will this night ends? (OS) part 11 pg 66 uptd... - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome story... so touchy, pls update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome and painful parts hate that bitch anita 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats on new OS🥳

Brilliant one!!!

Beautiful but yet sad one.

Finally Maan got flashes of Geet & memories.

Come on ...Go & Save her ...she needs u ...Its really paining to see her in that condition.

cont. soon

Ps: Sorry for very late comment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear i just finish reading all the parts.
feeling sad for geet
adi and pinky are true frnds
i hope he will hspital on time
loved braveness in pinky
maan presence can bring her alive
painful parts
i hate anitha
loved all parts
awesome and superb
cont soon
plz pm me after updating

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome OS!!
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 7

his face glowed in happiness...he stretched his hand to touch her...but then...she disappeared leaving darkness around him..."geet" maan screamed in pain of losing her...his head started spinning again...he cried in pain...holding his head...tears flowed from his eyes continuously...his vision became blur...soon he collapsed on floor...daadi came running out of her room when she heard maan's scream...she ran to maan crying not knowing what happened to him...anita stood speechless looking at weird behavior of maan...

"maan beta..kya hua...aankhen kholo beta..." cried daadi in pain...but maan didn't respond...anita kept looking at maan and daadi in shock...

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"maan"

maan heard someone calling his name...

"maan"

again he heard his name...

it was her voice...maan recognised it...he knew it was her who is calling him...her voice brought sensation in him...slowly movement came in him...daadi looked at maan in confusion and surprise when he started moving...

"maan"

"maan"

again her voice reached him...he felt so nice when he heard his name from her...her voice motivated him...her voice was like a new breath to him...he knew she is so near him...maan slowly opened his eyes ..to see her...to feel her..to touch her...to love her...

When he opened his eyes...he saw geet sitting beside him in white dress and open hair looking at him lovingly with a beautiful smile on her angelic face...
maan eyes widened in surprise when he looked at her...a smile came upon his face...his eyes clouded with tears...geet gently touched his cheeks again calling his name....maan He closed his eyes feeling her touch...when he opened his eyes he saw geet removing her hand from him...again sadness came upon him...he tried to catch her hand...not letting her to go...but geet smiled and stood up...maan became restless...

"geet...mujhe chodke math jao ...plz..." he pleaded...

geet smiled and stood up...giving the same loving look to maan...he looked at her in shock...not knowing why she was leaving her...

"geet...mere paas hi raho...mujhe chodke math joa..."he pleaded again with tears in eyes...

geet smiled again...and nodded her head...she then started walking away from maan ...without breaking eye contact with him...maan stretched his hand towards geet to stop her...to touch her...but his attempts were invain...

geet walked away from him...looking at him... maan couldnot bear that pain...he stood up...to reach geet...he walked towards her to stop her...

daadi and anita looked at each other in confusion when maan was talking to himself...

"maan beta waha koi nahi hey...aap yeh kya kar rahe hey" cried daadi looking at maan's condition...

maan followed geet ...trying to stop her ...crying.."geet ruk jao...mujhe chod ker math jao"..he didn't notice that he came outside the KM trying to stop geet...

Adi went outside to get taxi...and pinky was sitting in the ambulance crying... with geet's head on her lap...

geet who was walking away from maan...finally stopped...at the ambulance...she turned back...and looked at maan with tears in her eyes...she stretched her arms towards maan...asking him to come...near her.

maan without wasting a second ran towards her...with the energy left in him...in a fear that he might loose her...when maan reached and tried to touch her...geet disappeared...

maan cried in pain and looked around madly for geet...then his eyes fell on geet...who was lying lifeless on pinky's lap...


to be continued...


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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update...finally the voice of his heart n soul reached his ears n his eyes...
I m so glad n happy.
Thank u for the update, it is fab.
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved part 5 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

sorry 4 d late comment ... was out of town ...
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved part 6 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

sorry was out of town so could not comment earlier ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG AMAZING
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
plz try to update your other works too plz as i'm eagerly waiting :DD

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