My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago

...this 4 u...😛

just ur update...
really ...dear..😃.
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: Me Not Well...That's This shortset comment ever..plzz bother wid me..sorry...
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Sur am so sorry for coming late yaar
Awesome update but painful ...feel so sad for Maan and Geet😭😭😭 but love the poem
Plzzz update asa u can and thxs for the pm lover ya🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy awesome update honey...luvd it plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey good ff read it in one go please update soon i am waiting desperately please pm me when you will update next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello friends... I know I am late but really busy these days ...so here is the update...please like and comment as your comments are really valuable to me
Chapter-18
The hall of KM was decorated beautifully with the combination of pink and white exotic flowers and the rest was done by scented candles. . .

Daadi saw Maan going out so she asked"Where are you going beta?"

Maan replied"Daadi,I have some work"

Daadi "You have done all the arrangements and now you yourself is going. . .sorry you are not going anywhere. . .go get ready I have selected the dress . . ."

Maan replied in anger but more than anger daadi found helplessness in his voice"I wont"

Daadi sighed and said"Jab aapne sacchai samajh hi li hai toh iska samna bhi kariye Maan. . .hum jante hain ye aapke liye kitna muskil hoga but you will have to do this . . .it will lessen the guilt Geet is feeling right now"
[now when you have understood the truth then face it too Maan. . .I know it will be difficult for you]

Maan took a long breath and said"daadi I dont feel like that but I will come on time for your sake"

He left. . .Geet was standing infront of the mirror wearing the dress daadi had selected for her to wear in sangeet. . .

She was coming down slowly with her friends and eyes were glued on the princess who was coming down gracefully. . . .Sid came to her and escorted her to the hall. . . .and behind her Maan came in black sherwani. . .
all girls present their hold their breath on getting a glimpse of Maan who was looking breath takingly handsome but Geet was sad cause she could read the sadness in his eyes...
a girl who was standing beside her mumbled "hai. . .i wish I could take this hotty home"

Maan came near and congratulated them. . . .Sid smiled and said "only wishing is not enough. . .thoda dance ho jaye"

Sid announced "now Maan will start this party with a song"

Maan gave a sharp look to Sid who was smiling at him and said"I wont"

Sid"Come on Maan. . .be a sport. . .and my friend will join you. . .if not for us than for Geet. . .I mean she is your best friend"

Maan looked at Geet and thought if he will show he is enjoying than it may make her feel good if she has taken a decision than its his responsibility to support her. . .Maan replied in affirmation

Sid"but I will select the song"

He pushed Maan to the dancefloor and song played
Maan landed on a girl . . .she pushed him away. . .

Maam hold his ear and followed the girl surprising everyone including Geet

Ab naa tu
Rakhna tu
Mere dil ka yeh
Chota mota haq maar ke
The girl turned and showed him finger . . .He caught hold of her finger and twirled her
Galati se
Galati ki Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

The girl slipped her hand around his neck and leaned closer . . . .Maan smirked at that time she pushed Maan away winking at him
Tujhpe na aitbar mujhe
Fika lage tera pyar mujhe
Main na banaoon dildaar tujhe
Saare sapne te jhoote
Ab tak pyaar ke

sid joined them. . .Maan and Sid stopped the girl
Dil jaane
Rab Jaane
Na khabar pe main tere
Ab dil haar ke
Galti se galti ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere Jhak maar ke


Sid brought Geet to dance floor. . .the girl pulled Sid away and Maan gave his hand to Geet asking for dance. . .she slid her hand in his hand

Jab jab yara dhoondo tujko
Paa loon main khud ko hi
Tu hi hai mera pata Ho..

the girl pulled Geet away and they danced showing thumb to the boys

tujh se ab na mohabbat hai
Teri na mujhko zarurat hai
Meri toh aisi surat hai
Loot jayenge yahan dil haar
ke
Boys turned their collar upside. . .and lifted the girls and after taking a round of hall ignoring the protest made by girls ending up throwing them on floor
Laakhon mein ek main hu
Koi aaye na aage ab iss yaar
ke
Galati se galati ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

The hall was filled by the sound of claps. . .The girl gave a light hug to Geet and congratulated her

Sid introduced the girl to a surprised Geet"Geet . . .dont panic you dont know her but she knows you. . .meet my friend Riddhima"

Riddhima smiled and said"Sorry Geet actually Sid always talks about you so I feel like I know you since ages and you are Maan na. . .hai"

Maan gave a smile and excused himself



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Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jaanu another awesome update love the song and the dress as well
Update asa u can thxs for the pm love ya🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
thankx for pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it ...
wow riddima 's entry r we in for a twist dear?😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!
feeling sorry for bth maan and geet!
continue soon!

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