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Important Notes :

Chapter 7 Updating

Gotcha !...

Chapter Six : Musical

Ok color coding .Thank You Dilsay for suggestion

I will color what I want to say in Green ..I love green

And Geet's ..Thoughts in Pink , not dialogues ..thoughts ..

My Geet is not so feminine yet I will try to give her some pink shades

Maan's thoughts brown

And all the other their dialogues chatting vatting everything in blue

Blue/Its shades is the color I cant stop myself from loving

Old Precap : ( Chapter 5 ).She is cutely Naughty ..Smart Intelligent

Precap: .( Chapter 6 ) he set his second foot in the mud , just to hear her laugh loudly again ..really merrily without any barriers as if her laughter can set all his and her tensions and worries free

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Index ..

Chapter One

I am So tensed (page 1)

Chapter two

They are Here They are here ... (page 1)

Chapter Three

My Daughter is Just Lucky (page2)

Chapter Four

Marriage ? (Page 4)

Chapter Five

Witch in Disguise

Chapter 6

Musical

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Introduction ...

Intro , Chapter One two three waiting for response...Please comment ...and press like button if you like it

Call me magicia ..i am not here to create any magic Lol

Just , I like this Name ..

I don't know how to start .Well this if my very first attempt. Uff Ye Maneet is making me write and one of my best buddies all time request to write a story on Maneet (secret wink wink )

Wish u people like this .The characters nothing related to the serial, only the looks . About story I don't want to say much because

I too don't have a clue what to call all these ha

is pyar ko kya naam doon..

ye rishtha kya kehlatha hi'

because this is the feeling I am getting when I am writing this stuff.

I m not new to FF ,or IF ..this is my id to write ff and get bashed ,get appreciated (I wish ) and get analyzed commented and who knows get blocked too ..and when my friends read this , I want to know their true comments they love me a lot I want their true reaction.I know how much my friends like me , they will just like this post seeing my name only ..even without reading .. and i want true comments ...

Title . You are My life and You are My love

yes You are my life ... and and what to about you .. ha ..you are my love ...confused ..yes thats what she is ...

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Character Sketch :

This area will be modified later ..

Now There is Geet : Dhrashti dhami

Maan: Gurmeet Chowdary

and Arnav : Barun

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note :dilsay Color coding .thank you for your suggestion and first comment sandwiched lol .: After some updates and ..LOL of course getting much "likes: will surely do . Now want to concentrate on updates and steal peoples attention and interest ..

Character sketch ..that will be done later ..

Because now concentrating more on Geets family ..which after 2, 3 may be even 4 more updates not going to have much role , ..

and then thinking about putting something that really can take people's attention ..wink wink..lol that will be coming soon .. but now if i tried to put it in ..it will be great injustice to the story ..

please ..

Thank you very much for all the comments ..and likes

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Chapter One : I am So tensed

Geet Continuously eating jilebies.. Tension was clearly visible.

Thaiji : "Oh god .stop eating Gudiya ' "

she continued as if she did not hear anything .

Thaiji shouted "Geet" ' , Geet stared at her , she is fondly called gudiya by everyone at home but when angry they all remember her real name ..

Talli complained making a face ' Oh god lucky Dee, jithna bhee Khaye ..Kabhee Motee nahee hothee 'she looks always cutie.. " looking her own body bulging , like it will come tearing out anytime, uff it was stitched only a month back and was loose too . She being only 14 feeling really embarrassed seeing her properties ..she once again placed checked her dupatta .Poor girl always very much concious about her prominent curves ,and after she "grew" up really tensed and every other second she make her dupatta in place and catch unwanted attention to that place where it should be not .LOL

Thani Smirked seeing Talli's tension Thani is nineteen

"cute ..u calling dee cute .. U should test your eyes ..poor dee jithna bhee khaye sookhi sookhi ..like skelton .. , poor she look how many inners she have to wear to have some good looks ..oh god I pray ladkeywaley do not insist in wearing saari in marriage .. Blouse and all , how can she wear two padded bra* and blouse 'ooo .."

Making a worried face and pointing at the padded bra* thaiji holding ..Oh man she is so Jealous of her sister .Thaiji clearly know the reason "oh stop teasing her 'u should have seen Rano Chachi that time ..now we will manage ..."

