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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
awesome ... loved part 3 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Chapter Four : Marriage ?

27 July 2011




Sakshi was on cloud nine .She know her son very well but really scared ,felt insecure what if this past four years had changed him.

And the anonymous calls and all. She trust her son .But what we hear nowadays .When he hold her hand and looked at him, all her insecurities and tension everything gone away , yes he knew what will be his mother feeling and how to sooth her , instead of waiting and go home and inform what he felt he just did it with simple gestures .Ram watched his wife and son , with pinch of Jealousy , they have their own world last 15 days they were fighting not ready to talk each other and now , yesterday Sakshi was warning him to throw him out of house if he not accompanied her today . And he as if a scared boy , irritatingly agreed .But Maan tho Maan hi .When he do something in perfect way. Today his day yesterday he took his mom and he himself had visit beauty parlor . And now , how cute stylish they are looking. Ragini whispered him

"Chachaji Ap Ghar Jakey apney wife ko dekhiye ab tho honey waley bahoo ko dekhiye .."

Ram "that I am trying to see in their eyes"

Ragini gave a confused look Ram cleared pointing Sakshi Happily whole heartedly smiling like she just got some great precious award and Maan totally lost slightly with no expression , full blank face staring at the slender petite girl standing with her Mother

"Ragini beta ab tho shehanayiyam bajengi'"

Ragini was extremely happy .Yes she is going to get a friend.

Thaiji was anxiously looking through the window praying hard .In their house when guests arrive only those who are called only allowed to go in the main hall. Rano was scared so she decided to go with Rano and Geet. In villages they prefer healthy girls like Thani or Tally even though she never mentioned she always scared about the fact that till the date no proposal had came for Geet from The "jaan pehchan waleys " , Even tally is getting every day a new one. But seeing the guests and their daughter in law Ragini she had some hopes. But not much pleased with their behavior , but sheharee people' Neelima's Sasural waley .She controlled on her thoughts "shub shub think , remember what niru's Dad told her in the morning stop comparing .." Usually when guest come the ladies go inside and sit in the second hall , but when they guided these ladies they said , they are ok here , that's why she and Rano also had to come in the Main hall with Geet .Seems Darji pretty cool about things going on .And knowing his character , no wonder For him Beti ke sasural waley means a lot ..

Sakshi " aao beta hamarey pass baito "

Geet tho Geet hi , she remained in her eyes fixed on floor (Thaiji's strict instruction never lift your head up LOL ) and was busy in her thoughts of making funny of the jansi ki raani with his father in night ..

The Ladkey waley thank god took it as her ""sharmaana " which they liked very much , and what's that seeing her shying Maan too felt shy , what the * Maan felt it really odd , why I am acting like this.Oh Man you are loosing it. stop acting like a despo' Ya what I was doing , did somebody noticed me. Oh No thank god Every bodies eyes on Geet only , "Staring at him" session was long over .Next Moment Maan became Maan Singh Khurana , then controlled ithna attitude bhee teek nahee , if they don't give her 'Oops ..Unable to understand his plights and feeling really odd with his ever new confused feelings and feeling "shy" ' Maan shook his head as if to throw away all the weird thoughts running in head and smiled .

Sakshi cant hold it anymore .. Har dhadakan ko vo pehchanthee hi an. signaled Ragini

Ragini stood up and hold Geet's hand and made her sit near Sakshi.


Then Geet looked up and saw Angad's face smiling . "Cute "she thought she know that is not the guy who came to see her and Anmol "Stylish " She warmly smiled at them. In relaxed confident manner To see Maan she has to bent and look ,as he was sitting the other side of Sakshi

{geets character ..a little explanation from my side..

she did not had any urge to see him either, she not given a single chance to that thought , her mind did not let her think about seeing Maan because it clearly knows .. All the courage and order she is showing now will just be shattered , some type of escape mechanism her mind always play with her. When she is in extreme tension , when she feel she cant hold it anymore , that thought will be the last thing in her mind , and she will act really weird. People who do not understand her well , ya ..not many her papaji , tally (not much grown up to understand but still she is some what a replica of Geet , far matured because not being and pampered as single child like Geet ) ..and ..and then him .. Arnav'

