MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 48

Originally posted by: sangi1588

To start with, this was a complete surprise and what a surprise, I mean Jazz you are fantastic. Every human can being imagine , visualize things, but not all can express them as wonderfully as you do. You are exceptional with words. Loved the way you summed up the three years of their lives, and what a wonderful three years it was. It was like seeing a movie, with a background song going on.. and the scenes are just moving along. Absolutely brilliant.

You are the queen of visuals among us Sangs!! Every song you have made a VM on is now become your song for me...I have forgotten the originals.

Next, we come to.. the relationship between Maan and Geet. They are so comfortable, now that Geet calls him to discuss ideas and stuffs. Loved Geet's dialogue. Love is different for different people. I completely surrender to this line. Totally loved the way Maan expresses his love, When your heart cries out for their heart; like calls to like and every part of you has a reflection in them.

The most awesome confession I have ever read, that was adorable. I was like Aww..the whole time..it was so magical and pure. I could clearly see, what it must have been like. Raining, they both standing there..Aww..such a perfect confession..

For every dream you have stood behind, I lost a part to you, of what was mine. And for every dream that you will stand along, only to you shall I forever belong.

This line just made me numb. Jazz.. It was such a treat for us readers, to enjoy your writing. I truly wish you keep on writing more and more. No words beyond that. It was just awesome. Thanks a lot for this lovely SS , Jazz. Thanking you is not enough, I know I know.. A tight wala hug from me 🤗🤗 Love you loads dear.. and Keep Rocking..😎

Aww...Thank you guys for being such an awesome support🤗🤗

PS: DQ , i saw that special message to the AGians.. Can we do the elaborate discussion through PM here or AG.. I am so very much interested. I strongly feel, there is some personal experience to write such a wonderful expression of LOVE 😉 Jazz, do you want to clarify/ confess anything here 😉

Here? lolz...if you guys are so keen to grill me, lets move to AG. But let me inform you it will the case of khoda pahar nikli jazz🤣

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

nice epilogue

Originally posted by: undisclosed

the epilogue of all epilogues👏👏👏...wow what a way with words you have...just left me with out any😳...i loved it!

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

The most beautiful and different epilouge have ever read !!! Loved how you showed the time that passed with an gradual increase in emotions and attachment !!!

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

fantastico ⭐️

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Jaz...thanks 4 da pm n awesum fabulous n wonderful epilogue! Loved it. The end was beautiful. Maaneet's journey over the years was well written! They got closer n spent tym with each other! Geet's confession was superb! U r an amzing n talented writer⭐️! Thanks 4 a lovely Maaneet SS! 👏

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

aww jazz u r soo sweet.

thank u for such a nice epilouge. it trruly depics the harmony of their blessed life.

how intellectual and eloquent maan is...well that's u'r created maan so it's a given

Originally posted by: uglyduckling_f

Awww !!! i love this ff...jst love this Maan!!! hes truly dreamy here...😳😳

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved the epilogue! The way you showed their journey was amazing! :)