Thani is not easily giving up type " but first night Jeeju will find out na.." oh must watch her face when she said that , really scared like a cute deer

Thaiji cant hold it anymore shouted laughing loudly "chup besharam ..go and help them in kitchen .."

Already bee bitten Geet's face , eyes popped out when she heard last comment of Thani.. And that speeded up the jilebies eating speed murmured .."no way .." swear "I will never let him.. After all I am Geet "

Dolly babhi .."Oho now u girls stop fighting and geet tu ye pehno ..nahee tho pehanadooo.."with all nughtiness she started her non stop teasing.

Geet in jerk took it and went behind the partition to change , she know Dolly babhi well .Everybody laughed.

Dolly babhi started again .seeing Thani coming back and sitting in a thud making a huge face .trailing her hands on Thani's nicely made beautiful hair.

"how long everybody expect Anuraag Babu to wait. Suna hi Vo log Prem Ke liye bhee Rishtha doondna shuru kiya hi Prem tho chota hi na'"

Tally said in sarcastic tone "ha ha Chota Bhai .., 5 mins chota .."

Because she knew what next coming

Dolly seeing her cute bubbly angry face continued

" Thaiji aapko nahee lagtha humko unke madath karney ke liye , vo log hamarey liye kya kuch nahee kar rahey hi ..two boys and dad ..oh when we requested they were ready to wait , sab hamara Thani kee nazeeb hi..Humey unka madath karna chahiye.." when she found Thaiji not getting what she meaning , she emphasized her last sentence looking at Tally ..

Tally instantly snaps " Aap koi Madath nahee kar sakthey ..u don't have any zoo , he will get wife from zoo only "

Thaiji understood , "thum koi bandarnee se kam hi ..teekey thaoji se kah ke thuhmarey hee bath chaladeythey hi .."

Chotima's eyes twinkles ,she was silently making , or I must say struggling to make geets heavy uncontrollable hair .Before her mother in dreamland feed sweets to grandchildren born to her and prem tally snaps "No No don't even think about it.. '"

Completely ignoring with pleading eyes .. She looked in to Thaiji's ..Thaiji blinked assuring what she just said ,admitting she will talk to her husband.

Chotima did a quick prayer "hey bhagvaan mere dono bachiyam will go to same house is sey badee khushee ke baath .."

Tally "u people never notice dhis eyes ..bilkul memdak jaisee , frog eyed bafoon , when he gurtha hi mujey I feel like puke ..eek "

Thani about to burst out of anger "Prem frog eyes at, through which glass u are looking at him .."

Tally "Ya ya ..u will say like this after all they are identical twins , I said his eyes .. Anu Jeeju's eyes don't have any problem sachee only prems " she made a cute face .she really knows how to cool her sister .yes the word Anurag Jeeju was enough for Thani to forget all the fight and dip on her dream land. Seeing her sudden expression change and getting lost geet rolled her eyes and exchanged looks with Tally ,both girls broke in to laughter

Thaiji and Chotima has other thoughts , thaiji asked her plainly "Prem thuhmey gurtha hi beti ..sach sach bol kab .."teasing tone..

Geet Shake her head , laughing .whispering "thutho gayee tally "

Tally " ufff stop everybody sarey ladkey mujey ..nahee nahee ise" pointing her finger to her chest "gurtha hi , ismey meim kya karu "

And went out .

All exasperated a sudden reactionfrom tally , shocking and then fireworks of laughter ..Geet cant stop , for some moment she forgot all her tension.

Yes ladkey waley is coming to see her today for the first time.

In Arnav';s words she is going to be displayed as perfect marriage material today .She irritated why this Arnav name is not wiping out of her mind again again its ..uff I don't want to think about this or him.

Precap : chapter Two : Vo hamse bhee Badey Log lagthey hi 'Sigh

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Chapter two : They are Here They are here ...

Rano seems really happy .She entered with flowers and new dupatta seeing everybody happy she smiled heartily but little scared in her voice said to Thaiji :

Rano: "Jeeji Voices can be herad outside .thank god Darji seems in good mood they aall are cracking jokes ..,after a long time they all seems happily together . Ye ..Ladkee bhee na .." looking disgustedly at Geet , "iskey liye ithna important din hi and abhee thak baal bhee nahee banaya ' ," She took charge from chotima..