Simple example when her daadi died , she shocked , then after 2,3 hours she was asking whether the mangoes they kept for riping is eatable now or not .Chotima really annoyed .. Daadi ne isey ithna pyar diya ..then look , what she is doing' Even 8 year old Tally too was mourning , Thaiji siad .Bilkul bachee hi , Mere dewar kee betii hi Rano ki Nahee . }

( this is the main , crucial nature of her which I could say the soul of the ..not that much u people decide main point of the story story .. Not that much ..but .her this behavior is very difficult to understand for others who don't have similar nature and who don't know her well )

So there she sat confident answering Sakshi politely and well mannered and all the people in her family felt really proud of their "Gudiya" rising to the situation. Brij's Happiness have no bounds .Yes he is very strict brother and Geet scared of him But he love her very much .She is his precious Sister.

Its Ram's time to act seeing his sons , I don't know how to explain how Maan behaved... will try ,One moment he is trying to be Maan Singh Khurana , talking in his head , change style , stare at Geet , the way she speak , and shy ,(manly shy) , and his eyes .desire , passion ..well they knew Maan from childhood , he is his father , For others Maan was acting normally trying to listen what Geet talking .But Maans family , they knew him ..Uff they cant hold laugh anymore Anmol want to pinch and hint Maan but , scared how he will get down from his dream land and what fuss he will make to his action..

Ram politely asked " I don't know its ok or not , our places we will get ..i mean give ... chance to boy and girl to talk a while alone , hope u don't misunderstand me ..if it ..only if it is ok .. Is it ok here then ...shall we.. : "

He don't want this relation go anyway from their hands ,Oh God what will happen to Maan .And Sakshi she will kill me if any mistake from me...oh no..extra double extra careful Ram.

Darji " Oh no problem I can understand its ok .. , Ya Ya .. Aisay idar we don't have such customs everything is changing and only those succeed who accept changes ( this was answer to convince his own family )..but no problem " to every bodies shock .And Darji's purana nazar not missed the tension Mohinder is having nowadays , What he saw in his eyes was not just a fathers simple tension of his daughter's marriage , there are much deeper sorrows hidden ..

Thaiji took Geet to The one side of that big hall , same room course , and Ragini and Maan Followed . They sat there .Ragini Maan and Geet . Thaiji excused herself "I will get tea for you " which poor she forgot in tension already served and the trio too not noticed ..they too under same feeling LOL

*****

Darji "have tea .."

Sakshi don't want any delay only 15 days left ,"Darji ..meeta leliye 'hamey ye Rishtha manzoor hi , "looking fondly at her husband as if to ask permission or sharing her extreme happiness. Mohinder till now scared-ly sitting aside , can't stop the tears of happiness. Brij smiled seeing his Cahchu. He know how delicate Mohinder is .and Geet just like her father , like their face is reflection of their soul..

Darji happily took the sweet offered by Ram and said " Is sey khushee kee bad or kya ho sakthee hi "

As Soon as getting Green Signal from Darji 'Sakshi did not waste a single second.

And Sakshi and all went to Geet Put her Kangan as Shagun .Everybody hugged each other Congratulating and Sakshi joined Rano and Thaiji leaving men behind to discuss further. Eyeing Ram to put forth what she told him earlier.

(I will put Geet ,Maan ,Ragini convo in next update)

Brij confused but remained quiet.

And they discussed.

Darji seems so happy. Before inviting them , Darji had all information about Khuranas. Geet's Thao (Rajinder Handa (60+) ) who was an ex-minister now a political manipulator had all information about them and he is very eager to make this relation work out when Khorana's first approached them. Maan's Thao (Ahem Khurana (60+) ) who was an industrialist and politician was a close friend of Geet's Thao's party secretary ( Shree Hari Om Vinayak Modi ) in that state. And they are big families its not like they let anybody see their daughter just like that , only those are invited, with whom they are ready to tie an alliance. Darji knows his Son Rajinder's interest . The silent agreement he may went on before Maan's family came forward proposal .But this is so common and Khuranas was perfect for Geet according to him and Rajinder will not do anything to bad for the family.

To strengthen the political business relationships rich people used to engross in such marriage alliances , the best unbreakable and most trustable agreements, Ya its very difficult for Mohinder like poor souls to digest and Brij like hard core Pakka peasant to accept .Darji with his experience and he was Sarpanch for many years did not find anything wrong in it .

