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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan got to know her dream so as we finally.. The poem..u need not be apprehensive cuz it's more than perfect. I've no words more than that 2explain the poem..may be i'll send u a PM ;). The tenderness n care of Maan makes me respect him so very much. And 4 a gal like Geet who wishes 4 li'l support,who stood alone all along..wat else she wud wish 4more than Maan who'd already become her support system without her knowledge! Every word of Geet..i wud say well chosen words 1depict the exact emotion. Its funny how the love 4daughters will always be under an apprehension..under some rules u wud impose due 2 love care r overprotectiveness but we often forget that only love n trust can strengthen a relation. Anything other than love will only weaken da bond. I kind of pity Geet's parents here as they chose da wrong way. May be if they wud've trusted their daughter a bit more she wud've been a bit happy,a bit certain a bit confident n she might not've been aching 4 love. But then again as they say its a cycle..she had difficulties n hence she'll n have 2 face happiness in future.thats da law of nature. Isnt it? N i can c her happiness is somehow bought by Maan. N then i've 2talk abt pinky. Did i tell u i love her? She's one of da best characters in this ss. Ofcourse all characters r awesome..dadi n pinky r however my favorites. Especially pinky..she's da one who can blabber non stop,tease her frnd yet will be da one 2understand Geet inside out. Ppl will be real blessed 2have such frnds in their life..what else one wud need more than such loving ones especially for Geet who are craving for love n support? I luv luv loved it. Continue super soon. Ps: the photoshop thing was awesome. Came out so naturally :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Jaz...thanks 4 da pm n fabulous update. Poor Geet...cannot pursue her dream. Hate her family! Y da different standards!! Maan wanting to help Geet! At least Geet cld talk to Pinky. update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update Jazz...😳

Most beautiful parts in it:
All I want is to give words to emotions...Its not easy to do so...😊

Earn a degree & getting well settled groom is not everything that all girl wants & dream about..😳

I love this Maaneet too...

And last most imp thing u didn't PM me...😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

OMG!!! you are a Rocker tooo... CONGRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗


Congrats Preethi...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update soon n ppplzzz do pm me plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

nice update, please update soon


Thanx, will do.


Thank you.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved the update! I wonder what Maan wrote? That was awesome!


Hope you're feeling better now!


I am better, thanks.

What did Maan write? Well even I don't know yet😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Awww Chhote!!! What can i say...?

This quiet, submissive , unassuming girl is turning out to be that hidden person inside all of us... squashed in a society that knows no individual dream, only the collectivist path... where blending in is revered and standing out is tabboo...
Beautiful, sublime and... cathartic...😆😆
Way to go Chhote... 👏👏👏
PS: I LOVE this Maaneet... THIS is what the original Maaneet was... Maan, brusque but ever ready to support an unfulfilled dream, egging on where others fall back... Sigh!!!
PS 2: Beautiful poem by Geet
PS 3: i hope you are well now!! 😊😊


You did not write "cathartic"😲 *reads the word again* Lol...it reminds me of my brother🤢🤣

Oh-kay...no...jokes and my bro apart...thank you Ustaad!!😃

Maan-that-should-have-been never came across as one who would go all mushy and soft. He would see things set straight but in his own determined manner, right?

Glad you liked the poem. Am not very proud of it🤔 But I plead "fever" 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi

😭 I had tears in my eyes Jaz when i read this. Not all are fortunate like us to have parents who treat us no different from our brothers.😭😭

I cannot fathom how it feels to be in circumstances where you have this kind of partiality because of gender.. I feel suffocated😭 The very reason why i was so impressed with the character of "geet" in the serial. She had everything but she had nothing... 😭 Noone to call as own in her family..😭
Why is the society so biased to women?😭😭 Why do they forget that they were nutured and they flourished in a wmoan's womb for 9 months...😭 EVERYONE for that matter... Its a disgrace that we pray Godesses and call India as "Mother" India but still fail to give equal oppurtunity and equal rights to women... Still we are fighting for 33% quota in parliment. There are girls who have to quit studies just because the boy of the house has to study...😭😭 Its painful...
Wonderful and awesome update dear. Hope Maan stands by her... not expecting romance or anything just as a support which she never had... Roamance is just side effect... Please continue soon...


It happens all around us. We are the fortunate few. Sadly it will take a whole long while till things get better.

@bold...hold on that thought😉

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