D4: Dil Dosti Dard Dee..FF Part 8/page 42 - Page 12

Originally posted by: subtlesapphire

oh WOWZAAA that was amazing, next time im hoping that daven and khushi... like maybe daven gets close with khushi, and arnav ko ghusaaa is unbearable and he comes and hits daven or something... 😍

AND THE LAST LINE... UFFF

a name for your FF: Cheen (snach) loongah tumhe duniya se...

maybe not sure...

Nice suggestion... will work on it definitely... I like it too... plus I like the name of the title... will surely keep it as one of the choices!!

Originally posted by: aquablue17

omg mahi! thanks for the pm. i am absolutely loving the jealous ASR! too cute. n the last line is amazingg! i just luv it!! thanks mahi for this

The last line is the fruit of my Shaitani dimag 😈... lol...you're welcome Mya!!... thanks for reading!!

Originally posted by: moon_mine

lovd ur ff!!!!

lovd the jealous ASR!!!

can u pls add me to ur pm list!!!!

You're in my pm list hun!!... thanks for the kind words!!👏😃

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

wow that was a superb update mahi 🤗

im sooo very sorry for being late this time doll

dis jealous arnie is super cute man!! devan really irritates him isn't it?!? no wonder he feels like smashin his jaw 🤣

but our jalebi girl hates her big time... dont blame her after watever happened but wish she sees da good side of arnie...

ufff dis stupid blah always beeps in at da wrong time!!!

i feel bad for arnie boy...

can't wait to read da next update sweets!

luv u ☺️

I'm gearing up for some solid action soon... and am planning to have someone donate some brains to La... lol... she's such a bimbo man!!... thanks for reading Nadz... means a lot!!🤗

Originally posted by: magi11

love your ff... pls continue writing... waiting for th e next update

Thanks a ton for appreciating!!😃

WOW Mahi, that was awesome !! 👏

Originally posted by: jeb1

Awesome update mahi

plz continue soon

Thanks a lot😃

Originally posted by: SK1991

mahi...🤗

superb ya...sooo nice...awww my ASR.. in jealous...😳 waiting for next update ya...👏

Thanks a lot Shanks!!... will post the new update soon!!

Originally posted by: aa_mnhs

only if there was a love button. the last lines especially made it wonderful when arnav talks about his 'haq' :)

Awww that is sooo sweet!!... thanks a million!!🤗