Not forgetting to mention Ram Khurana was simple business man and he don't have any such super political mind like his brother. He just happy that his brother helping him ..But Maan ..Maan Singh Khurana is MSK .he understood everything and he don't have any complains as long as he is getting what he wants ..

Now when they decided everything both families were happy and Darji requested them to leave after Lunch only which Sakshi happily agreed and , It was totally unexpected for Rano and Thaiji and they rushed in to make everything perfect .Rano don't know what to do happy that , unbelievable ..that her daughters Rishtha going to happen and how to treat the best the potential jamai waley .and surprisingly when Sakshi joined with them saying she will help Thaiji told her now that they became jamai waley she should sit and order only and Sakshi said now they are family its her duty to help them pleasing all. And its all became so natural as if they know each other for years and or like they are already in a relation Thaiji asked "damadji ko kya pasand hi , aap batahyiye .."

To which Sakshi coolly answered her son's Pasand Na pasand bringing tears of happiness to Rano.

Well Sakshi got perfect managerial marketing skills apart from a beautiful and charming personality

Men were went on serious discussions .and Darji asked Brij to make arrangements so that until lunch time , let Ram and the others to have a look on the fields and the orchards ,When Brij came back Sukhvinder ( Mohinder younger brother and Geet's Chacha ) , Ram , Anmol Angad gone out to have a pleasure trip. And to give time to Geet's family to think about discuss about their request. Ram was really tensed. But Sakshi will not agree .she made it all clear that , if Maan like the girl today within no time they has to ask for marriage she want her son to be get married before he go back that is in 15 days time.

Darji asked Brij to join with him and Mohinder.

Darji told them that Maan's family want this marriage in three days and he called his Bada beta Rajinder in no time and was talking him in phone Everything became so serious and hurry burry in no time .

Brij cant control his Anger what are they saying Shadi in Three days ..No way 'Mohinder calmly said .. Its should be done as soon as possible for everyone's good . Darji looked at Pleading eyes , concluded in the phone "ok so whatever we known understood no ..change .."''." ok ..Ok .." ---- "hmm aaj nahee tho kal bhee hi ..tho aaj kyun nahee .." ------"teekey " --------"Thuhmey bhee Mubarak " -------- " Aaj evening ko sab idar honay chahiye..ok ok .."

Briji understood what Darji decided with his father (rajinder is Brij's father )

Darji "ordered.." brij I want you to arrange pandit , and double check the auspicious time they told and all the other you know'

Tomorrow me and Mohinder will inform the families ,Mohinder Rajinder akey Bilo (Thaiji - Rajinders wife ) se bath karengee Thab thak ladies se kuch nahee kahana'"

Brij " Jee Darji ..Jaisa aapk Teek Samjey "

Thus All Settled

Precap : Ragini ..really irritated ' "Maan 'whatever you want to know about Rama Massi I will tell in detail after going home ..now talk ..with Geet ..Ufff '"Shook her head . Geet giggled .Maan pass a fuming glare at giggling Geet ..and ..and ...

Edited by magicia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
congrats on new ff...
interesting though much of concept is not known...
does geet love arnav?
has maan seen her b4 this and where did they c her...
y mohinder refused first and now ok with the marriage...
wats the mystery
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: preethia

congrats on new ff...

interesting though much of concept is not known...
does geet love arnav?
has maan seen her b4 this and where did they c her...
y mohinder refused first and now ok with the marriage...
wats the mystery


preethia i would like to answer about this mystery ..lol but with more updates ..

thank you for liking it ..

its going in a slow pace but it will avoid all teh confusions and ll when it is on its real track ..


Arnav..hmm ..."meim Chup hoon .."
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
congrats on new ff...
thanks for the pm...
till part 4
nice story...
Maan and Geet gonna be married...
good...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome , great start well done keep write thank you for pm


Thank You Very Much For Liking It
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii

awesome updates
loved it
loved da concept
interesting
different
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm


Thank You for feeling its different ..lucky me..and happy too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mariam94

nice update dear
love the concept
thanks for the pm
cont soon


Thanks a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... loved part 3 ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...


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