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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

MAHII!!! send me a pm when you write moreee! it wuz AMAZINGG! n just how i imagined it! I luved it alot!!

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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Kya baat hai mahi...itni aage nikal gayi😉

I m impressed yaar...

Love the way you wrote the whole scene

couldnt stop myself from laughing the whole time

when ASR was burning😆

If you dont mind...please give me the honours to throw

kerosene on him 😳

Devan n Khushi were really cute 😍 (no eggs on me for dis pls)

I cant wait for more... continue wit it 👏

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Omg thats awesome !! Always wanted to see a track like this. I really hope cvs get Naman in the show. Continue as soon as you can. Cannot wait to read the next part 😳

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Lily2011

@Lily2011

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

wow! wat a gr8 start. hope u continue. plzz add me in ur pm list wen will u write next part of ff

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Great FF Mahi !! Totally loved the update. Thanks so much for PMing me.🤗 Looking forward to the next part. Plz do PM me!😳

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Sanaa

@xxsanaaaxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

wow, this is exactly what Iwas looking for!!! thanks for writing a story about this show... i loveit!!! good work! goodluck with the other stories..:D

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Silvy

@SilverBell

Viewbie

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Great Job. With The FF. (:

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Whoa Maahi awesome girl.. I loved it!! 👏

Update soon... I love Devan Khushi chemistry... in fact more than Arshi for the time being... I love the character you've sketched out of Devan. Brilliant. love it!!!