AK FF--keepthemoon--preview pg 56

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^^banner credit^^ meee :P


Hi guys..

my name's Aashi😃


i hav an FF here tht i wanna share with u all..and just to let u know please do not give credit to me because this FF doesnt belong to me..so just keep that in mind, u r of course welcome to leave ur comments😃


Author of FF: saregama_fan


so here is the preview:


Time Travel

The wedding day, suppose to be one of the best days in a girl's life, turned into her worst? How does it happen? It happens if the man you are about to marry, is in love with someone else and you know it, but can't do anything about it. How it happened to me, you ask' Well to answer that we will have to start from the very beginning. I will have to take you back into time. So if you are ready fasten your seat belts and hold tight'


INDEX:

PART 1..PAGE 1

PART 2..PAGE 3

PART 3..PAGE 6

PART 4..PAGE 9

PART 5..PAGE 10

PART 6..PAGE 13

PART 7..PAGE 16

PART 8..PAGE 19

PART 9..PAGE 23

PART 10..PAGE 27

PART 11..PAGE 30

PART 12..PAGE 35

PART 13..PAGE 39

PART 14..PAGE 40

PART 15..PAGE 43

PART 16..PAGE 49

PART 17..PAGE 53

Preview..PAGE 56 <<< NEW



So there it is..u must hav guessed tht its in khushi's POV 😆

so plz leave ur comment nd press the like button😉

tell me whether it should be continued or not😃

the 1st part will come after a while..

but lets see the comments first😆


and

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continue...will love to read more..
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please continue! i would LOVE to read more👍🏼
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omg!! pM me plzz !! i luv this idea
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^^banner credit^^ meee :P

Part 1


Time Travel


The wedding day, suppose to be one of the best days in a girl's life, turned into her worst? How does it happen? It happens if the man you are about to marry, is in love with someone else and you know it, but can't do anything about it. How it happened to me, you ask.. Well to answer that we will have to start from the very beginning. I will have to take you back into time. So if you are ready fasten your seat belts and hold tight..

We are breaking all barriers of logic and science, as we travel back through space and time... whooosshhh...whoooshhh...Okay okay, I'll cut out the sound effects, I think you get enough sound effects anyways with a certain someone's k-shows...😉

Okay so here we are. There I am wrapped in a tiny little baby pink blanket, giggling. Don't I look so cute, cuddly and beautiful? I always knew I was special. I am just so cute; all the baby boys are looking at me. Wait a minute; those are not my parents? Why are they picking me up? Oh opps, I am actually the baby beside the cute baby. *Insert nervous laugh here*. Let's just fast-forward this part, who cares about a bunch of babies anyways. Ok so here we are, aww, my father is looking at my report card, and he looks so proud his eyes are welling up with tears of joy. Oh, he is bending down to kiss me. Wait a minute! That is my older sister Payal! It's not my report card he is holding. *Ahem* fast-forward. There I am setting up a prank, and then falling for it myself. Right. Fast-forward. Hey look I am getting an award on sports day! Let's get a closer look on the trophy and see what I got it for. "A special award for effort, (for coming last in four races consecutively)". Okay, that's it. Fast forward, fast forward, fast forward.

Aha! Stop! We are finally here! My college. And look there I am. What? You can't see me? Okay, you see that girl with the lovely long hair, the beautiful glowing skin, the perfectly manicured hands, and the perfect make-up on her face. Yes! Yes, the girl with the name-brand clothes. Okay now look to her left; you will see a girl with a funky hair-style, with blue and pink highlights in her hair, black nail polish on her finger nails, neon pink t-shirt. Yes! Yes, her, the one who has heavy eye-liner on. Look directly in front of her. There I am. Which one? Come on guys, the one with her hair high in a short little pony tail? A white t-shirt with different paints smeared all over, with a red long sleeve shirt underneath? Blue jean ripped at the knees, and not because I bought them that way, just because they are my favourite pair and I wear them so much. There is rip on the jeans at the back as well, but it is has been stitched back, with a pink cloth, cut into the shape of heart. You see me! Finally!

So here we are in my college, I am doing fashion designing by the way. Can't tell from my clothes! You can't! Well I am still a student okay, learning. And I am only in first year, lot more to learn. Anyways.. Oh! By the way the two girls that I told you about earlier that were walking slightly behind me are my two best friends. Geets and Jits. Well that is what I call them; their real names are Geetanjali, the one with the long hair and Jitendra, the one with the short hair. Yes, Jitendra, you heard right. Don't know what her parents were thinking giving their daughter a boy's name, but it happens.

Now you must be thinking why you are here at my college, because in about five seconds you will see a big black car roll into the college, the door of the car will open and a most dashing and a bit too good looking guy will step out of it. Five, four, three, two, one.. There he is. There he is stepping out, taking off his sunglasses, and acting like he owns the college. Gosh, he is already getting on my nerves; I mean could he be anymore perfect with his good looks and all. Annoying! Now, you must be wondering, why I am talking about him. Oh by the way his name is Arnav, Arnav Singh Raizada. Son of a really big business man, hence their family is very rich. All the girl's in my college day-dream about him.. blah blah blah ..same old story of the rich brat. Do I have a crush on him, you are asking? Ha! No way! I mean, of course I can't deny his good looks or that he is just so dreamy... *sigh* ...but to like him! No way! Never! We both live in completely different worlds, which will never meet. At least that is what I used to think.

Oh yes, why am I telling you about him? Well because, even though I don't know it yet, he is the one I am getting married to.


Okay..there u go!..tht was part 1

and ArHi meeting will be super soon too😃

cuz this was just an intro prt😆

so plz comment and press the like button😃


IF U WOULD LIKE A PM..

-THEN PLZ LIKE THE FIRST POST

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Edited by KaJen_AR_DMG - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cute...The way Khushi fast forwards everything is crack up...LOL😆

Update soon!!!! PS, add me to your PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is completely different style of writing..
love the way khushi FFs everything 🤣
too good...please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i luv the forst person view!! its gr8! waiting for the nxt part and dont forget to PM me!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome concept dear
Plz do continue
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Plz add me to ur pm list

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