ArSh Fic*Arranged Lovers* |ON HOLD| IMP NOTE pg45

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Laila.N

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Comment edited page 5 😳

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

wow lovy dovy update so cute love ARSH .

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Awe how sweet loving the shy but then bold feelings around armaan and shilpa and awe they both said I love you and shared a passionate moment which got cut off by the ring of the phone lol and haha both guilty about it but they're too cute and liked the last part where he asked for a hug and both where being comfortable around each other anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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fri42911

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

lovely part.

eagerly waiting for next part.

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nightstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

hey ...sry i dnn knw ur name...newaz u did a cul job...esp the way arsh cleared the confusion...but plz make it a lil mushy and lil cozy nest time..i am not hinting towards any full on physical stiffs,but just create a mushy and warm and cozy atmosphere and aura...i loved the gud night scene..ezp the peck and hug...plz cont supersoonn,...its an order this time..and let me knw when u will update the next part

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arooshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

its so nice

such an innocent love story with so much sweetness

loved it to the core

please update soon

waiting eagerly for the next part

dont forget to pm me please

pls jaldi update karo pls

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Rupa Roy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

awesome part...
luv it...
waiting for the next part
update soonnn ...

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madhuri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

amazing update...

both are so much cute...

ahhh yes they are getting comfortable with eachother

thats awsome

aaahhh eagerly waiting for their first kiss...

update soon...

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MysticalRealm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

I am knocked into KaSh land and I cannot come out!
This was one of the best ArSh writings I had read!
This is really so pure, divine and innocent!
Really wonderful job!!