Thaiji " Oho Rano thum mere bachee ko kab Daantna chodengey ..jaha bhee jayengey Raj Karengee ..Paree hi mere Gudiya "

Thani " Ha ha raj karengee ..Raja maharaja log koi kaam nahee karengee and der se udengee ..no rules applied to them just they impose rules on others ' what else '"

She really hates how Geet treated in family Gudiya of all, because she is Darji's favorite enjoying all privileges ..equivalent to boys ,no ..must say more than boys in their family , whatever she do nobody questions them ..no special reason , hm ha one may be she is Rano , Darji's favorite bahu and best buddies daughter and Mohinder most educated of Darji's sons, one and only daughter. Or a girl was born in their family after a long time , Excellent in her studies pride of their village. She came state 8th rank in her 10th ,. Whatever Geet was their precious

Rano : 'Acha acha ..aj nahe dantthee .. Meiney kithney mannatheym mangey the is din ke liye , Iska or iska papa ka plans dekh ke mujey lag raha tha ..ye kabhee shaadi nahee karengee'oh ..jeeji ..Apko patha hi na'Sab "

According to Rano a girls life is so simple . Grow up get married have children and take care of the family., That is what she is doing In her life and no complains .."It seems" .She always had the fear ,her innocent I am not for this world type ,poet ,intellect, husband will ever think about his daughters marriage seeing the way he treat with his boyish/girl daughter and plans for her.. Future studies and all .Rano never studied had little clue about what Father and daughter discussing ,but she knew his plan was clearly to go against everything and send her abroad for studies. But achanak all plans changed .. She is having some doubts . But whatever happening is what she always wished and she really did not want to dig more, she knew well , blushing , thinking about her husband , he cant hide anything , she will soon know ..of this sudden marriage plan.But she is not letting this chance to go away from her hand Geet will be get married this very year only .before completing her studies otherwise she know her daughter ..pank nikal aayengee ..and surely flee to have job .and forget she ever had any daughter .

But the most astonishing thing is among this all Geet agreed , yes Geet don't have any objection not even broke a single glass , not torn a single pillow , chup chap here she is sitting ready to get married .

Thaiji : " Sach rano .mujey yakeen nahee hota ye thuhmarey hee beti hi , ye bilkul mera pagal dewar pe gaya hi'..Bilkul bacha '"

Chotima did not want to miss the chance "

Ha ha Yahee tho meim hee soch raha hoon and apsey bol rahee thee , just 2 months before when Thani's Papa talked about Geet's marriage when Anurag babu's rishtha came to Thani and Darji will not allow Thani get married before Geet, What Bhayyaji told . Abhee usko course complete karna hi 4 maheeney hee bach ahi na..please wait 'hmm "really irritated " hamara nazeeb acha tha kee Anurag Babu was ready to wait even when there was no women in tehr family ..,agar un .."

Thaiji: "Ab bas bhee karo .na thum sab settle hoagaya na ab , they are ready to wait Anurag hud thuhmarey Thaoji se vada kiya hi ,And Anu beta himself want some more time he don't want to leave his wife alone here in village , he had some important jobs held up in city uska naya factory ke liye , unke pithaji when jaldee kiya .he came here to talk , He want to marry our Thani only .. "

Thaiji smiled merrily seeing Thani blushing bright red

Thaiji continued " And about Geet's shaadi , and Bhayyaji's decision..Thum janthey nahee Merey dewarjee ko bilkul pagla. Deewana ..vo Kab Kya karey '."Smiling naughtily at Rano..rano blushing , but she is a very strong lady controlling her, hiding her emotions well looked somewhere else, " Kab Kya karey .kiseeko Patha nahee ..And jo log jantehy hi ..vo bathathee bhee nahee '

Chotima Smiled looking at Rano apologetically "Ha ha hum bhee janthey hi Bhayaajee ko..Lekin Ladkiyon kee Ma jo hum . Hamesha tension .and uspe kuch na kuch bahar atha hi . Maaf kardo jeeji " she hugged Rano , thaiji laughe d.Yes knowing chotiwell ..yes yes .until next Fight ..LOL

Chotima " Ab mere yahee prayer hi Ye rishtha ho Jaye , Bade log hi ,Anu Babu knows them personally and Mahalakshmi temple ke pas Jo factory hi na .Vo unka Thao Ka betey ka hi..Khanadan bhee Achey hi ..Or Ladka ithna acha ki poocho math , Anurag Babu had done some course with him .And he always visit his house Lovely family .."

