Mystery Girl updated Note on 148 - Page 88

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hey it was one awesome update...with the way maan completely chose to ignore the news and believing in his love...
i am completely awed by his reponse..coz it was completely different and made me respect him more for his unshakeable love and faith on his geet, god and his love...
loved the update
reva

I know you are busy ..still please dont ignore read

I am new in FF writing , so don't know much ,

My First FF which is completed in paper left halfway because I understood it need terrific modifications , which I will do after my exams '.and I respect the support u given me for that .

And Maaneet Moments '..

like some want more Maneet moments , but justice to story is important , right so , please u have to wait ..in this story '

To fill maaneet moment I have to put it in their dreams ..lol no other chance now..

As She locked up in sajjan haveli cant have nay such dream and he is very busy to dream anything , he is in mission get Id and find Geet.

I know its now in very sad pace , and not wanted any of you get sad with my updates and I started another FF ,when 'sading' in Mystery started'..which is not at all serious one ''.. Fully faltoo like some bodies ID here ..lol

and in the other FF of mine readers are tortured with so much Maneet moments that they started to complain , stop Maneet moments ..Lol, please , I am still learning to balance between maaneet Moments in Updates and Flow of story '.In this sad to say , you have to wait a little here' to have Maneet moments 'like you ..hi hi .. mee too want that wink wink😳 blushing lol

please forgive my Craziness '.. Its just a fiction 'And don't bother about Italian names and places bla bla because from my previous experience I know most of you don't like too much characters 'these characters for this part only '..,

Whatever happened , whoever came and gone These Italians never bothered to leave from my wild fantasy world , so they will often roam in my stories un invited please bear them in this update for the sake of Maan ..and actually for Amruth , remember the kshatrya princess ..Maan's mom'.bold and beautiful '

Chapter 33.An Italian Job

Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting

Originally posted by: nazsij

hahahahahaha it was really funny yaar.so much drama.slave banadiya uper se amrutha ki dialauge.wah kya bath hai.drama queen geet ki dramabas sasural.loved it.

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii magicia..
so much happened...and thanks for incorporating this part...as u said this was very much needed and no complaints about no maneet moments./...a ff can sustain only on maneet moments...as we need to take the story further...well i like ur obsession with the italian names and mafia..and u did an awesome job, the way u incorporated it in ur story without making it look misplaced or a misfit...
i love the flow of the story...
maan's mom is indeed a drama queen..with her cliched dialogues😆...but then all maas are like this only
loved the update to core
keep writing
love u
reva