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Posted: 14 years ago
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ONLY 4 PAGES OF RESPONSE OUT OF SO MANY PM
😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramahesh

great part
pls continue soon

thankyou will be updating shortly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi all
i am updating this part with a heavy heart
as last update out of 200 pm only 20 ppl bothered to comment.
i have kept it short as i could not write much after such a response
here it is..
enjoy reading and plz dont forget to comment

Part 3:

Later that afternoon a fully recovered Geet sat on the sofa eyeing her frnd meera who was continuously on phone rushing around the room. When a knock sounded at the door.

I will get it . Geet said

Geet opened the door and found a huge bouquet of white roses being thrust forward. She immediately noticed that the card was addressed to Meera and presumed that the flowers must be from the perfectly romantic Dev.Taking the flowers in hand she was surprised when the delivery boy did not wait for a tip and went away

Wow. Meera exclaimed , hanging up the phone. Who are they for?

Well who do you think? She said with a laugh. This isn't my room

Meera opened the card. And gasped

What?

We have been invited to penthouse for dinner

I did not know that dev lives in penthouse

He doesn't

Then who.?

Meera handed her the letter

Geet read the note.

The managements regrets the unfortunate eventof this morning. Please accept this expression of our sincerest best wishes for your sppedy recovery. We would also like to extend a invitation to both of you for dinner in the penthouse suite this eve at 7

Geet looked up at meera's bewildered expression

A bit too much for a broken handle.

I cant imagine such a welcome afterall those things I said downstairs

Well I guess that worked.. both laughed

Oh its already 5 chal get ready.

But I don't have any clothes here

Wear mine

You know I don't wear that short clothes like yours

Ufu baba wear the... ummm wear the red one it's knee lenghth

6 30 both were ready when meera 's cell rang

After she hung up.

Problem?

Umm geet wo dev is back in town I have to go

Oh well

But you are going right?

All by myself? You expect me to go sit with some stuffy old hotel manager who will keep on praising his hotel while you dine with your ever so romantic mr perfect

Ho gya . we cant say no you have to go now

But me waha karo gi kia?

Just eat and then come back to my room ye le mere room ki extra key?

It isn't my style.

Look they are really trying to make amends here I bet that maintainence guy must have told his boss about the door handle what was his name

Maan geet said absentmindedly and you should not have talked rudely with him it was not his fault.

Meera smirked that's the first time geet has ever bothered to remember a guys name.let alone defend him yeah maan anyways just go and enjoy yourself

Ohkay

I will go

Meanwhile..

Ha bolo

I don't know it's all messed up..

Kia hua

You wont believe

Aha

...
Hmm come over here we will sort it out
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Why am I not surprised..

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When are you coming

Next month I am winding things up

Hmm ok.

Precap:

dinner

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
hmmm maan seems a mistery to me...loved it...dont discontinue tis ff plzzz...do continue soon...
Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow! Management sending dinner invitation! Hmmm I guess I know who is behind this😆 and Meera thinks it's some stuffy manager! If only she knew ( I hope I am right, keeping my fingers crossed)😊

And Samra, plz do update this ff soon. I love it! And don't lose heart. I am sure there are lot of people here who love ur ffs. This is for all the wonderful work that u do.🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

nxt time u better give longer updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please update soon! thanks for the update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KamalikaG

Wow! Management sending dinner invitation! Hmmm I guess I know who is behind this😆 and Meera thinks it's some stuffy manager! If only she knew ( I hope I am right, keeping my fingers crossed)😊

And Samra, plz do update this ff soon. I love it! And don't lose heart. I am sure there are lot of people here who love ur ffs. This is for all the wonderful work that u do.🤗

thankyou so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, great update! Please don't stop this FF! I love your FF, its great! Continue soon and thanxs for the pm
Saba xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update..who was maan talking to...contineue soon

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