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Posted: 14 years ago
both parts r awesome. omg geet is really a drama queen😆😆😆😆. i feel bad for her when she said she can't wear red sari. ohhh feel bad for maan's plight tooo. poor guy can't do anything rt now. yaar jaldi se use theak karo naaa
thanks for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
loved the drama part.
I wonder what will happen when she will know maan know everything
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet is a real sense Drama queen..
haa..bechara maan...

awesum update girl...
continue super soon!!
btw..tht scene..
he kissing her feet in his dreamland
and she feeling it on her...
tht was sooo sensuous!!!!
luvd tht u knw!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u for PM's, finally managed to read it
i like the bubbly geet who shares everything to him, its ironic how perfectly maan understands her, but she cant
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank u for ur comments

Edited by magicia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Beautiful update'.your work is really great'.I am trying to feel geet's inner 'turmoil '.practically she is alone ''there is actually no one ,with whom she can share her mental anguish'.I loved the way geet shared all her daily activities to her huggy buddy'😉😆

Now maan has also realized his feelings for geet'.maan's self thought is awesome'Eagerly waiting for the next part to know' 😊


Yup she is ...alone ..but dont worry lets set up Maan ...

.I loved the way geet shared all her daily activities to her huggy buddy

Thats Destiny ...

Now maan has also realized his feelings for geet'.maan's self thought is

what else bechara do ..or will she let him do anything else
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loved it!!
Cute geet!!
Thx for the pm!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


Comments Reply >>please read >>>

06 August 2011

16:26

I read all the comments so lovely lively ..thank you ... so answering section...


Yar Sab Maan Pe kyun Tharas Kha Rahey LOL ...

cant you see the great enjoyment he is having in that state ...tooo...LOLL

Well his being in Coma was destiny ...but Geet Beside ..that too such crazy ..beautiful...is a blessing ..lol and he is in deep deep love with her ..

And Geet... Well uskey barey meim kya kahooo ...This Geet is inside everyone of us...

But most of us are given chances to explore our craziness , with friends and chit chats ...Geet Never had such a chance ... And she don't know how to do it ,how to control her emotions in natural way ..unless we given chance to unleash we will not know how to control right ??? ..she was always deprived of such softness cuteness of life from very early childhood ...

And Maan being understanding .her perfectly ..

That's because he is not having any other workk ..other than thinking about her ..morning to eve he thinks about her and when she in front of him .his mind goes wild and start to dream ..almost all *shh* ahem ahem types ..lol

If he is not in Coma , he may be doing trecking day time , evening do Thai chi ..and night may be watching ; .eek eek ..WWF .

ha ..teasing in between .."senti" .lol its a senti story ..basically ..

Its roots I got from someone , my classmate during my teens she was never friendly to anybody ... she always kept her matured divine posture in her dull shade clothes ..

I can't forget the sparkle, in my classmate's eyes who was destined to be a nun because of her poverty ..

When she touches the colorful soft chiffon shawls with works of mine

But destiny .

And this story neither a tribute nor a dedication to her ..its just my craziness .. i dont want to degrade her by any means ...and pray for her to get all happiness in whatever life she chooses

Me not want to be senti type ..lekin kya karey ..kabhena kabhee senti hojathee hoom

And like in the movie illusionist ..

" My intention is only to entertain ..nothing more ."

.so here I am with teasers .to tease u and me get teased

And buddies I am very sad because of the less number of likes in spite of wonderful comments of my buddies Could anybody tell me how to promote my story ..me greedy ..and sometimes childish and crazy too

..cant u see I m writing this Geet ..so I some where ..little crazy too.

Ok I want more likes .

My huby do not read any part of my story .. Well ..me too ashamed to show him this In order he not read this stuff , I force him to read ..lol he do just opposite what I say ..lol clever me

And He don't read it

But when I shared my sorrow of less likes ..he told me ..why don't you stop writing your "pink"coloured story ..instead concentrate on me ..*ahem*ahem* and ..make a post requesting just .."please like my post"

And he is sure I will get more likes than my "pinky" story post LOL

Buddies I just thought I will share this ..isn't it funny ?..LOL seeing less likes I too feel ...

Please press like button

Its giving lots and lots of pleasure and ..pagal me..wish one day it reach 400/500 yet another crazy dreamm.. actually i cant show him this story at all ...embarassed😳 and then I will show him..well I don't like "boys" and their attitude (wink wink ..something else ..*ahem *ahem * I like ..lol) .so I will show him and say look honey what I got . ..he he ..well Tom and Jerry is much friendlier than Us ..lol

i want to thank each and everyone of you , commenting and motivating me...thank you ..

Please add magiciapm to your buddy list to get future updates.. since its ramadan and i am finding not enough time to update and send pms ..and my friends complaining ..so please add os that i will get a smaller list, as i am assuming from my likes ... and will be easy for me to send pms

Edited by magicia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 18.Kinship Undefined

06 August 2011

14:23


Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

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to get Daily Updates ...Love U ..Please Motivate me With your Likes as It became essential to survive here in India Forum since Maaneet gone off air  

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Its all Pink Beware !😳


  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting

Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago

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