Thaiji "Acha Acha ..ye sab Anu Babu Kisko batahya , Vo tho Yaha aye Bahuth din huey ..Kya Chal raha hi , meim Ghara ke badee hum ..mujey tho patah Chalna hi .."

Thani silently escaped from there. Thaiji Showing fake anger suspiciously looked at her and her mother Choti blabbered , first tried to hide ,then she knows how thez her bhabhi is .."jeeji .Anu thani ko chitty likhthey hi na ..,Mainey pada hi , sab mujey dikhathee hi ..ajkal kee bachee , and u know they never "

Thaiji cant hold it any more LOLed "Oh thum tho besharam beti or daamad kee chitty pad rahey ho'meim mazak kar rahee thee I know girls of my family 'LOL"

Chotima relaxed sighed heavily ."jeeji aap na kabhee kabhee mere Jaan nikal letehy ho .."

Thani Rushed in .." theen Vaddey vaddey gadiaym .. Ambassoder nahee kuch or vadda sa.. And sab ladies ko tho .." panting .."

Hamse vaddey log lagtehy hi ..very rcih looks '" thaiji before ask ..

Tally too rushe din jumping in Joy "they are here They are here "

Rano sighed ." Oh ..i am finished ..looking at Geet , now looking not less than a bride ..

Everybody turned Happy Seeing Geet Thaiji

"mera Bacha ..kisee ke nazar na lagey ".Put kala teeka on one of her dimples ..

Precap : Both boys Laughed Maan Whispered "Pholon Ka Dukan (shop) Coming"

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Chapter Three : My Daughter is Just Lucky

"They are 7 people. The Boy , no a man yes with his prefect dressing it seems he is the boy .Then a huby and wife ,holding hands man around his 30s and the women more than 26 may be around Dolly babhi's age but This sheharee people and their make up. " Geet tried to see the Man , she can see his back only..wait whats that , Does his ear got any problem , what is he put in his ear like his classmate Akash , poor fellow he need some hearing aid .Tally whispered "Dee seems he is behra .. Oh Badey Chachu was talking about this guy ..dee " Geet do not know what to say ..

Tally "Ab mujse Kuch math pooch .. See my hands are wet .. I am really scared .. Don't you see how stylish they are what they will think of us ."

Thani when came behind they did not have a clue. all women when left to welcome "the Ladkey walaey" Thani also followed them. As soon as they left Geet and Tally was peeping through windows to have a glance of the ladkey waley .

Thani " Dee so u too have feelings abhee se tension ,unko pasand na pasand ke barey meim don't worry Aap ko vo log pehley hee dekh chuka hi , and they selected u too ab ye sab tho formalities hi ab ladkey ko dekhna hi , but vo na nahee kahneywaley unka ma jo pasand karthey hi vahee unka pasand "

Tally was staring , with moti moti unbelivable eyes at her sister

Thani "Ab Geet dee kee chamchee u do not stare at me .There anu jeeju sab bathaye hi .. Chittie meim ..ok "

Tally shook her head .chal Geet dee Ye Hamey Pagal Karengee

Geet was shocked ,"when did they actually see me ??"

Tally "Patha nahee lekin apko dekhney ke baad hee apko dekhney aya hi .. Ye Ek month pehley hee proposal lekey aya tha .That time chachu was not interested at all , Ab Kahee se ..Shayad Kiseekey Prayer se achanak unko ap ke shadi ke barey me soonchee "

Thani heard her mother calling her .before going Thani warned Tally " mamma thujse kaha hi , yahee rukh un logon ke samney math aa , ok , ye kehaney ke liye ba saayi thee , lekin mera naseeb .. Pathar ke andar bhee dil hey ye patah chala ..ha aha "

Tally really irritated ,Ek tho uskee pyari Geet dee is in tension.Again her Romantic crazy sisters tea-sings and commands.

