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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: d_sonia

Hi Loved ur all update its awesome pls continue soon

thanx i will be updating today
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Bul3

just yesterday i saw this movie and then today I saw your FF on its concept so went on reading it..it is freaking cute☺️!!...its funny,cute,sweet and LOVELY!..I loved Maaneet moments like Geet sitting on his lap and hugging him and crying and Maan consoling her,than Geet sleeping beside Maan on his arm,Maaneet fighting with each-other for blanket and bed..aw..Geet trying to sit on Maan's head was so funny and cute!..maan coming along Geet for her bhoot orientation programme 😆..ah,Geet checking out Maan and complementing😉..i feel her chori in the precap has something to do with her again checking him out😆..really nicely written..and as you wanted it to be,it is light and really fun to read👍🏼..by Dev calling Geet bhabhi I wonder if she was married or engaged and Dev found some clue(like jewellery) while trying to find about her!..anyways nice work dear and continue soon!😊

thankyou so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww that is such a cute emoyion.
ok i am writing now.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey all here is the update
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Part 10:

Bro what the hell who are you talking too

Kisi se nahi

To khud se baak ker re ho kia?

Umm nahi

Meanwhile geet took all the blanket and lied down on one side of bed.Maan looked at her and shook his head

What?

Kia?

I did not ask you to translate what I asked what are you doing?

What are you doing in my room. Out right now.

Nahi jao ga jab tak batate nahi ho

Thk hai first you tell me why do you call her bhabhi

Oh that… he smiled you tell me the reason and I will tell you the answer.

No you tell me and then I will tell you what I was doing.

Fine wo papers me you had signed in husband's place jo bhabhi k hospital or treatment charges k thy.

What geet sat up?

What? Maan shouted too.

You signed as my husband..

You asked me too. And now this duffer thinks you are my wife.

Ye kia ho raha hai

I never asked you too.

Tum chup raho he said to dev and then to geet

Acha wo kia tha maan mujhe bacha lo mujhe marna nahi hai. Unhai kaho plug na pull kare bla bla.

You are ahhh.she pulled all the blanket to her side half under her and half over her.

Bro who r u talking too.

Is geet se or kis se

Mera blanket wapis ker. Abhi

Nahi karo gi

He tried to pull the blanket but her pull was more stronger being bhoot.

Dev was loking at his bro

Bechare geet bhabhi ka sadma itna zor se laga hai…

Maan mera blanket choro.

Geet ye mera blanket hai.

She picked up his pillow and threw it on him.

Ye kia tha. Ye kaise tha. Dev had seen the flying pillow he cd not blv his eyes.

She picked the other pillow and threw it on him too.

Bro… and he fell down. His fall made them realize what they were doing.

Oh shoot. Maan bent down at him

Dev dev you allright. He opened his eyes.

Bro the pillow was flying.

Ufuu geet threw it at me.

You are playing trick at me. Haina he tried to laugh but choked.

Geet pani lao.

She immediately brought pani.

Dev saw the flying glass of water

Ahhh. He tried to get up and fell on the other side he crawled back to the opposite cornor

Dev stop shouting you are even pathetic then geet.

you called me pathetic
tum apna mu band rakho thori dair
dev Darne ki zarorat nahi hai. Geet ki soul us ki body me nahi ja sakti hence ye mere sath reh ri hai.

Soul. Bhoot geet ka bhoot. Bhoot he started shouting again.

Geet picked up the cushion and threw at him

And dev fainted out of fear.

What was that for

He called me bhoot

But that's what you are tum khud koo bhi bhoot khti ho

To

To he said to usko mara q?

Aise he looked dramatic.

Goshh. You both are crazy. He picked dev up and put him on his sofa.

Isko is k kamre me chor k ao.

mujhe apni kamar nahi torni Tum bhoot ho tumhare pass ziada strength hai

jao chor ao.

Nahi me parae mardo ko hath nahi lagati. She climbed back on bed and slept on her side.

Drama . he shook his head and came and lied down on his side

Parae mardo ko hath nahi lagati or mere bed pe so ri hai. He liked it somewhere. He turned off the light only moon light coming in the room.after few mints he felt a light touch on his back and chest. He looked down geet had hugged him in her sleep.

He was about to put her hand away when he stopped.

He smiled choti choti si to wishes hai bechari kitni takleef me hai agar mujhe tang ker k is ka dhayan hat ta hai to I don't mind . he patted her hand on his chest and closed his eyes too.

PRECAP:
Maan catching geet's chori😉😉😆😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
funny n awesome part
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is just awesome!!!
Going better & better with each update
Dev dar kaye mare faint ho gaye😆
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: azee11

this is just awesome!!!

Going better & better with each update
Dev dar kaye mare faint ho gaye😆
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

hehhehehe
i promised a laughter dose every update
thanx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update continue soon eagerly waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
You know na that i am in love with this fantabulous FF...seriously mazaa aa gaay aaj ka update padh ke...amazing and awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum,cute and funny part...
update soon

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