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libra25

@libra25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

awesome marvee..
but the precap is scary..
i hope dev does not create a prob...
and she is not the first...matlab and last i am scared now...
plz continue soon

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holyangel

@holyangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

new introduction.. DEV... his thought.. seems to b scary in future... hope he dont hurt maan for geet or try to hurt Geet... or creating misunderstandings ... but can b intresting as this can show how much maaneet love n trust each othr...

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YusLiz

@YusLiz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

I sense a good angle here with Dev having desire for his bhabi. thought you'd finished off ur update with "a pair of jealous eyes have been watching them since she first ran out to the balcony, all the while wishing that it was his lips, his hands, his manhood that is ravaging Geet. he knew he should look away from their private moments but he couldn't and as much as he love his brother, a tinge of hatred was building up in him knowing how lucky Maan is right now".

sorry got carried away, this is what happens when u write FF so beautifully! it inspires the writer in all of your fans 😛

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

ahhaa that was something really Romantic...Keep it up

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Jennifer

@jennifer1993

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Awsome update yaar loved it

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Ur precap is scaring me

Maan agar aise manayega toh for sure Geet cant be angry with him for long

Im nt liking Dev

I feel he is gng to bring trouble in between Maaneet as he is attracted to Geet

Loved Maaneet moments

Dadi is fab

Love her

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Zooni Begam

@ZooniBegam

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Wow wat a update!!
U made me blush like hell!!( my face is still so red as I write this)
oh what us this dev up to...
Does he have brains cause those who have wil noe that it's maan ki geet and vice versa!!
Anyway I love this part!!
Continue writing..
Thx for the pm!!

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fawzia jahan

@katerpillar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

long n steamy hot.☺️..loved it...cont soon...😃

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am_sweet_pari

@am_sweet_pari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

just read the precap now again and it's really scary
pls don't make maan told lie to geet
maaneet's relationship is pure, divine, true, they r soul mate
pls continue soon