Tally : "Geet dee bilkul tension nahee lena .. Bus thani jaisee smile karna kuch poocha ya na pooncha ..dont worry at all "she is more worried about the stammering Geet got when she is in tension , emotion ..people used to misunderstand her of having a permanent stammering problem.

Geet" tally thu tension math dey ..uff mujey vo log kab dekha .., and pasand kiya ..how .. Meim tho bilkul thuhmaree behan vo menaka jaisa nahee hi ..aaj kuch acha lag raha hi' "she checked herself in mirror ,she loved the flowers and jewelry wow ..me too not bad , just wished Arnav could see me now , uff fir us stupid ka Khayal ..No No Geet Concentrate ..if they liked u, and this marriage goes on .. Get married soon ..u will forget That stupid kameena completely ..eek ..Fir stupid ..no no'.

"Tally dekho na , ab meim kaisey lag rahee hoo."

She started to showoff like models , hold pallu oneside, tried to wave it around like hindi film heroines , played with bangles , even shown some dance movements dumkey and all ,after all she wore saari for the first time.. Her mother wanted her to look her little bigger, actually matured .She is 20 still looks like a 15 year old among her contemporaries no flesh and above all she don't know .what is sajna sawarna. .Tally exactly like Geet really enjoyed her sisters crazyness and both girls giggled

Rano Came and really annoyed what she just saw ."ye kab suderengee ..Chall .. Abhee Vo log thujey bula rahey hi.." she once again checked her dress and all , flowers ..Ranos hands were shivering Geet really wondered and amused her mother , not less than a Jansi kee Rani is shivering , what happened ..?? She just wanted her dad near her so that she could show him her mom and have fun .Thinking about her Dad brought the most beautiful angelic smile in her face 'He may be in the Visitors room.

With that thought in her mind she followed her mother , smiling .."hmm wait mom let them go , I am going to tease u with dad , jhansi ki rani "

She forgot all tension '. Right then what was in her mind was her bold mother shivering ..as if the ladkey waley came to see her ..LOL

As soon as they entered the big hall every eyes fell on her , her beautiful smile slowly walking , lest they knew what she is thinking .

Seeing their Satisfied face especially Maan's Handsome face , Happy contented, Rano did not miss the twinkle in his eyes she made quick prayers "My daughter is just lucky , yes he likes her " Rano smiled whole heartedly. Rano is a clever lady though she talks only when necessary she can judge sense people better than anybody. By looking at the faces their smile itself she understood soon her daughters hands are going to get peela ( henna ).

Now Rano back to herself .

Maan was sitting with his two brothers , both his Thao's sons. One elder Anmol (34) than Maan (28) another younger Ranveer(27).They are like friends. They were discussing , no, it was Maan only , Maan was making fun of the various rituals of the village people .Others were merely listening. Maan do not like village at all .he always dreamed of living somewhere outside India .Right now he is studying in UK .LOL ..there is so much to say about his "study"'

He came back from UK just for one month to convince his mom about the job he got there and join But now he is here to get married according to his moms wish . When it comes about his mom , he just cant say no to her .He is the best son any women could get and for him she is everything the Best Mom .When they together sometimes mom becomes Beti of Maan listening to him or he becomes a 10 year obeying his mom .

He heard bangles singing "noise' , extreme fragrance of jasmine , which he don't like much and a small, slim girl coming looking down the floor ..wrapped in heavy worked saari just like going to sit in mandap to get married .Angad said "Bhayya here comes Chachi's Gaon ki gori " both the boys Laughed Maan whispered "Phoolon Ka Dukan coming "

He tried to look in to her eyes intensely. Whatever he shown outside his heart beated so fast as if it come out anytime , his eyes get dark dark deep twinkling in his heart he felt complete he said to himself "finally I met u'''. my girl "

Sakshi knew her son , she know every single change in him. She hold hers son's hand tightly .Both the mother and son looked at each other ,his eyes said all thanks to her in one single blink and she accepted and her eyes said anything for u my son , I know what u want wink...

Precap: Brij cant control his Anger what are they saying Shadi in Three days ..No way 'Mohinder calmly said .. Its should be done as soon as possible for everyone's good

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