Samne Wali Khidki ... MAANEET FF part 11 updated - Page 15

From where should I start...right from the starting ...I thouroughly enjoyed each and every part

It's hilarious 🤣🤣 ...your first lines itself hooKed me to this FF

"She is trying to civilize this boys from 2 years but all her efforts has gone to vain and suddenly today they are doing this and how! Like if they don't do it now Indian Gov will execute them. "

"What's the matter? Bunch of vagabonds are getting civilized all of a sudden? Has Indian Gov passed any decree or all of your bosses are giving a visit together?"

They were hilarious!!!!!

And these are the few parts of your FF which I loved to the core!!! I really wanna specify them as I enjoyed them

eet: Cleopatra was not beautiful at all. Its Shakespeare who portrayed her as a beautiful lady in his drama. I definitely look better than her.

Oh God!!! This definitely reminded me something ...

It was seriously awesome!! Is it your creation or is it really in the movie??

Anyways I thoroughly enjoyed the part She smiled and snapped her choti behind her back and get out from their house

And the best part was bhaag bhaag D.K Bose!!!🤣🤣🤣

And Uncle's bashan reminded me of incidents of my life..I still remember while coming from a very rocking party I was sitting in the car and talking to my dad about the missing plants on the dividers and an Uncle who was in the car...spoke about each and everyting right from the plants to the construction of fly-overs ,tenders 😕 and what not..and the worst part is I couldn't even sleep ...I had to smile and nod m head...pity me 😆...and they were a lot of incidents!!!🥱

And loved that Vampire-human-werewolf-naagin-chidiya ghar nautanki!!!!🤣🤣

You really amaze me with your writings not everyone manage to write such comical scenes that too without any cheap or irritating convo's.

Frankly speaking more than Maan-Geet story I love the way you describe the surroundings and other people...it's quite realistic and funny.👏👏

Dunno why but strangely yourthe D.k bose part reminded me of my trips to my hometown where very morning ,all the retired people sit together with a cup of coffee discussing all the issues beginning from the political scenario and the changes in younger generation .😛

And not to forget to mention your small small sentences about the sleeping dogs ,rare patrolling , Credit card to pay the fine ...they reminded me of the comical strips of my news-paper!!😉

Thanks a lot for such refreshing and wonderful FF..!!⭐️⭐️

Your are an amazing writer!!👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

From where should I start...right from the starting ...I thouroughly enjoyed each and every part

It's hilarious 🤣🤣 ...your first lines itself hooKed me to this FF

"She is trying to civilize this boys from 2 years but all her efforts has gone to vain and suddenly today they are doing this and how! Like if they don't do it now Indian Gov will execute them. "

"What's the matter? Bunch of vagabonds are getting civilized all of a sudden? Has Indian Gov passed any decree or all of your bosses are giving a visit together?"

They were hilarious!!!!!

And these are the few parts of your FF which I loved to the core!!! I really wanna specify them as I enjoyed them

eet: Cleopatra was not beautiful at all. Its Shakespeare who portrayed her as a beautiful lady in his drama. I definitely look better than her.

Oh God!!! This definitely reminded me something ...

It was seriously awesome!! Is it your creation or is it really in the movie??

Anyways I thoroughly enjoyed the part She smiled and snapped her choti behind her back and get out from their house

And the best part was bhaag bhaag D.K Bose!!!🤣🤣🤣

And Uncle's bashan reminded me of incidents of my life..I still remember while coming from a very rocking party I was sitting in the car and talking to my dad about the missing plants on the dividers and an Uncle who was in the car...spoke about each and everyting right from the plants to the construction of fly-overs ,tenders 😕 and what not..and the worst part is I couldn't even sleep ...I had to smile and nod m head...pity me 😆...and they were a lot of incidents!!!🥱

And loved that Vampire-human-werewolf-naagin-chidiya ghar nautanki!!!!🤣🤣

You really amaze me with your writings not everyone manage to write such comical scenes that too without any cheap or irritating convo's.

Frankly speaking more than Maan-Geet story I love the way you describe the surroundings and other people...it's quite realistic and funny.👏👏

Dunno why but strangely yourthe D.k bose part reminded me of my trips to my hometown where very morning ,all the retired people sit together with a cup of coffee discussing all the issues beginning from the political scenario and the changes in younger generation .😛

And not to forget to mention your small small sentences about the sleeping dogs ,rare patrolling , Credit card to pay the fine ...they reminded me of the comical strips of my news-paper!!😉

Thanks a lot for such refreshing and wonderful FF..!!⭐️⭐️

Your are an amazing writer!!👍🏼👍🏼

I have read youanother FF...Mrityunjaya before 3 days but couldn't comment..as I had to leave .

wow, lovely update...
kurukshetra se vrindavan...lolzzz
very nice update dear...
continue soon...
wud be waiting...

loved it

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

I have read youanother FF...Mrityunjaya before 3 days but couldn't comment..as I had to leave .

and yesterday was 31st jan so ...😆😆

I'll comment there too...have no words for that

and must say...I was shocked to read Mrityunjaya after reading this FF...this is so comical and that's so...

well I have no words for that 😍

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

thanks a lotttfor this comment... this things wasn't in the movie... its only inspired not a copy of the movie... all the dialogues are original n most of d scenes too

n about D K Bose yah even I have this kindda experiences... my uncles n aunts always do such things ... they starts with something and then every time ends how young gen has changed😉

n loved that u felt it funny coz comedy is not my genre of writing... its 1st time I tried this... if u read my other ffs they r completely different ... I am not enough confident in ds genre.. ur review gave me confidence😊

...😊