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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
definitely sounds like a interesting one Hinal...looking forward to it :)

edit: looks like u got the multi-comment thing figured out...awesome 😊

Thank u sooo much reya

also for helping me out

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Hinal

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
it sounds interesting

thank u sooo much

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Hinal

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PART ONE

Today Maan Singh Khurana was in a hurry to reach hospital.He had to take his dadi,Savirti Khurana for her check up.As they finished the check up dadi went to Khurana Mansion.As Maan was passing by the children's ward he heard a sweet voice singing n he stopped to see who was singing n then he noticed that it was a girl but he could see her face as she had her back towards him.

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As she finished the song she saw that the boy had finally gone to sleep.As she covered him with a blanket someone from behind called her "Geet" n she turned.

As she turned the whole world stopped for Maan for a moment.He just remembered seeing the hazel eyes of the girl but by the time he came back to reality the girl had left.

He then went to his office n got busy in his work n forgot about the girl.

In the evening when he was returning,he stopped at a signal n when he turned to the right he saw the same girl buying red roses.He thought that he was dreaming n turned again to see but till then she had left n he shook his head n went his way.

When he went to dadi's room to give her the medicines he saw that dadi was listening to the same song which he had heard the girl sing in the hospital n got lost in his dreamland.(God if Maan day dreams this much then how much will he dream will sleeping 😲 )

Then later as he went to sleep the girl's eyes kept flashing in front of his eyes n he couldnt sleep so to divert his mind he went to his gym n started doing Tai-Chi.He did till he was completely exhausted n fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow.

Precap-

Their first meeting...

Will it be disasterous or not???

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Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

CONGRATS on the new SS...🥳

loved the prologue...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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edit:

just read part 1...

lovely...

maan just saw her n forgot everything...n now bechara uske baar eme day dream bhi kar raha hai...😆

cant wait for the meet...😳

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Nice part
Man was totally flat the first time he saw her.
Obviously this was geet the total mesmerizing beauty
Loved the way he was totally lost day dreaming.
Destiny made him see her again and again.
wonder what more is in store for them
Waiting for their meeting

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

awesome prologue
loved d concept
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
add me in d pm list
just now read pt 1 awesome 1
bechara maan day dreaming 4m now on
wat will happen in future
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

Edited by ananya95 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

nice concept

sounds promising

pls do cont soon

ty 4 pm

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: jyoti_l
CONGRATS on the new SS...🥳

loved the prologue...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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edit:

just read part 1...

lovely...

maan just saw her n forgot everything...n now bechara uske baar eme day dream bhi kar raha hai...😆

cant wait for the meet...😳

Thank u sooo much Jyo

ya maan day dreaming also

meeting will post soon

love,

Hinal

Originally posted by: cool_gal17
Wow nic stry

Thank u sooo much

love,

Hinal

Originally posted by: sindu555
nice

thank u sana

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Hinal

Originally posted by: Ramhari
Nice part
Maan was totally flat the first time he saw her.
Obviously this was geet the total mesmerizing beauty
Loved the way he was totally lost day dreaming.
Destiny made him see her again and again.
wonder what more is in store for them
Waiting for their meeting

ya maan totally fallen for geet

n destiny will make him see her even more

meeting will post soon

love,

Hinal