Loving With Closed Eyes- Maaneet - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Amazing dear, loved it. Really geet has 6 senses that's the reason she was able to recognise the maan was following her and also would like to know soon what has happened in geet's past, do update the next part soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Lovely part
loool maan thinks 'there is a spark' already😆
i like preeti she is protective over geet 😊
geet realised she was being followed she is so smart 😳
i wanna know geet's past
looking forward to the next upd8
continue soon
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Loved the update. Preeti is a great friend. Haha, Katrina. Lol thanks for the update and PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

PART 3
The next day, Maan came again to the coffee shop and chatted with Geet.
Maan- I'm the MD of Khurana Constructions.
Geet- Khurana Constructions? You mean THE Khurana Khaandan?
Maan laughed.
Maan- Yeah. THE Khurana Khaandan.
Geet smiled.
Geet- I hear alot about you on TV.
Maan smiled.
Geet- Did you know that one of your brothers was in my high school.
Maan- Really? Who?
Geet- Vicky Khurana.
Maan- Oh vo. Vo to pagal hain ladka.
Geet- Accha? How dare you say that about Vicky! He was the person who would make me laugh all the time! We were best friends.
Maan- Were? Fir kya hua?
Geet- Oh well he shifted to New York remember?
Maan- Oh yeah. He stayed with me there too in my Flat.
Geet- Nice.
Maan- Yeah and then after the 9/11 attacks, we moved to Miami and I guess you guys lost communication from there right?
Geet nodded.
Maan- Sorry about that.
Geet- Why are you saying sorry?
Maan- Vo actually, I told Vicky to stop talking to his friends and start concentrating on studies. I broke his phone and I threw his diary in the fireplace.
Geet was shocked.
Geet- Oh well that's alright. Atleast let me talk to Vicky now.
Maan- Of course. Vicky is currently in London for some work at the business over there, he'll be back in 2 weeks, we can go meet him.
Geet- That'll be nice.
Maan- Does he know that...?
Geet- That I'm blind? I don't think so. I became blind after I graduated from High School. We were friends while I was in High School.
Geet continued making coffee for a customer and then started talking to Maan again.
Geet- So what about your family?
Maan- Ok, well I have 2 brothers, Vicky and Dev and 1 sister, Annie. And then there's my parents and Dadimaa.
Geet- That's nice.
Maan- What about you?
Geet-Uhmmm...I...I live with my Nani.
Maan- Oh and brother and sister? Mom, Dad?
Geet had tears in her eyes. Nani noticed this and came to Maan.
Nani- Vo Maan bete, aap koi snack lenge? Cake, cookies? Humne fresh banai hain.
Maan- No thanks Nani Ji. Actually, I better go take my Dadimaa to her Doctor's appointment. See you tomorrow.
Nani- Bye bete.
Maan- Bye.
Maan looked at Geet.
Maan- Bye Geet.
Geet smiled.
Geet- Bye Maan.
Maan left and Nani looked at Geet.
Nani- Tu use sab kuch batade.
Geet- No Nani. I can't. Not yet. You know what has happened to me.

2 weeks later
Maan would get coffee and talk with Geet everyday. They had a strong bond and Geet even started developing strong feelings for him.
Geet- Aap bahut acche ho.
Maan smiled.
Maan- Janta hoon.
Geet- Mere saath bahut kuch ho chuka hain Maan.
Geet touched Maan's shoulder.
Geet- Main aur dukh bardaasht nahi kar paongi. Please, hamesha aise mere paas, mere dost rehna.
Maan held her hand gently yet passionately, showing his care and ensuring her he will always be there for her.
Maan- I promise, I will always be there for you.
Geet smiled.
Maan- Accha main chalta hoon. Main kal aaonga.
Geet- Ok, Bye.

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Precap- The entry of Vicky Singh Khurana!!👏👏
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Edited by iluvblue0812 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
awsome yaar ...loved it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesome update geet starting to love maan and maan also has fallen in love with geet entry of VSK hope he would bring maaneet more close
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Wonderful update...👏

Maaneet scene was nice..⭐️

Hope vicky will make maaneet closer😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Lovely update yaar.
Im so glad to see these two's bonding :)
Vicky ala re :)

Cant wait for the next part ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
I love the cute relationship Maan and Geet have :)

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