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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

very nice update

maan was quite understandin an that rahul was quite the jerk


i was actually wondering if there wud be an uproar that Geet didn't let Maan near😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

wonderful update👏...you have portrayed Geet's emotions so well - her fear, her shyness, her vulnerability, her faith - its been amazing.


Loved how Maan tried to pacify Geet ... he has loads of patience and strength/presence of mind...
loved how Geet confessed to having made Maan feel that she doesnttrust him...and Maan's kiss was very very cute...this guy is really something

loved your update...keep updating soon😳


thank u...Maan is slowly edging forward...making his place in Geet's heart...first the caress, now the kiss😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Wow the first part was so very dreamy and the song was superb.Can't help but sing along when we hear it. It was lovely imagining Maan singing the song. And the second part was so touching. Now Maan knows for sure that there is some secret in Geet's past which has made her so wary of all men. I particularly loved the last bit...Maan putting his finger to his lips and then touching Geet's cheek and Geet touching her cheek...Awww I could only imagine GC and DD in that scene...Thanx for the superb update and also for the pm.



exactly...that's why i made him croon the song, which may have looked unrealistic otherwise...the great MSK singing😆

we knw he wished to kiss her...but in the present situation it wud have looked odd...and this way he did have his wish satisfied somewhat...nd if u notice he is gaining her confidence...she let him caress her cheeks, hold her close in the dance floor...now a kiss well sort of😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: undisclosed

awww geets past came back to bite her in the form of rahul...i loved the way maan handled the situation by calling sam..and his tenderness with geet kills me...geet is like a cute doll...loved the update bindu👏


actually i was a bit unsure hw the reaction wud be ...abt geet not letting Maan comfort her...thank u... i hav a hidden agenda there...seeing Geet in this condition Sam will do her best to support Geet
Maan , a man to die for😆

Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
love how ur creating such mesmerizing
to make maaneet closer
i'm glad maan came to the rescue
my instinct were wright in her past
someone a buse her that why she scared of
men but trust maan sooner or later
she i'll pour what in her heart to maan
simply awesome
love it core
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago


Bindu di ,
for keeping the request of the dance aequence between Geet & Maan 🤗.
So kind of you to dedicate 2 updates on their love 👏
Their dance was Flawless followed by Possession of Maan over Geet & his rage on Rahul was like my all dreams coming true regarding the chemistry of Geet & Maan.
The update catered to me visually so it was nothing less than a treat 👏 👍🏼

Fantastic updates Glitter StarGlitter StarGlitter StarGlitter StarGlitter Star
Thanks again for keeping the request & the pm Glitter Rose

(p.s. sorry for late comments ; was buried with my Uni assignments)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



Bindu di ,
for keeping the request of the dance aequence between Geet & Maan 🤗.
So kind of you to dedicate 2 updates on their love 👏
Their dance was Flawless followed by Possession of Maan over Geet & his rage on Rahul was like my all dreams coming true regarding the chemistry of Geet & Maan.
The update catered to me visually so it was nothing less than a treat 👏 👍🏼

Fantastic updates Glitter StarGlitter StarGlitter StarGlitter StarGlitter Star
Thanks again for keeping the request & the pm Glitter Rose

(p.s. sorry for late comments ; was buried with my Uni assignments)



Maneet in a party nd no dance!! actually i hadn't decided on it...but then cudn't disappoint my buddies ...so glad i cud transfer my imagination to urs...
good luck with ur assignments...

Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan should have put more damaged to that b*****d Rahul!!!! how dare he try to impose himself on Geet.
love the scene when Maan put a 'kiss' on Geet's cheek, so gentle & beautiful, can't wait for more tender moments between them..this time maybe a real kiss on the cheek 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bangalores



sweetness again...thinking along the lines of the scan...when😕

bhagao guests ko ghar se bahar... aakhir majority wins... hum readers ki importance n number dono zyada hai... kyu??😆😉
kiddin!!!... take all the time u need... but I want beech beech mei dhamaka.. ki Maan ko lage ki kudi haanth nahi lagegi shayad uske... should make him feel that people try to impress him and he is travelling heaven and earth just to make sure she doesnt have a slight crease on her face and yet he isnt sure if he stands a chance... will make him frustrated and he will attempt desparate measures then... like taking her on tour with him so she has to completely depend on him for everything(frankly this should would be an apt situation when he is married to her n they still not confessed)... or maybe another idea could be he gets angry with her when he feels that he is losing himself to Geet which is wrong according to him... anyway, the x-rated thoughts he has had in the party, there should be a scene where he should feel frustrated that "ye ladki mujhe badal rahi hai" ... makes for the quintessential Maan - who doesnt like even an inch worth change in his behavior or environment!!!
scan will seal maan's feelings for geet and baby is what I feel! n he needs a dual between heart and brain before putting this seal where heart wins! Maybe culmination to the dual will be the scan!! :-)
Edited by Mrs.MSKForever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
but I want beech beech mei dhamaka.. ki Maan ko lage ki kudi haanth nahi lagegi shayad uske...

hai we think alike...was thinking of putting forth a competition for Maan...ye GHSP wale shayad hi de, lekin mujhe to competition pasand he😆...he will make an entry within a couple of updates😉

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