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Posted: 14 years ago
Jazz...Ek tight wala hug 🤗
Awesome Jazz...just loved the Poem, you are just fab ji...
And it is indeed very sad, that Geet has to go through all this. Why is the girl child made to suffer like this , yaar. This really pisses me off at times, while in India, i have dealt with many such cases. Family pressure or a girl cant chose what she wants in her life. Very disappointing..Hope someone in the family supports her.
Maan is such a sweetheart , kadoos hai par dil ka sachcha hai..😳

PS: Ringa ringa roses
Maan bus-stop pe maare poses!! 🤣🤣

OMG ...I was LMAO reading this comment of yours...🤣🤣


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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗...thnx 4 giving us such a nice ff...keep writing...loving it...❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
That poem was so good Jazzy...So, Maan's stalking helped him realize the passion she has for writing and now he will swoop in and rescue the fair maiden 😳 I liked how u addressed the distinction b/w girl and boy with regards to the expectations

Nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille

I had reserved a post. I know I had!! Damned cell phone internet!! Grrr. 😡


The treatment to girls that you explained is something I see everyday around me ...It's so deeply ingrained in the Indian Mentality - it sucks!! 😭The gender itself implies doom and failure to most - and it Sucks!! Thanks Jazz for writing that!

Did somebody mention Georgette Heyer???? Who was that???
I love them - and If this FF is about to be influenced by it - then you have the readiest of fans in me!!! 😃

So finally the title comes into light! Jazz I loved it!! 🤗

Welcome to the Georgette Heyer fan club... Chhote... one more member here... 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


You did not write "cathartic"😲 *reads the word again* Lol...it reminds me of my brother🤢🤣

Oh-kay...no...jokes and my bro apart...thank you Ustaad!!😃

Maan-that-should-have-been never came across as one who would go all mushy and soft. He would see things set straight but in his own determined manner, right?

Glad you liked the poem. Am not very proud of it🤔 But I plead "fever" 😆

Haw!! Why all 🤢🤢🤢 at cathartic?? while i think we are all fortunate at not having been suppressed either in terms of education or opportunities.. there is definitely a grain of truth in Geet's predicament in terms of the over-arching societal pressure of conforming to the larger 'code' or 'prototype' of the Bhartiya Nari...
Which is to say the 'randoms' (= everyone else who is NOT a part of your family, yet amazingly have more power over them than they do over their OWN family😆😆) can hold you to ransom at a smile withheld, at a conversation louder or more sarcastic than deemed neccessary, at a spontaneous or 'irresponsible' moment enjoyed, at an 'answering back' at the menfolk, at a questioning of rituals deemed sacred, at a thought or moment stolen for yourself before the 'man in your life' or your 'child', at a house less than perfect, at a sacrifice eschewed... AND you will find the family making excuses and apologies on your behalf... 😕😕😕
And yup to the other second point...
The third point...? Coleridge wrote Kubla Khan when he was stoned... which is to say he was in a state of delirium... the best stuff comes out then, coz the conscious mind is not strong enough to rein you in... so yup... it was awesome stuff!! ClapClap
Uff! Long post as usual... i really need to stop 'vomiting' out every single thought that comes to mind!! 😆😆😆
Love Ustaad
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille

I had reserved a post. I know I had!! Damned cell phone internet!! Grrr. 😡


The treatment to girls that you explained is something I see everyday around me ...It's so deeply ingrained in the Indian Mentality - it sucks!! 😭The gender itself implies doom and failure to most - and it Sucks!! Thanks Jazz for writing that!

Did somebody mention Georgette Heyer???? Who was that???
I love them - and If this FF is about to be influenced by it - then you have the readiest of fans in me!!! 😃

So finally the title comes into light! Jazz I loved it!! 🤗


Thanks amruta!

Georgette Heyer😆 She made an appearance in Chapter 3. I just had to pay tribute to my favorite writer!! And then me and my sakhis are die-hard fans of her it would keep coming up throught this thread😆

Yeah the title finally comes to light and will completely come so at the end, which is about 2-3 chapters away.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

Jazz... that was fantastic... and stop saying you're not a writer ... this thread clearly shows that you are 👏⭐️👍🏼


Oh well😳😳

Thank you.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

lovely...


she wants to write but is unable to do so...

but maan would give her a chance...he would do everything possible to make her dreams come true...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...


Thanks a lot! :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sangi1588

Jazz...Ek tight wala hug 🤗

Awesome Jazz...just loved the Poem, you are just fab ji...
And it is indeed very sad, that Geet has to go through all this. Why is the girl child made to suffer like this , yaar. This really pisses me off at times, while in India, i have dealt with many such cases. Family pressure or a girl cant chose what she wants in her life. Very disappointing..Hope someone in the family supports her.
Maan is such a sweetheart , kadoos hai par dil ka sachcha hai..😳

PS: Ringa ringa roses
Maan bus-stop pe maare poses!! 🤣🤣

OMG ...I was LMAO reading this comment of yours...🤣🤣



Sangs 🤗

Sometimes even the families need a jolt to make them realize the potential their daughter has. Someone else to shake them up and make them see what their child is capable of.

As for this:
Ringa ringa roses
Maan bus-stop pe maare poses!!
I can't help but slip into my vahiyaat mode 🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: katerpillar

🤗...thnx 4 giving us such a nice ff...keep writing...loving it...❤️


Thank you 😊

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