when I was new to AWOTB and started writing huge comments! You know what I felt like? I felt like a creep writing long comments all of a sudden! 🤣

"You're a goner my friend!"

I just read this as something completely and utterly disgustingly wrong. I thought ki Shru wouldn't possibly write that and read it again to realise my mistake! Embarrassing much! ☺️

"Yeah, this way it was safe and close to me!"

I wanted to go hug Riddhima! Armaan is a lucky guy to have her! Because she loves him like no one else ever will! :D

I saw his smile widen, as he quietly and happily slipped the ring in my finger.

FINALLY! WOOHOO! :D

"Well'It will definitely bother me'That asshole has got to keep his distance! But I trust you, I know you're mine, so why fear?" He shrugged.

Thank goodness he did not get angry! :D YAY!

And that whole scene! ☺️ It is having that effect on me! Really is! I told you I was terrible at them <<<<< This screams "SHRU! YOU ARE SO WRONG!" :D This scene turned out perfect! :)

And now for the question.. what the hell happened in Vegas? Is it because of what happened between them at the hotel? Whatever it is, fix it soon :P

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR EXAMS :D You'll do a freaking amazing job :D I know that for sure!

Love and luck

Jyotika

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PS: Told you I'd write a huge comment :D I kept my word :D

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Meri Mojo-Jojo!!!!!! 🤗

First, I like the style of the 'edited'! 😆

Second, yeah that Chippendales thing was me actually! When Kavi (armaania13) told me about them, I thought she meant the chipmunks! 🤣

LOL! No further comments on that! 😆

And the whole intimacy part, I still don't like it, probably because I've read so much better before!

And about the whole bracelet thing, yeah I just missed that charm bracelet a lot, so thought of adding that! And YAY, she wore the ring! LOL! Even I was damn happy about that! 😆

Yeah, that's what happened in Vegas! Now why Armaan's behaving that way, you'll have to wait for long to see that, because I don't think I'll be updating any time soon now! 😃 Saali exams peecha nai chhodti! 😃

Thank you! 🤗